The Valley Of Death - Episode Three 'Memory, Omnipotent'

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2nd Theme Song - PAPERMOON From Soul Eater, By LeeAndLie

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I’M FALLING DOWN INTO MY SHADOW,
Failing to control my breath
As I embrace the DEADLY NIGHT

If you are scared, never show it in your eyes
Near those pumpkin carriages
‘Cause all the witches see right through your lies

SEE YOU IN YOUR DREAMS, YEAH, BABY
I’ll still be there if it’s a nightmare


FAIRY BLUE,
for you I’d steal the stars
And lay them at our feet
So we could own the night
BLACK PAPER MOON
I will be the light, believe in me
WHEN YOU’RE LOST, HERE I AM

“FOREVER” WITH YOUR SOUL


Look above ‘cause you belong up there
Beside the shining moon

A spell was cast, sweeter than the crimson jam
Taste it and you get one wish
So, wish for anything you’d like
YOUR DESTINY, make it grand or horrible
Grasp it with those hands of yours
‘Cause you can live your dreams while still awake

Don’t try to cast a spell on me
You’ll never win – You’ll never break me

FAIRY BLUE, the reason I’m alive
The reason I can breathe
It’s all because of you
And I’ll pull through

If you reach for me and call my name
I WILL FIND YOU MY DEAR
Wherever you may be
Here and now I swear to break your curse
And I will set you free

It’s true, without you, there were nights
I told myself that I could live on in dusk and darkness
But somehow you reached me
It’s your voice that calls to me when I fall
You are my savior

FAIRY BLUE, for you I’d steal the stars
And lay them at your feet
So they could light a path to guide you home
If you’re ever lost and lose your way
Look up, you’ll be okay
So wipe those tears away

FAIRY BLUE, the reason I’m alive
The reason I can breathe
Is ‘cause you are the key that sets me free

So I swear you’ll never be alone
WHEN YOU’RE LOST, HERE I AM

“FOREVER” WITH YOUR SOUL


We can make it through, if you believe - If you believe in me


If you havn't heard of The Last Of Us, it's surposed to be one of the best games of all time, it's an apocalyptic game like my last story Himura Sanzo. But this has an emotional storyline that gets you linked in.

The actual story contains swear words. But since I'm not allowed to use them on here, I'll be using replacement words like 'damn' and 'crap' so, idk, but if you want you can replace those words with words you think would actually go there, but tbh i don't recommend it.


Profiles that havn't been edited:

Name: A.j.
• Gender: FEM
Age (15-18) 16
Appearance: long red hair, with a old truckers cap (if you Google Bobby SPN it's the hat he's wearing) black and red flannel, dark ripped jeans, black combat boots
Personality (try to be specific): nerd, introvert, romantic, smart, shy, can be phycopathic, IS A sociopath
How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): I would like to be in S2 pls and thx
Extra: sorry if this doesn't fit, bc I've been to busy playing UNCHARTED jk but I'm a fan of SPN Sherlock and Hamilton irl and story so X3

• Name: Mandy Banks
• Gender: Female
• Age: 17
• Appearance: Sexy af. Black hair going straight down to shoulders, purple eyes. Purple skirt, pale purple boot shoes, white button up shirt and purple tinted sunglasses. Would betray best friends within batting her eyes
• Personality (try to be specific): Would do anything to protect herself. Selfish, liar, manipulative, bossy, evil. Would even kill if it means she doesn't have to suffer. Weakness is yogurt
• How far do you want to get in the story: One of the sole survivors or at least really far? If this character survives Season 1, they might die early in Season 2?
•Extra: Antagonist of the season?

