The Zone part 1

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AlmostAlex

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The alarm clock wakes up Palmer {this is you @Huskyyyy } he slams down the 'snooze' button on the alarm clock and rolls over back to sleep. 'Oh crap! It's the first day of school!! I have to get ready!' He looks at the alarm clock it's 4:50, the bus comes at 6:30. 'Ok 2 hours and 30 minutes, it's all good.' Palmer puts on his clothes really fast without evening seeing what his clothes look like. He eats breakfast and makes sure that he packed his tennis racket with him, he heard the school has a tennis team. Palmer goes downstairs and plays a game of virtual tennis. He plays for 1 and 1/2 hours. He rushes upstairs and tells his mom and dad goodbye and sprints out the door, he's right on time!

River is already up before the alarm clock, she's practicing pitching for softball, she's trying to practice as much as she can because the College Scouts are coming in 2 months! She can't wait! {This is you @stelth_elf007 !} The alarm clock says 6:00, the bus for her comes at 6:30, she gets dressed , eats breakfast and brushes her teeth, she packs her glove, bat , helmet, and ball and walks out the door, she's 2 minutes early so she takes out her phone and checks the school's website.'It's not up to date, like all schools' thinks River as the bus comes.

Sydney wakes up without any trouble and brushes her teeth.{ this is you @_ItzVioln !} She gets her punching-dummy out and turns on the TV to see what kind of moves she'll be trying today. 20 minutes later she checks the time, it's 6:10! She walks to school so it's all good, she gets dressed , eats breakfast, and brushes her teeth again in the blink of an eye! She walks out the door and leaves.

Nixon gets startled by the alarm clock and jumps out of bed. {this is you @Niixonn !} He grabs his baseball bat and just keeps swinging until he realizes it was just the alarm clock. Nixon gets his bag ready and eats breakfast. By the time he's finished it's 6:30! The bus comes at 6:35! Nixon puts on his jeans so fast that he looks like Flash. He brushes his teeth and runs out of the door and see's the bus just starting to pull away, but since he's done baseball since he was 6 he knows how to handle this situation! He thinks, 'Okay, so the bus is a runner on 3rd, he's making his way to home, but he needs to make a stop at the Harrison's first so I can catch him there and send him back to 3rd!' And off Nixon went.

Aaron is practicing Hockey with his brother Hutch. {this is you @AaronXxXx and I hope it's okay i made u have a brother} 'Hey dude so you think your going to make the try-outs?' Asked Hutch, Hutch just got back from college, he got a scholarship to play Hockey, so Aaron always asks him questions. 'Ye, I think I am, I mean I have the same blood as you so...' says Aaron as he shoots the puck straight into the goal. 'Bro, we don't have the EXACT same blood' says Hutch as he gives the puck back to Aaron. 'But, I made you lunch with a little 'Good luck' note.' says Hutch as he walks into the house. 'Who are you becoming? Mother?' says Aaron as he packs his bag. By 6:20 Hutch and Aaron are eating breakfast but Aaron has to cut it off short because he has to leave. 'Don't forget your lunch!' yells Hutch from upstairs. 'Dang, I thought you wouldn't notice.' says Aaron as he takes the lunch 'Bye idiot.' Says Hutch as he comes running downstairs. He kisses me on my forehead. 'Yuck, you're really becoming mom' Aaron says as he walks outside. The bus comes and Aaron gives a little wave to Hutch. Hutch smiles back and waves too.

Joe wakes up at 6:20, he has 10 minutes to get ready. {This is you @AnEmerald !} 'Crap crap crap! I'm gonna be late!!!' He puts on jeans and a T-shirt but it has a stain on it so he just gets a sweatshirt to cover it up. He packed his bag the day before so he doesn't need to worry about packing, he brushes his teeth and skips breakfast. 'Bye mom!' he screams as he gets on the bus.

Elian is practicing his knife-throwing skills.{ this is you @generic_idubbbz_fan } The alarm clock beeps and he throws the knife at it. 'Dang I broke my alarm clock again, that's 5 times this week. Mom's gonna kill me again.. crap' 'MOMMM I need a new alarm clock!' 'ok but you're running late!' screams his mom. He sees the bus coming and he takes out his best knife and throws it at the road, the bus screeches to a stop and he gets on board. The bus driver looked petrified and all the kids looked at him weirdly.


Palmer walks down the aisle and asks someone 'Can I sit here?' The girl says 'sure'. Palmer sees that she plays softball. 'You play?' Asks Palmer as he points to her bag. 'Yes I do.' 'Whats your name?' 'River, yours?' 'River's a fantastic name, mine is Palmer, Palmer Fox.' Palmer puts his hand out and River shakes it. 'How fancy can someone in High school be?' asks River with a chuckle. Palmer laughs. 'I don't know, how un-fancy can someone be in High school?' "Heh, well if you want fancy, I'm not your girl.' They both crack each other up all the way to school.

Nixon gets on the bus and sits down. He hears people laughing. 'I want to be like them.' thinks Nixon. The next stop is at this beautiful house, made out of marble and a hint of gold. The girl who comes on this bus looks very nice, with beautiful blonde locks, and with eyes that sparkle. She asks 'Can I sit here?' Her voice is very soft and she seems like she'll never want to hurt a fly. 'Sure whatever' says Nixon. 'S-so what's your name?' 'Sydney, Sydney Parkes. Yours?' 'Nixon Edward Ando.' 'Wow 'Edward' are you some kind of butler?' she asks jokingly. Nixon laughs. 'So i see you play baseball, that's cool!' Sydney says. 'Yeah, what do you do?' 'Karate and MMA.' Nixon goes from :D to :eek: in a flash. 'I'm sorry did you say Karate?' asks Nixon politely. 'Yep, and MMA' she says. Nixon is shocked but Sydney puts her hand on his shoulder and he suddenly feels better. Nixon makes small talk with Sydney for a while and then there is some awkward silence where Nixon wants to tell her she's beautiful but then the bus stops and she gets up and leaves. Nixon sighs.

Aaron is on the bus and suddenly he sees a kid throw a knife at the road and the bus screeches to a stop, his Hockey stick bangs him in the throat, he sees the kid and he's about to go punch him but he just tripped so Aaron helps him up. 'You okay mate?' asks Aaron as he picks him up. 'O yea, wow your strong, my name is Elain what's yours?' 'Aaron, so I see you throw knives?' asks Aaron as he picks up the knife and hands it to him. The knife had 2 black handles and a red blade, mom would never let me have a knife. 'Oh yea thanks. So you play Hockey?' Elian asks. From that, they created a friendship.

'LATE LATE LATE' whispers Joe as he gets on the bus, he sits in the way back and introduces himself to two people. Their names are 'Aaron' and 'Elian', we talk for the whole time.....


To be continued......
 
This is really an awesome story. Gg. The only think that could be improved is if you put less ` as he `.
 
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This is really an awesome story. Gg. The only think that could be improved is if you put less ` as he `.
ok ty for the rating
 
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the 2nd story will be up tomorrow
 
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Great story!!
 
I might be making more than 1 story in a day.....;)
 
Oo Hiya! Is this a very good story so far! Keep up the good work!
I hope you didn't mind that i made you like someone, if so ill delete that part
 
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