You're my star - Episode 1 - New story

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Name:
Max
(You're all age 14.)
mk
Personality (no meanies, worst you can be is slightly stubborn.):
Uhm... IDK You can decide! :D
Role (see above):
MAIN 1 PLIZ
Appearance:

Mc skin
Hobbies (optional):
Gaming, Sports, Helping others
Favourite drink (No alcohol):
coca cola
Favourite food:
Pizza
Favourite candy:
chocolate
Range of grades (A+, A, B, C, D, E, F, etc):
You can decide!
Backstory (for main, parents must have died):
Parents died (i guess. Nothing else)
Everybody in this story has a necklace that is half a pendant (like a friendship necklace) (Main 2, don't fill out this one.) What shape is yours? (Main 1 has a star):
Star i guess,
On the pendant, a small sentence is halved. What does yours say? (Main 1 says 'You're my star', but he/she only has half. (You/M/St) What does yours say?: You're my star
Name:
Eliana
(You're all age 14.)
K
Personality (no meanies, worst you can be is slightly stubborn.):
IDk u can decide
Role (see above):
Main 2
Appearance:
She looks like my profile pic but younger
Hobbies (optional):
Gaming
Favourite drink (No alcohol):
Coca cola
Favourite food:
ANything pasta
Favourite candy:
Anything chocolate
Range of grades (A+, A, B, C, D, E, F, etc):
A+
Backstory (for main, parents must have died):
I can't think of anything rn i'll message u l8tr
Everybody in this story has a necklace that is half a pendant (like a friendship necklace) (Main 2, don't fill out this one.) What shape is yours? (Main 1 has a star):
-
On the pendant, a small sentence is halved. What does yours say? (Main 1 says 'You're my star', but he/she only has half. (You/M/St) What does yours say?:
You're perfect the way you are.
MC Username: IntrovertSloth
Name: Cooper Irwin
Personality (no meanies, worst you can be is slightly stubborn.): Just take Cooper from F4TE
Role (see above): Friend 1 (darn I was too late to le thread)
Appearance: Same as Personality
Hobbies (optional): Just thinking about stuffz
Favorite drink (No alcohol): Water because life is good
Favorite food: Bread because life is good
Favorite candy: I don't eat candy, because life is good
Range of grades (A+, A, B, C, D, E, F, etc): A, A+
Backstory (for main, parents
must have died): Cooper from F4TE (Sorry for all this laziness have to get to church this morning and basically all my characters are the same so)
Everybody in this story has a necklace that is half a pendant (like a friendship necklace) (Main 2, don't fill out this one.) What shape is yours? (Main 1 has a star): Cross
On the pendant, a small sentence is halved. What does yours say? (Main 1 says 'You're my star', but he/she only has half. (You/M/St) What does yours say?: What is worth having is worth sacrificing for
MC Username: Huskyyyy (<-- My actual IGN if that's what you're looking for)
Name:
-
Donovan Savage
(You're all age 14.)
-
I've passed this age but sure
Personality (no meanies, worst you can be is slightly stubborn.):
-
Energetic, Loner, Weird, Crazy, Parkourist (I parkour a lot, if you can add that in)
Role (see above):
-
Friend 2
Appearance:
-
Long Purple Hair, Tie-dye T-Shirts (If you don't know what that is, its a white shirt with multiple colours) Blue Jeans, Sea Blue eyes, Tanned skin
Hobbies (optional):
-
Parkouring, Drawing, Swimming, Singing
Favourite drink (No alcohol):
-
Orange Crush
Favourite food:
-
Hamburgers
Favourite candy:
-
Smarties
Range of grades (A+, A, B, C, D, E, F, etc):
-
B+ to A
Backstory (for main, parents must have died):
-
I've been alone since the age of 5 and I've had to steal to survive but not anymore
Everybody in this story has a necklace that is half a pendant (like a friendship necklace) (Main 2, don't fill out this one.) What shape is yours? (Main 1 has a star):
-
Fox
On the pendant, a small sentence is halved. What does yours say? (Main 1 says 'You're my star', but he/she only has half. (You/M/St) What does yours say?:
-
Full is "We are All In A Fox Tribe In My Eyes" and you can make the broken one
MC Username: FlavoredFox




You're My Star

"He's Okay.." The nurse tapped the glass, baby gourney with her nails. Inside was a baby boy, wrapped in blue cloth.
"The mother sure as hell isn't." The doctor was stressed to death; "Gone. They can't save her. It's been half an hour. With her case, I'm not surprised. Poor lad." He looked down at the baby.
"The father? Where is he?" Another nurse put down her clipboard and tried to shoosh the baby as it started to wail.
"Gone, long before he was born. He didn't even know that he was gonna be a father. Sorry to say - but this one needs to go in to care. We have no information on the parents, and both are gone. If this one has any other family, there's no trace of them."
"I'll get on the phone to the orphanage" The first nurse replied, walking out of the room. The nurse who was shooshing the baby frowned.



