THE MISSING

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  1. HelloColdWorld

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    much shook c;
    Thank you Spirits! I do sometimes pull out some good one liners :D
    Is would be more accurate about Robyn :)
    Thank you Raya! Emily and Freya are two of the closest in the groups, and Robyn is very much loved (by me).
    </3
    Thank you! big rip
    More is here!

    CHAPTER TWELVE IS OUT!
    Characters in the chapter
    Clarissa Ada Young / Queenie - @HelloColdWorld
    Emily Sunshine / Solar - @GlowingLights
    Iris Hearth / Sorrow - @Auruh
    Alex Silverfeather / Omega - @Wolfy
    Naoko Nakamura / Silent - @Glowy
    Freya Hilton/ Plums - @Jeon Jungkook <3
    Leviathan Inges / Cat - @BewareOfBori
    Leslie Jimenez / June - @Pinxxie
    Colin Davidson / Ocean - @PumpkinSpicedPepper
    Jules Burke / Truth - @AJules
    Kyo Kizokunashi / Princess - @Azamii
    Charlotte Anders / Arrow - @hecccing
    Karter Fontaine / Robin - @HuskyInAHat
    Robyn Winchester - @HelloColdWorld

    Thank you for your patience for yet another slow chapter. This is quite long but we get to learn about our newest character Robyn, and also some fun tidbits about our original characters that I forgot to add in earlier chapters (facepalm). Hope you enjoy!
     
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    AHHHHH!
     
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    Robyn definitely fits in with members of the group like Clary and Jules. Loved this, as always!
     
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    dramatic wheeze aAAA yES yES thIS iS amAZINGG!
     
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    I love it. I love it. I want more of it.
     
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    Rip colins confidence. Also i can sense a friendship growing between colin and robynnnnnnnnnnn ahhhh great chapter
     
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    Btw Cold, I would add Robyn onto the character list ;)
     
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    bump
     
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    appears aha bump!
     
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    Cold you really need to give me writing tips
     
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    :)
    Thank you!
    I'm glad you liked it!
    Thank you, Wolfy
    Thank you!
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    I can supply if you need it :)

    This isn't a chapter release, unfortunately, rather this is some information. While writing The Missing, I began to realise that 14 main characters is a very large amount. And I've also begun to realise how little I've catered to that. So about a month or two ago I decided to rewrite the story with a fraction of the characters, 8 to be exact. Due to this, I've had little motivation to write this one (and generally motivation to write anything at the moment). So it seemed to me a good idea to let you guys all know this and see what you think of it. I know many of you would prefer if I continued this with all 14 but I just felt you guys didn't deserve to be in the dark about this. Thanks for reading!
     
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    I actually wouldn't mind that idea at all! I feel as if the story would still be amazing <3
     
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    Do whatever feels best! How would you choose the characters?
     
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    Honestly, I think you should finish this run-through of the story first. It can give you a scaffold of sorts for the remake. Of course, it's your choice.
     
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    Can't wait for it! ;)
    (the redo I mean)


    Love you!
     
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    Thank you, Bori!
    I've already selected the characters, there would be eight characters from the original fourteen and then Robyn as the new member.
    I tried that idea with the most recent chapter I wrote but I don't particularly like the structure of this story frankly because there isn't one. With the rewrite there would be a more structured approach to the story which I think will maximise details and descriptions of the story and characters. So in all honesty, I don't think I'm able to finish this one, hence why I'm posting this all now.
    Thank you, Wolfy!
     
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    I'm a bit curious on who the characters are-
     
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    Ditto.

    I think if you are more comfortable with reducing the characters, then do it! You are the author after all <3
     
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    Makes sense. You're the writer, so you do what you think is right.
     
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    I kinda want to keep it a secret if I get around to properly writing it ;)
    Thank you! It would definitely help a lot with fewer characters :)
    Thank you, Raya :D

    In the following month or so, I will try and write a prologue and first chapter of the new version of The Missing. If I like where it's going then I will consider posting it here, in this thread, so I would be grateful for any little bumps along the way and I will do some updates as well to keep the thread alive. Thank you all for your support and for helping me with this decision and I hope to see The Missing 2.0 meet PZ!
     
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