Who Dunnit? [ Introduction ]

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Who's POV for next chapter?

Poll closed Apr 29, 2016.
  1. Diamond

    2 vote(s)
    18.2%
  2. Alvin

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    0.0%
  3. Silver

    1 vote(s)
    9.1%
  4. Absol

    1 vote(s)
    9.1%
  5. Neko

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  6. Emo

    3 vote(s)
    27.3%
  7. Mine

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    36.4%
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  1. snowopsia

    snowopsia Mythic Partier Hipster

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    This story is set in a kingdom-style era. The main plot of the story is that someone has assassinated the King, and it is now up to the seven suspects to figure out which one of them is the killer. There will most likely be a lot of fourth wall breaking, and there's even one in this first pre-story when Alvin mention phones, but where this story is set, there are no phones or technology, and just confuses everyone else.

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    Cast + Background Information

    @Absol1991 is one of the top merchants of the kingdom.
    @That_Neko is a merchant as well, and the cousin of Absol, but is from elsewhere as a visitor.
    @FindingEmohh is a guard, and is the top archer out of all the guards.
    @Mine is a guard, and is the top swordsman out of all the guards.
    @SilverAkita is the chef, and sometimes prepares food for the castle royalty.
    @xAlvin is the butcher, and helps provide food for most of the northern side of the kingdom
    @Brjx is the spokesman for the Queen, who rarely speaks.
    @MuffinLovesAlot is the Queen of the entire kingdom.
    @DiamondMinerMC is an amnesiac who has no clue about anything.​

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    "I have rights you know! You can't keep us locked in here forever!" Alvin shouted. The sound resonated throughout the prison, and he began shaking the iron bars on the window, trying to break free.

    "Um, actually, they can do literally whatever they want." Neko let out a nervous chuckle, from a cell somewhere below Alvin.

    "No, but we're at least entitled to a phone call!" Alvin scoffed back.

    "Um, a what?" Absol asked in confusion.

    "Never mind." Alvin sighed.

    "I'm never gonna see daylight again!" Emo gasped.

    "Um, there's literally a window right behind you." Neko grumbled.

    "Oh." Emo awkwardly muttered.

    "Anyone, help!" Mine was whining from another cell.

    "Ugh, I've gotta get out of here, this is just stupid." Neko growled.

    "It feels like we've been here for days!" Mine complained. "No food, no water, look at me! I'm wasting away!"

    "It's been less than twenty minutes." Silver commented.

    "...but I'm hungry." Mine added.

    "Please stop whinin'! You're making all of this so much worse!" Absol sighed in mild annoyance.

    "I haven't even said anything yet." Diamond said in a slightly whiny voice nearby.

    "Seriously though, I'm starving," Mine spoke up again, "do you think someone will bring us food..?"

    "Who cares about food?" Alvin snapped. "We're locked up like animals, for no reason what so ever!"

    "Well, there's probably a reason." Emo replied.

    "Well what is it then? Why am I here? I was just at the wrong place, at the wrong time, I am totally innocent, and no one has any right-" Silver began.

    "Wait, shut up. I think someone's coming." Diamond hushed her.

    The cells of each inmate had a clear view of the entrance, even those on the top floor. A very fancy looking female appeared, letting out a quiet 'ahem'. The queen. Her name was Muffin, and she had an odd fondness of cats. She had even gotten the ability to change into one under certain circumstances, but for now she was just an average height female with long black hair.

    A silver crown with a diamond in the middle sat on her head, and she wore a light blue dress.

    A person popped out from behind her, standing next to her orderly.

    "Her majesty, the Queen," he began, "wishes to hereby inform you of the collective misdeeds that have been conducted by all those present." Jake began.

    "His majesty, the King, is dead." He said, his voice holding a hint of sadness.

    "There is evidence that points to all of you. Individually and in small groups."

    "The guards, Emo and Mine, were posted outside the King's chambers during the crime."

    "Our merchant friends Absol and Neko were seen fleeing the scene of the crime directly after."

    "A mysterious stranger known as Diamond was found outside of the castle and remembers nothing." Jake added, disbelief in his voice.

    "And perhaps most stunning, our culinary friends Alvin and Silver were found in possession of his majesty's severed head."

    "Yeah, because people just keep severed heads lying around." Absol scoffed, cutting Jake off.

    "Excuse me?" Alvin growled from his cell.

    "Oh, come on! It was obviously them!" Absol growled.

    "Having a head is pretty suspicious." Diamond added.

    "We have a literal meat pit. Where we work isn't exactly blood free zone." Alvin retorted.

    "Silence!" Jake huffed, annoyed.

    "They started it." Alvin muttered from his cell, crossing his arms.

    "Her majesty asks that, in return for your freedom, each of you helps find the identity of his majesty's killer. We are certain that there are no other suspects."

    "We are giving you one week exactly to solve this heinous crime. Unfortunately, the crown will be unable to provide any assistance whatsoever, to anyone at all. In case we inadvertently help... uh.." Jake awkwardly looked at the Queen with slight reluctance.

    Muffin just gave a nod, a signal to go ahead.

    Jake sighed, his face turning slightly red. "Anyone who did this to my... poor snooky wookums will be punished harshly. And, if you don't work out who did it, you'll all be killed." Jake finished.

    "Kay thanks, bye." Jake said hurriedly, turning and exiting the jail, following after the Queen.

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    Hey guys! So that was the introduction to the story! Each chapter will be through the POV of the person you want to see the most! I should mention, that if you say, choose Neko, you'll get me as well, but it'll be through Neko's POV. Everyone is in groups, except for Diamond, but he'll get a make up thing soon. Probably.
    These are the groups;

    Absol + Neko
    Silver + Alvin
    Mine + Emo
    Diamond​
     
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    ''Kay thank bye'' I just imagine Jake running out of the room XDD
    anyway AWESOME story I love it
     
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    That's I was aiming for. c:

    Thanks!
     
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    Okay literally my character is me.. FOOOOODDDDD <33
     
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    Ay I enjoyed this o3o And I definitely think you should POV Mine, cause he's always thinking 'bout food and I know you with your clever, unique ways could whip something comedic up in his shoes. Hopefully that makes sense xD Anyway, good intro o3o
     
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    I figured.

    Aye aye, and thanks!
     
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    I love this I love this pls me want more I NEED MORE
    ALSO AYYYY ME AND ALVIN TOGETHER <3
     
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    I'm in Absol's team, Yassssss !
    Btw, my character fits me so well.
     
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    <33

    Ayy, glad you like it.

    P.S. : Whichever team/player gets voted will most likely get their story (AKA what happened before the king was killed) explained a bit further. So if me and Neko were voted, it'd explain why we were 'spotted fleeing the scene directly after the crime' or if you vote Silver/Alvin, a bit of explanation on the head would be added ;P
     
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    @Mine 's POV coming next chapter, I'll aim to have it done by the weekend. This will also include @FindingEmohh
     
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    How was I not notified of this?
     
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    I dunno, I tagged you c:
     
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