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Story Requesting Characters

Discussion in 'Stories' started by Kraetys, Sep 5, 2016.

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Will I start the story with a cliche?

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  1. Kraetys

    Kraetys Mythic Partier VIP

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    I'll be making a story then.
    Because I'm bored.
    And I like to procrastinate.
    It will probably be a better writing level than 'The Courts of Ragni,' while being less dark.
    So ya I need like, thirteen characters.
    It's going to be based on people who hate their powers because of some event with the type of magic that awakened it.
    For example, someone who's whole family died in a fire can now control fire.
    Very fantasy.
    Much magic.
    Will no longer be accepting characters.
    I'll just write with what I have.
     
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  2. Kraetys

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    1. Kra3tys
    2. Tristan
    3. Callie Rose
    4. Kor
    5. Nixon
    6. Alvin
    7. Arthur
    8. Echo
    9. Jay
     
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    Sounds interesting c:
    I guess I might as well make a character ^w^
    Name: Tristan
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: Dark hair and bright eyes. Scars up and down his arms due to Unfortunate event. Wears dark clothing, and a beanie.
    Unfortunate Event: He and his family were going on a "little vacation" to a beach house. Sadly, when they were driving across the bridge a suicidal maniac drove straight into the side of their car. They spun out of control and veered straight off the bridge into the ocean.. The heavy, metal truck sunk to the bottom and water filled the truck instantly, no time to react.. Tristan woke up on a sandy hill, whilst his family .. You get the point..
    Relating Power: The ability to control water/liquids.
    General Personality: Very Introverted, has social anxiety, socially awkward, lacks self confidence - however is uniquely skilled in many different things.
    Extra Information: He likes to be called "Tris" for short, that's if he even opens himself up to anyone.

    Ay this was fun xD
     
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    Thank you for your contribution!
     
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    Name: Nixon
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: Kawaii. Wears Hoddies and flowercrowns. Sweaters with jeans. Green eyes. Dark brown hair. Tends toe dye hair pastels. Loves Sneakers.
    Unfortunate Event: Was bullied. Parents abused him. Father was a cheaterr. Mother drunk killer. Siblings died.
    Relating Power: controls nature (all elements)
    General Personality: shy sweet caring but when mad... a living hell
    Extra Information: is bi. Uhmm.... yea and also has no friendss...
     
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    Umm, your relating power, 'controlling nature,' also referred to as chlorokinesis, doesn't have much to do with the event?
    Perhaps an ability based on emotions, the ability to perceive a persons sins, and manipulate the person using that.
     
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    Name: Callie Rose (prefers Callie)
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Platinum blonde hair, pale skin. Very skinny, also short. Bright blue eyes. Wears skinny jeans, oversized jumpers/sweaters and worn out converses.
    Unfortunate Event: An armed prisoner enters her school at shoots up the place. Unknown to her, Callie uses the power of localised time dilation to freeze time and save her friend from being shot. However, the bullet is inches from her friend and Callie is unable to move her or the bullet. If Callie unfroze time, her friend would die.
    Relating Power: Has the ability of localised time dilation
    General Personality: Shy, quiet, timid, jumpy, introverted, mostly unnoticed by everyone. If she speaks up, people just confused. No one has ever heard her shout/scream.
    Extra Information: The other characters included aren't frozen in time.
     
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    Guys I'm looking for powers very directly related to the events. @HelloColdWorld perhaps she froze time at the school, and couldn't figure out how to restart it, leaving all the people there trapped in eternal limbo?
     
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    That sounds cool, I'll try and edit the backstory to get a better reason why she froze time maybe?
     
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    Okai xD
    Also, a cooler name for your powers is optional.
    "Localized time dilation"
    Is that okay?
     
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    Name: Kor
    Age: 13
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: Wears a lot of long black clothes. Black short-ish hair, red eyes. Sharp canine teeth and nails.
    Unfortunate Event: Was being hunted by a murderer and almost killed 152 times over the span of 2 months, until finally killing the murderer with a conjured hunting knife.
    Relating Power: Conjuring weapons from air
    General Personality: Mostly the opposite of how he looks, generally positive, happy, and upbeat, yet insanely, extremely frightening when angry
    Extra Information: Eyes glow bright red when mad
     
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    xDD sure i'll go with that power c:
     
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    Name Alvin
    Age 12
    Gender Male
    Appearance Half cat (black tail, white tailtip, one black ear, one white ear), messy black hair, glowing icy blue eyes, black hoodie
    Unfortunate Event Once challenged his best friend to a "friendly" fighting bout, after friend takes a huge punch on him, he gets angry and starts hurting him badly, using an unknown speed, until his friend eventually drops and passes away. Alvin has never forgotten that moment, and using his powers is the only thing that makes him relive it.
    Relating Powers Speed/Combat
    General Personality Shy, yet very kind, cute, powerful, gentle, lonesome, scary if angered
    Extra Music calms him down, possesses some cat traits
     
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    This power is more based on convenience rather than hatred.
    I want the event to make them hate their power because they've seen what it can do to someone they're close to.
     
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    Done.
     
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    Gender: male
    Appearance: always an animal in a straw hat
    Unfortunate Event: Family killed by animals
    Relating Power: can turn to animals
    General Personality: weird
    Extra Information: likes rickrolls
     
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    Appearance: Bronde hair
    Unfortunate Event: When her parents died in a car accident, she didn't do well in one of her important tests for her music class. (singing)
    Relating Power: Reincarnating // healing
    General Personality: Happy, (positive all the time) shy, new in wherever they are.
    Extra Information: Lolno
     
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    The power needs to relate directly to the event.
    Perhaps a power to prevent sound from moving past a certain point?
     
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    she tried to heal them but couldn't??
     
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    Well, it kinda made it sound like she failed a music test as the unfortunate event.
    Healing because of (insert injury here) is a bit too broad.
    Also I want the event to be the reason they come into their powers.
    Ex. A dystopian doctor killed (Insert loved one here) instead of saving them, and got away with the crime.
     
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