Take Your Last Breath

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  1. HelloColdWorld

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    Quote from this chapter
    I can hear the fanfictions coming
     
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    Next chapter is out, I stopped procrastinating and got it done!
    Hope ya'll like this thing-y
     
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    i love this story
     
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    Too long, too much work
     
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    Thankssssssssss
    Not really, I like writing :p
     
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    It's coming :)))))
     
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    It's been almost a week but I've finally got another chapter out.
    It's pretty long but pretty cool so yay.
    Also I will writing a chapter for Kidnappers & Victims today so even more yay
     
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    YAY! MILITARY! KIDNAPPING!
     
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    YAY
    Also I literally just posted Chapter Twenty One :p
     
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    tHiS iS sO gOoD
     
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    ThAnKs PeOpLe
     
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    We have a problem
    I have no clue what to write
    save me
     
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    Writers' Block

    Character development through battle.
     
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    I realise now I am terrible at dialogue

    Like me in real life as I don't speak at all

    The hold up is me trying to get them talking

    I have a thing but I don't know how to get it going

    pray
     
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    I do pray
     
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    I got another chapter up, kinda did some dialogue then went straight to some action.
    Who needs dialogue anyway?
     
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    i love dis story
     
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