Burrows High

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MY DAUGHTER LIES TO ME! She no werewolf??? Ahhhhhhhh
 
stellcr said:
yEs aMaZiNggg! <3
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Thank you <3
Fox said:
Wren is now mine and teddie's wise wizard of the west with 3 siblings who kill on sight.
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Haha.
Wolfy said:
MY DAUGHTER LIES TO ME! She no werewolf??? Ahhhhhhhh
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Ow sadness, your own character lied to you. :(
strawberriess said:
Things are definitely happening wowza
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Yep! Stay tuned to see what happens next! We're getting into the main storyline now and we're drifting away from high school tropes.

NOTE: A FEW MINOR CHANGES HAVE BEEN MADE TO THE END OF CHAPTER 3 AND THE BEGINNING OF CHAPTER 4.
 
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Bumping - Still trying to get past writers block as best as I can
 
Ok so I'm kind of confused.. I sometimes can get onto the stories and sometimes I can't and so idek...
 
xXBri_BurritoXx said:
Ok so I'm kind of confused.. I sometimes can get onto the stories and sometimes I can't and so idek...
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If you click/tap the spoiler bars then you should be able to see the text of that chapter.
 
woo more chapters please raya :) xx
 
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You have been bumped.

Xxx
 
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GlowingLights said:
“Two emeralds glow forever, glistening in the moonlight. The shining is reflected by the shadows, commanding and directing. The shadow master sees all, the shadow master knows all secrets and endings. One tragic regret, one team takedown, one epilogue. Two friends part ways and minds crumble. The world remembers, the world always does.”
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I don't whether to be scared of this or fascinated...
Great chapter though, my poor small baby girl trying her best but fails badly in the hands of the devil.
 
A little update :)

Heading off to creative writing camp next week, so I'm holding off chapter 11 until after the camp is completed. I want to get as much feedback as I can from the story so far and I want to do well with it. I will be making error changes to the other chapters before I go (no changes to the story, just my terrible grammar). Then, when I come back (Saturday the 30th of June), I will hopefully be ready to post chapter 11 and have a lot of the other chapters ready so they can be posted at a faster rate.

However, I don't want you to leave this thread without anything. So, here is a drawing my friend @Am says bye made! I wonder if you can guess what part of the story this is from. <3
 
Another update :)

The story has been edited minorly. Spelling and grammar problems have been edited. The only change is that the nether is now called The Realm of Nemrakt and the end is now called The Realm of Pekelo. This is because Burrows is not set in Minecraft, and it's sort of weird for these realms and the entities in them to exist in a story that is intended to take place in a world that is not full of blocks.

Maybe use this time to read through the story again. Some parts of the story should be a bit easier to understand now <3

Notice any other errors? Please tell me <3
 
GlowingLights said:
A little update :)

Heading off to creative writing camp next week, so I'm holding off chapter 11 until after the camp is completed. I want to get as much feedback as I can from the story so far and I want to do well with it. I will be making error changes to the other chapters before I go (no changes to the story, just my terrible grammar). Then, when I come back (Saturday the 30th of June), I will hopefully be ready to post chapter 11 and have a lot of the other chapters ready so they can be posted at a faster rate.

However, I don't want you to leave this thread without anything. So, here is a drawing my friend @Am says bye made! I wonder if you can guess what part of the story this is from. <3
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The drawing is from the very start of chapter 1 when those 3 came to Burrows High for the first time
 
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