Thoughts on Total PartyZone Island?

[SilverAkita]

What do you think about my story?
Who do you want to win?
How would you want it to end?
Challenge ideas?
Who do you think should get voted off again?
Is there anything you want to change about the characters?
After I'm finished writing, should I write a different themed series?
Any suggestions?
Who should come back to the island?
Who should have been added in the first place?

Just some basic stuff I want to know from you guys about the story I'm writing.
It gets tricky and hard trying to write in each character's parts cause there's so many XD
Plus, maybe I can improve some stuff about TPZI. If I were not writing this, I'd predict that Fox, Absol, or Dizzy would win the whole story. Lol.

 

[Dizzeh]

I thought it was a multi choice question ._. If it was I vote all three.

I think your story is fab.
Errrrmmmm... Idk o-o maybe you could keep writing until there are like 5 players left and get the readers to PM you who they want to win (or get voted out in the following challenge)
Idk
Can't think of any at the top of my head but if I do, I'll PM you them.
Idk
Nope
Not sure. I really like your fanfic atm tho, so I assume any other ones you write will be amazing
Nope
Can't remember who got voted out XD
Hm... Hm... Idk

P.S thanks lol

 

[SilverAkita]

I thought it was a multi choice question ._. If it was I vote all three.

It is.

 

[$$$]

This story is the bomb. All I have to say.

 

[Dizzeh]

Oh. On my screen I can't get back to the original voting thing