A story

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10/10 would read again ~ IGN
 
Omg so beautiful I'm gonna cry.
 
27/3

;) all you mathematical people out there ;)
 
Very good story also wandering how long will it take for me to find out if i got builder or not?!:)
 
^^^ o_O

Anyways. Lol.
 
Make more pls dad
This story is So beautiful

 
Wouldn't Hintss 'moo' and 'lol'?
 
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Gigosaurus went rawr.
Hintss went moo.
The end.

Could use a bit more character.
Narration is faulty.
Character motivation is unseen.
The dinosaur-cow love was totally just forced in without any development.
Too much past tense.
Irregularly organized text.
Subjective, obstinate reviewer. (I don't accept bribes, thank you very much.)

Overall, arbitrary number/arbitrary number.
 
Could use a bit more character.
Narration is faulty.
Character motivation is unseen.
The dinosaur-cow love was totally just forced in without any development.
Too much past tense.
Irregularly organized text.
Subjective, obstinate reviewer. (I don't accept bribes, thank you very much.)

Overall, arbitrary number/arbitrary number.

So, should be made into a film?
 
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