A story

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Omg it's so good, and the adjectives used and the awesome words omg I'm gonna cry!!
 
I see that the dialogue was heavy and while having many new characters there introductions were like they had the back story of 20 stories. the way they interacted was perfect with the personalities never getting out of hand.
 
Lemme add a part 2
Gigosaurus went into creative and saw a city he can eat (partyzone city) but hintss went moo
 
Lemme add a part 2
Gigosaurus went into creative and saw a city he can eat (partyzone city) but hintss went moo
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Omg 8/8 for creativity
 
ok >.<
 
*claps* 10/10 u just mastered writing stories. You Gotta Publish It!
 
I, honestly have never heard anything more amazing.
Divergent was detailed, but this was detailed to perfection.
It's so descriptive, you feel like you know the characters on a personal level.
 
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