• Name: Sakai Izo
• Gender: Male
• Age (15-18) 18
• Appearance: Black Curly hair, Sorta muscular (but not absolute bodybuilder), Green eyes, Always wears a bandanna mask
• Personality (try to be specific): Mysterious, Misunderstood, Protective, Almost Silent, Wise, Has constant silent rage
• How far do you want to get in the story? Doesnt matter, but he'll probably die =3
•Extra: He tries to stay solo, but he'll help out others when needed (But he wont stick around with them long because tRuST iSsUEs)

• Name: Wren Gader
• Age (15-18): 16
• Gender: Female
• Appearance: Mousy brown hair, matching brown eyes. Lots of freckles, quite strong as she lived on a farm (pre-whatever this is). However, she is quite short, and no one takes her that seriously. She usually wears all black and a grey scarf that covers her face.
• Personality (try to be specific): Wren is extremely shy as she was the youngest of all her siblings, she usually just hid behind them and never said anything. She's also very awkward as she fears she'll say something wrong because of all the times her siblings berated her for just that. She doesn't fight for herself verbally as she always had her family to protect her. Even so, she is exceptional with hand to hand combat as her brother taught her several self-defense techniques.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you might be back for part II. (S2): Even though she seems feeble, she will probably be one of the suckers who pull through. Whether she likes it or not.
•Extra: She has four older siblings (two sisters and a brother).

• Name: River
• Gender: Female
• Age (15-18): 17
• Appearance: Teal hair and eyes. Light gray tank top with short jean shorts. 3 small bangles 2 arm the other on the other. Each colour having a meaning.
• Personality (try to be specific): Is daring to do anything, is caring, smart when it comes to last second decisions, Serious but mostly funny.
• How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): Maybe top 4 people.
•Extra: Will do anything for a friend before myself.

Name: Kitsune "Kit" Robinson
Gender: Male
Age (15-18): 16
Appearance: Very thin, meager, messy black hair, no facial hair, 5'8", male, white, looks weak but is very stealthy.
Personality: Fun (but only once you get to know him), apathetic, sarcastic, intelligent, prefers not to get involved with things unless there's a specific benefit for him, secretly not confident and very self-conscious, quiet.
How far do you want to get in the story? I really don't care too much, just take my character as far as you think he can go.
Extra: He flies solo unless he's forced to work with others or he gradually warms up to someone over time.

The little girl from A.j, Mandy, and Sakai's teaser. She's now 14 and is great at gun and hand to hand combat. She doesnt remember how her parents died and sakai and a.j dont feel shes ready to remember yet.


Profiles that've been edited:

• Name: Garrison Miller
• Gender: Male
• Age: 30, 50 after this episode.
• Appearance: Has dark-brown hair, pale skin, and aqua-colored eyes. Is lean and 5'9. Wears gray jeans, a long-sleeved white shirt, and black tennis shoes. Is generally weak, but can be skilled with weapons.
• Personality (try to be specific): He's very intelligent, along with being strategic. He's often skeptical and negative, but always looking out for the people close to him. He's quiet at times, but is open with friends.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you may be back for part II. (S2): I'd like to make it particularly far in the story (At 3 people, maybe even living would be cool). But, whatever works for you I'm fine with!
•Extra: Idk, good luck on the story! Oh and this.

Kiria is a mde-up character who is only here for this episode (a.k.a teaser).
She's 12 years old, and is Garrison's daughter. She's intelligent and mature, and she knows what she's doing.

James is Garrison's brother. He's in this episode and another episode too, but later in this series. He's tough and stubborn, but no matter how heated things get, he'll always stand up for his family even if it means he's on the losing side.





Mandy and James to the rescue!

Last episode, you guys voted for James and Mandy to go and save Nicole and Aki!

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Choices:

A. Get Mandy and James to. This has a 50% chance of Nicole recognising Mandy and not trusting her.
B. Get Garrison to go. Garrison is older, so he has a higher chance of someone being hurt or, in a serious circumstance, killed.
C. Get Watson to. This has a high chance of Nicole listening more and doing whatever he says. But a high chance of Aki being killed, seriously injured, or just all-round ditched. Then people will turn on them for ditching / getting him hurt/killed.
D. Get Kit and Ellie to. If any of these two get killed they will become depressed, and want to either suicide, (Extreme circumstance) or just become depressed (90%). Both have a chance of being seriously injured.
E. See if they come back themselves. One will either die (least likely) or will be seriously injured.
F. Send A.J. A.J is already traumatised, and might not even make it to the two of them at all. Extreme is A.J dying along with another character (out of Nicole and Aki) - A.J will definately die, the other character will either be injured or die, and the other will be fine. This has serious consequences.