14 years later...

Maxieboii: u there?

Eliana97: Sure as hell am. Just finished unpacking my room from the move.

maxieboii: thank the lord

Eliana97: Wassup?

maxieboii: the stupid school bullies are knocking on my door rn. hard.

~Max takes off his cap and his backpack. He'd only just got back from baseball practice.~

Eliana97: Seriously? lol

maxieboii: it's not funny "lol"

Eliana97: Ik, I'm saying "Lol" because of how persistant they are.

maxieboii: tell me about it.. good greif my door is creaking.

Eliana97: Lol, you're in like, a super luxurious orphanage right?

maxieboii: don't remind me.

Eliana97: I wasn't making fun of you. Hear me out ;3

maxieboii: continue

Eliana97: You have a room-service-phone-thingy. Just call them and tell them to come clear them away from your room.

maxieboii: that makes it worse. the doors are pretty much indestructable here though so.. i'm gonna go get some sleep.

Eliana97: Ok, see ya tomorrow?

maxieboii: morning probs, 12pm-12:30pm, then like 2pm+ until i go to sleep..

Eliana97: Same rlly. See you then.

maxieboii: kk, cya


~maxieboii has logged out~
~Eliana97 has logged out~




Max walked over to his bed. He flattened the baseball covers from when he woke up, put on a tight baseball shirt, some tracksuit shorts, and took off his baseball cap and flung it like a frisbee to the hanger on his wall by the door. Got in to bed, despite the constant pounding on the door. The one thing Max didn't take off to go to bed was his pendant. He never understood them. Everyone had them.

Kids get born two at a time in the world. If you live near eachother, that's lucky. In history class, they were taught that whoever has the matching peice to the pendant is your soulmate - they don't have to love eachother as in "couples" and "marriage", they can just be friends if that's what suits them best. In Max's case - he doesn't believe such things. Pfft. Ancient "Prophecy". What has history ever done for the future? Especially for Max. Parents dead. Lives in an orphanage since he was 2 weeks old. Now the football jocks are trying to break his door down. That happens often. Max likes to call the recurring event "Baka Smash!"

Max twirled the chain of the pendant. The pendant was star-shaped, and it said "You M St" but since his "soulmate" will have the other half, he's guessing it's surposed to say "You're my star".

(at this point i took a little break and then when i came back to sit in my chair i sat back down so hard that my chair (which is on wheels) nearly tipped all the way back, bearing in mind there's a wall behind me with a radiator. *applause*)


~morning~


Thank the lord. The pounding had stopped outside his door. Max grabbed his red and black tie dye backpack that had a baseball bat sticking out of it. He'd slept in. His time to go to the chatroom was wasted in bed. He'd have to wait until Lunch time to talk to Eliana again. She lives in Kamakura. Kamakura is a beach town an hour south of Tokyo. Max lives in Tokyo. They've always wanted to meet eachother, and have known eachother online since they were 6. They've been penpals since then. 8 years. She's a gamer. So is he, but he's also into sports. He's the baseball team's best player, and player of the season. Eliana asked him to teach her how to play baseball when they meet.

Max's backpack had a baseball bat sticking out of the zip. The team had to bring their own equipment. Luckily, since he lives at the best orphanage in the world, he gets a lengthy allowance per week, and gets to keep whatever is left behind. He goes grocery shopping now and then, and he goes shopping for clothes pretty much once a year. That's why he wears tight baseball shirts for bed.

"Max!" A guy with pale skin and short brown hair waved Max over to him and another boy.


(If it's Ok here, im gonna edit Fox's character a bit to have a wolf tail and ears (so there's animal people, cats, foxes, wolves))

"Hey Cooper, Hey Don." Max walked over to Cooper and Donovan. All the kids at the school wore a gray blazer with a red and white tie, and a blue shirt. Girls wore skirts while boys wore grey trousers, slightly darker than the blazer.

"And I thought we'd be late." Cooper turned to his left, his arms folded. Cooper's pendant glistened. It was a cross, with "Wh i wor hav i wo sacrif fo"
Donovan's was a fox shape with "W ar Al I A Fo Tri I M Ey"

"I got stuck with Donovan jumping all over the place, on the walls, through windows, he's crazy about parkour. And then he never shut up along the way." Cooper glared.
"Uh, Not true." Donovan tried to look away from Cooper's glare. Nobody can escape.


DING-DONG-BING-BONG~

"1st period.." Don's eyes sqinited.
"Great." Max looked around at everyone going inside.
"Rumour on Snapstagram is that there's a new girl." Cooper squinted at Don and Max. Hinting on.
"Hopefully she's in my class." Don grinned. Max wasn't interested

They started to walk inside.





People in the story so far:

@QuestionMarkz
@Panderss
@Huskyyyy
@Fox
 
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I love these storiessssss xD Great job on it :p
Also can you leave me the link for Snapstagram pls
 
Amazing story! Looks great so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
 
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