THE MISSING

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  1. GlowingLights

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    Freya really is like Emily's special friend. I love Emily's code-name (and the remark about her surname). Loving it <3
     
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    I was gonna write this the last chapter but eh... I was half expecting Alex to look the guy dead in the eye and headbutt him and run for it.
     
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    At this point, It's all I can say x'D Gj <3


    And also, Yay! Freya's Friend is Emily, My name is Emily x'D
     
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    I'm being a hypocrite and bump you
     
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    I love this story so much ! I wish I had a character in it, but I really enjoy reading it! Keep up the good work :)
     
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    Thank you so much! I'm pretty much all over the place with lengths of each chapters so I hope you can all manage with that.
    Thank. You. <3.
    rip smol bean
    I would if I could! <3
    Thank you Raya <3
    Alex knows when not to get in (too much) trouble ;)
    A wonderful coincidence, thank you!
    We can be hypocritical together <3
    Thank you! If I ever write anything else, you can sign up then :)

    CHAPTER FIVE IS OUT
    Characters in the chapter:
    Clarissa Ada Young - @HelloColdWorld
    Emily Sunshine - @GlowingLights
    Iris Hearth - @TheFqllen
    Alex Silverfeather - @Wolfy
    Naoko Nakamura - @Glowy
    Leiko Wannabe - @DanielaParty
    Freya Hilton - @ShootingStqr
    Leviathan Inges - @Boriiii
    Leslie Jimenez - @Pinxxie
    Colin Davidson - @PepperPancake
    Jules Burke - @Julesable
    Kyo Kizokunashi - @Azamii
    Charlotte Anders - @HelpCentre
    Karter Fontaine - @HuskyInAHat

    This is a long one guys! over 5,000 words, my bad. Hope you enjoy when team-building exercises go wrong x-x
     
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    Ahhh I'm in love with this! Let's just hope Clary, Alex and Iris are ok haha.
     
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    The best of friends, the beta duo
     
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    this story is suddenly giving me the feels oml-
     
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    My bby Freya is bae - Oml <3
     
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    Y E S !i!i!i!i!
     
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    Yessssss
     
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    Wait, what did Leiko do while Capture the Flag? Or did I just miss her name?
     
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    Loving it so far, can't wait for another chapter b! x
     
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    Thank you Raya! They're all fine, I assure you <3
    Iconic duo.
    More feels to come!
    <3 <3 <3
    :D
    :)
    She was mentioned, though not by name ;) And of course she was involved in the pushing fight by C.41's flag.
    Thank you Aura! It's here now :)

    CHAPTER SIX IS OUT!
    Characters in the chapter:
    Clarissa Ada Young - @HelloColdWorld
    Emily Sunshine - @GlowingLights
    Iris Hearth - @Auruh
    Alex Silverfeather - @Wolfy
    Naoko Nakamura - @Glowy
    Leiko Wannabe - @DanielaParty
    Freya Hilton - @ShootingStqr
    Leviathan Inges - @Boriiiing
    Leslie Jimenez - @Pinxxie
    Colin Davidson - @PepperPancake
    Jules Burke - @Julesable
    Kyo Kizokunashi - @Azamii
    Charlotte Anders - @AtHere
    Karter Fontaine - @HuskyInAHat

    Apologies for the really long wait! Writing took longer than I anticipated as I was hoping to have more of their day in the chapter before realising I was going very overboard in detail. But it's here now! Hope you enjoy <3
     
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    Gosh, my poor bb! She was so overwhelmed by everyone crowding her that she cried! My awkward character is so adorable ;-;

    Great job, as always!
     
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    I forgot to comment when I first read it,

    Amazing chapter, like always, cold, I can't wait to see where it all unfolds!
     
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    Oof, I’m late! Amazing chapter, as always
     
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    you really need to become an author, your stories are amazing, thrilling, and always leaving me wanting more-
    keep up the good work ;D
     
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    Bump-alsss
     
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