Good choice!
But this has a consequence! It has a 50% chance that Nicole will recognise Mandy!
I've already done the randomiser before I started writing up this episode.
Enjoy!



Memory, Omnipotent,
The rescue, and... River... Where?


"Who?" Sakai asked.
"Those two." Wren pointed down the wall, at the gate, where Mandy and James where, without looking where she was pointing. "They're armed, and have obvious skill. They might already be slightly weakened from maybe being hurt from the travel, but atleast it's no loss if THEY die." Wren glared are Sakai.. A.J still shooting, reloading, and continuing.
"..Wren.." Sakai ushered for Wren to come down the wall, out of A.J's hearing range. "Mandy was mine and A.J's old friend. She abandoned us and we could've died. Nicole was only 4. She was with us. This isn't a good idea."
"...I'm sorry to hear that, but I stick by my opinion, always. There's a good chance she won't remember. After this world went to crap I forgot everything beforehand except times the four of us (in my group) had together. Everything else, gone. I'm positive she won't remember." Wren looked down slightly.
"...Fine." Sakai glared at James and Mandy. "Garrison probably won't be happy with this. We can just say Mandy, but slyly let James know. He's told us stories about him. He'll do anything for family. Garrison considers us family - He'll help us. But Mandy can't see me. I'll tell James, you tell Garrison you're sending Mandy out, otherwise she's not allowed in with the rest of James' group."
Wren nodded.
"Right... I'll go tell him.. and her now." Wren slid down the ladder. She also informed Ellie, and Kitsune (Kit).


"James? Is that right?" Sakai approached James while he was eating his first meal in about a week.
"Yeah, that's right, I'm guessing you're Sakai?" James smiled at him. "Garrison says you're a valiant worker, kid. Whoever is friends of my brother is a friend of mine. What'tdya need kid?"
"..Thank you, and I'm guessing Garrison's already told you - But a friend of mine, and my little sister were blasted beyond our wall by a charge-gun's revolt. We're sending two people out to get them and bring them back. They're on the other side of the wall, and we can't get them to climb up the wall. It would take about a week to even get to the other side of the wall, nevermind letting people there know. Only the charge-gun's revolt could get us there fast enough, but with landing on the wall, scraping off it, or landing inside the walls, you'd die. Nicole's charge-gun revolt didn't kill them. They did scrape off the wall, and probably got quite a few cuts and bruises, which I don't want to think about right now until they're back, and safe. My point is, it was up to me and Wren, Aki's girlfriend, (Aki is the boy who got blasted out of the wall with Nicole) to choose who went to get them. We chose you and.. Mandy." Sakai explained.. In detail.
"..I see, lad. I'd be more than happy to. But one question: How'd you know Mandy's name?" James asked.
Sakai glances to the side.
"..Me and my friend A.J (Who's also Nicole's older sibling) used to know her. She ditched us. I want you to be wary she could do it again, Nicole was only 4 years old. This isn't a lack of revenge. Honestly, I'm terrified incase Nicole somehow remembers her."
"..I take your advice, I'll do it. I'll let Mandy know." James Nodded. He finished his meal.
Sakai smiled in glee, and obvious relief. "Thank you, sir! While your away, the Kata Force will be backing you up on the wall, keeping the herd away. But.. I need you to do something else, while you're here." Sakai asked.
"Mhmm, What is it?" James looked at him curiously.
"We're sneaking you out there. Tonight. Mandy's being sent out today. She's camping at the west corner tonight. You meet her there. We're sneaking you out because we.. are scared Garrison'll get mad, If that's Okay." Sakai's eyes narrowed, thinking he'd decline.
"My brother worries about me, He's like you, with your little sister. You're protective of her, just like he is with me. I get why you wanna sneak me out, so I'll accept. I don't want to worry him. When does Mandy leave, I think we should make her departure as real-looking as possible, as in, I'd see her off, E.T.C," James rubbed the stubble on his chin.
"I agree, Sir." Sakai smiled. "Now, You'll be meeting with Mandy and Wren. I'm not coming. I'm not facing Mandy, don't tell her that neither Me, A.J, or Nicole is here, please."
"Got it." James patted Sakai on the head. "Now where do I gotta go?" He rubbed his head.





