Take Your Last Breath

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    lol true
     
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    boop i did another chapter thing

    yay thanks for reading my things

    you guys are cool people
     
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    this is a good story
     
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    thanks a lot person

    the only reason why i write is because of you nice people

    woop

    i am going to bed now

    see you later people
     
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    i need moar

    this is my favorite MCPZ storyyyyy
     
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    morerrrerererer
     
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    i have returned to read a chapter this is amazing
     
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    i love this story
     
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    ikr this is like hardcore stuff
     
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    like srsly, i love the intensity it's like "IMMA THROW A CHAIR"
     
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    XD true
     
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    then it becomes soft and lets go its hold on you
    then suddenly the story grabs you by the neck and you cant let go, this is just pure amazingness
     
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    I'mma get writing right now
    You want some hardcore stuff, I'll give you that
    Time to shoot things


    and also Harper & McCall things teehee
     
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    It's been 35 minutes and I've written one paragraph

    I've been procrastinating mmk
     
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    And this is the reason my teachers hate me XD
     
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    In a span of five minutes, I wrote more than in 35
    well done me
     
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