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THE MISSING

Discussion in 'Stories' started by HelloColdWorld, May 17, 2018.

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  1. Bori

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    m y b a b y gasp
     
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    Surprised I made it in considering I was the most boring character, but anyway great chapter lol
     
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    Cold, its official. Im in love with you. THIS IS SO GOOD i automatically feel so much more connected with all the characters than I did before, and the writing was as beautiful as ever. Also Im honored that Colin made the cut :,)
     
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    Don't know which fate for Leiko would be worst. Dying twice or forgotten completely :cool:
     
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    Have you read it?
     
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    im surprised Levi made it though,,
     
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    I'm not going to hate you - but yes I have returned, slightly.
    levi is the softest of them all and I will fight anyone who says otherwise
    Karter isn't just boring, I just never got to properly write him. But now we'll some character development! (v shook)
    tysm! <3<3<3 Colin was too much of an amazing character to cut :D
    No character died in this story, let alone twice. And she was not forgotten either. Yes, she was removed, but this was my decision as the writer to limit the amount of characters I had in the story. I'm sorry if you feel upset that she was taken out, but I feel more comfortable writing a story with 8 characters and not 14.
    cc:
     
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    This next chapter is gonna be truly epic, I feel it.
     
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    Amazing <3
     
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    Almost as if you helped write or something, huh? ty spirits!
    Thank you so much!

    If you direct your eyes to the first post of the thread (or here), you will find a link to the original story that I wrote from May 2018 - November 2018. You don't have to read it, but for any past readers who enjoyed the original, it is there for you to see! Thank you all for your continued support with this story! <3
    Chapter one will be coming along soon, so sorry for the wait!
     
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    Bump!
     
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    CHAPTER ONE HAS BEEN POSTED!
    This took me so long to post and I'm now stress typing this message right now. I'm so sorry for the wait, I've found it quite draining rewriting the story fully so it's why I am taking so much longer than usual (or than I expected). The quality is definitely better, but I wish I was more consistent and faster at posting.
    So please tell me how the story is going so far! I would love to get some feedback from all of you who read this as it'll help me improve my writing. Thank you all for keeping up with the story (and a big thanks to @Spirits for helping me write some portions!)
    I've also made one or two edits with the prologue, none are very significant besides the change in Karter's tattoo. I decided to change in from a robin to an eagle as it fits for the symbolism to come. I will also add each of the character's codes so you can refer back to that.
    Characters in the chapter:
    Clarissa Young - @HelloColdWorld
    Iris Hearth - @melqnchcly
    Alex Hester - @Wolfy
    Leviathan Inges - @Bori
    Colin Davidson - @PepperPancake
    Kyo Kizokunashi - @Starzono
    Charlotte Anders - @hecccing
    Karter Fontaine - @HuskyInAHat
     
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    So pumped that the chapter's finally out, you did a great job on this <3
     
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    hi yes I love this story still and levi is the softest bab I swear
     
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    Click (I'm kidding, but actually I'm not)
    Also I loved the chapter! Even though I read all of it already...
     
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    I love Colin lmao, this chapter was great! Don’t beat yourself up over when you upload because I sure as hell am willing to wait
     
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    i freaKING LOVE THISSS! GOODNESS COLD YOUVE OUTDONE YOURSELF
     
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    Thank you, daughter! I appreciate all your help <3
    She's my favourite sweetie! Thank you again!
    Thank you, Wolfy!
    I'm glad you like the characters! I'm really hoping they're coming across well. Thank you!
    Thank you so much! It means a lot to hear this!

    CHAPTER TWO IS OUT!
    This chapter is much longer than I anticipated but my little gang of writing helpers (Aura, Spirits & Wolfy) and I decided that the last section in the chapter needed to be here! The codename bestowal is also here, and for my original readers, you will have seen there have been a couple of codename changes. I have my reasons, don't worry, but I just feel as if they either fit better/have a better meaning. So now to you, how did you guys think about the chapter? Constructive criticism is always appreciated and if you have any questions, please, please ask! You are the readers anyway; I'm doing this for you too!
    Characters in the chapter:
    Clarissa Young - @HelloColdWorld
    Iris Hearth - @melqnchcly
    Alex Hester - @Wolfy
    Leviathan Inges - @Bori
    Colin Davidson - @PepperPancake
    Kyo Kizokunashi - @Starzono
    Charlotte Anders - @hecccing
    Karter Fontaine - @HuskyInAHat
    Robyn Winchester - @HelloColdWorld
     
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