The meating is now over, Mandy has departed. It's now 11:00am, It's been 2 hours since Aki and Nicole disappeared.



~Nicole and Aki's P.O.V~



Aki struggled to get up. He looked where his head has rested. Nothing.. Thank goodness.
He let out a sign of relief. But then he looked down his corpse and saw almost a pond of blood on the left-side of his pelvis.
"..Atleast it doesn't hurt anymore.." He mumbled to himself. He was oblivious of what had happened to him around 15 minutes beforehand.
"Wait.." ..Reality came rushing back... Slowly. "N-Nicole.." He thought. "Where is she?!" He glanced around. He turned himself 180 degrees and found himself looking at Nicole, who was struggling on the floor. But conscious. She had a gash along her forehead that couldn't be properly seen because of her fringe. Her left hand had twisted a full 360 degrees. And something had concocted on the right side of her face. She opened her eyes and looked at Aki while crying because of her pain. Aki shuffled over to her quickly.
"N-Nicole! What's happened to you!?" His pupils shrunk. He was terrified. Then he glanced to the distance, and then back to Nicole. The herd was closer by a huge step of a giant.
"A--ki.." Nicole looked up at him and shook his sleeve. She cried. "J-Just.. Go-- *She does a sort of 'gulp' from crying, and breathing at the same time* I-I kno-ow it--s-s gotten c-closer.. S-So just go.." She tried to lift her other hand up to shake at his baggy trousers, but then she noticed that it was bent back. "A-Ak--i.. P-Please.."
Aki now noticed what she meant.
"No way." Aki screeched at her. "I'm not leaving you behind!" He demanded.
Aki put his arm under Nicole's head and sat her upright. She cried more, It hurt.
She tried to talk, but it was better to face the pain than to talk, and try and get him to stop what he was doing.
Aki lifted her up and put her on his lap, he then tried to stand himself. But he was leaning to one side.
He started walking
He wasn't going to stop.



~A week after Aki and Nicole disappeared~



I turned around and saw my reflection;
Weak, it is.
My mindset, good nor bad
I'd turned. A monster, I related myself to,
What had I become in the past week?... Weak.
Weak, Is what I've become.
I failed to protect them.
I lost them.
Everyone.
If I wasn't alive, They would be,
They'd be here. They'd be safe.
They'd know what to do. But I just sit.
Waiting, my time to strike. My time to revolt. My time to care about what happens to my poor excuse of a life.
...
We turned around and saw our reflections;
Weak, They were.




"Saike? What are you staring at?"



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Choices:


A. Get Nicole to pipe up and stop Aki straining himself, and rest.

B. Get Nicole to struggle. Aki might stop that way, or strain his hip more (He's walking slanted to his left) by thinking she's getting worse.

C. Get Aki to stop, put Nicole down, and leave her by herself while he runs off and tries to find people, keeping in mind that Nicole is bleeding, and Aki is leaning to his left on a slant.

D. Keep running. Strain Aki.




Again, thanks for taking the time to read this! It took me 1 hour and 49 minutes xD!
 
Memory, Omnipotent,
The rescue, and... River... Where?
THE TITLE GOT ME EXCITED! ALSO THE STORY IS KILLING ME! And the description of Nicole's situation. Now I feel like all my knock outs in martial arts wasn't as big as hers.
 
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