Take Your Last Breath

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  1. Aiden

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    an abrupt end, huh?
    well do not fear (if people who still read this are still around)
    for i am currently writing a new chapter
    and the story will end soon

    ; 0 ;
     
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    Oh boy, this took me too long to finish.
    First off, I abandoned this for some odd reason.
    Then it took me several rewrites, multiple hours to write this last chapter.
    But huzzah, I have finished.
    Woopdewooop.
     
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    AYYYYYY
     
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    Bringing back this thread because I'm bored and I now have Grammarly premium
    Rereading this reminds how slightly depressing this story is
    If you haven't read this story, I hope you enjoy!
     
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    i MiSseD thIS
     
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