The Valley Of Death - Episode One (Full story now!) (still talking characters)

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Theme song - Ellie from The Last Of Us' version of "Through The Valley".

Search on any browser including Youtube "The Last of us 2" and watch the trailer video, or:

listen to: https://soundcloud.com/dynsay/the-last-of-us-2-ellie-sings-through-the-valley-lyrics

Lyrics:

I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
And I fear no evil because I'm blind to it all
And my mind, my gun they comfort me
Because I know I'll kill my enemies when they come

Surely goodness and mercy will follow me
All the days of my life
And I will dwell on this earth forevermore
Said I walk beside the still waters and they restore my soul

But I can't walk on the path of the right
because I'm wrong

No I can't walk
On the path of the right
'Cause I'm wrong


If you havn't heard of The Last Of Us, it's surposed to be one of the best games of all time, it's an apocalyptic game like my last story Himura Sanzo. But this has an emotional storyline that gets you linked in.

The actual story contains swear words. But since I'm not allowed to use them on here, I'll be using replacement words like 'damn' and 'crap' so, idk, but if you want you can replace those words with words you think would actually go there, but tbh i don't recommend it.


Profiles that havn't been edited:

Name: A.j.
• Gender: FEM
Age (15-18) 16
Appearance: long red hair, with a old truckers cap (if you Google Bobby SPN it's the hat he's wearing) black and red flannel, dark ripped jeans, black combat boots
Personality (try to be specific): nerd, introvert, romantic, smart, shy, can be phycopathic, IS A sociopath
How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): I would like to be in S2 pls and thx
Extra: sorry if this doesn't fit, bc I've been to busy playing UNCHARTED jk but I'm a fan of SPN Sherlock and Hamilton irl and story so X3

• Name: Mandy Banks
• Gender: Female
• Age: 17
• Appearance: Sexy af. Black hair going straight down to shoulders, purple eyes. Purple skirt, pale purple boot shoes, white button up shirt and purple tinted sunglasses. Would betray best friends within batting her eyes
• Personality (try to be specific): Would do anything to protect herself. Selfish, liar, manipulative, bossy, evil. Would even kill if it means she doesn't have to suffer. Weakness is yogurt
• How far do you want to get in the story: One of the sole survivors or at least really far? If this character survives Season 1, they might die early in Season 2?
•Extra: Antagonist of the season?

• Name: Sakai Izo
• Gender: Male
• Age (15-18) 18
• Appearance: Black Curly hair, Sorta muscular (but not absolute bodybuilder), Green eyes, Always wears a bandanna mask
• Personality (try to be specific): Mysterious, Misunderstood, Protective, Almost Silent, Wise, Has constant silent rage
• How far do you want to get in the story? Doesnt matter, but he'll probably die =3
•Extra: He tries to stay solo, but he'll help out others when needed (But he wont stick around with them long because tRuST iSsUEs)

• Name: Wren Gader
• Age (15-18): 16
• Gender: Female
• Appearance: Mousy brown hair, matching brown eyes. Lots of freckles, quite strong as she lived on a farm (pre-whatever this is). However, she is quite short, and no one takes her that seriously. She usually wears all black and a grey scarf that covers her face.
• Personality (try to be specific): Wren is extremely shy as she was the youngest of all her siblings, she usually just hid behind them and never said anything. She's also very awkward as she fears she'll say something wrong because of all the times her siblings berated her for just that. She doesn't fight for herself verbally as she always had her family to protect her. Even so, she is exceptional with hand to hand combat as her brother taught her several self-defense techniques.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you might be back for part II. (S2): Even though she seems feeble, she will probably be one of the suckers who pull through. Whether she likes it or not.
•Extra: She has four older siblings (two sisters and a brother).

• Name: River
• Gender: Female
• Age (15-18): 17
• Appearance: Teal hair and eyes. Light gray tank top with short jean shorts. 3 small bangles 2 arm the other on the other. Each colour having a meaning.
• Personality (try to be specific): Is daring to do anything, is caring, smart when it comes to last second decisions, Serious but mostly funny.
• How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): Maybe top 4 people.
•Extra: Will do anything for a friend before myself.

Name: Kitsune "Kit" Robinson
Gender: Male
Age (15-18): 16
Appearance: Very thin, meager, messy black hair, no facial hair, 5'8", male, white, looks weak but is very stealthy.
Personality: Fun (but only once you get to know him), apathetic, sarcastic, intelligent, prefers not to get involved with things unless there's a specific benefit for him, secretly not confident and very self-conscious, quiet.
How far do you want to get in the story? I really don't care too much, just take my character as far as you think he can go.
Extra: He flies solo unless he's forced to work with others or he gradually warms up to someone over time.

The little girl from A.j, Mandy, and Sakai's teaser. She's now 14 and is great at gun and hand to hand combat. She doesnt remember how her parents died and sakai and a.j dont feel shes ready to remember yet.


Profiles that've been edited:

• Name: Garrison Miller
• Gender: Male
• Age: 30, 50 after this episode.
• Appearance: Has dark-brown hair, pale skin, and aqua-colored eyes. Is lean and 5'9. Wears gray jeans, a long-sleeved white shirt, and black tennis shoes. Is generally weak, but can be skilled with weapons.
• Personality (try to be specific): He's very intelligent, along with being strategic. He's often skeptical and negative, but always looking out for the people close to him. He's quiet at times, but is open with friends.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you may be back for part II. (S2): I'd like to make it particularly far in the story (At 3 people, maybe even living would be cool). But, whatever works for you I'm fine with!
•Extra: Idk, good luck on the story! Oh and this.

Kiria is a mde-up character who is only here for this episode (a.k.a teaser).
She's 12 years old, and is Garrison's daughter. She's intelligent and mature, and she knows what she's doing.

James is Garrison's brother. He's in this episode and another episode too, but later in this series. He's tough and stubborn, but no matter how heated things get, he'll always stand up for his family even if it means he's on the losing side.




Episode One



Unlike Another



"Nicole!" Sakai shouted over through the battered door. "Get up, and grab your things, there's been a herd sighted, we're going to the front lines," Sakai zipped up his skull-backpack. "A.J, You ready too?!"
"You betcha!" A.J came stampeding into the room with her hair in a pony-tail.. it was still so long that it went to her butt. "C'mon Nicole!" A.J said excitedly.
"I-I'm coming!" A girl with brown hair in a pony-tail (she's trying to copy off of A.J ;), the pony-tail's short this time, to about her middle-back-ish)
"Got your machete and everything?" Sakai looked at Nicole.
"Yup!"
"And I got my pump-action gun!" A.J was grinning, she was excited.
"Why are you so happy about this?" Nicole laughed a bit.
"WHY WOULD I NOT BE!? It's been since SEPTEMBER that I used my gun!"
"That was two weeks ago, A.J.." Sakai sighed.
"That means she's a crazy-psycho-maniac-person." Nicole taunted
"I am not..." A.J went blue.
"Anyway, we gotta get on the walls." Sakai slung his backpack over his shoulder. He patted Nicole on the head. "Garrison's on the gate today."
"He likes it best there. Where's Watson at?" Nicole looked up at Sakai. Then across to A.J:
"Watson? Patrol, I think, right?" A.J looked at Sakai. "Yeah, buuuuuut since there's a load of roads, he's on south. Anyway, why'd you wanna know that?" Sakai smiled funnily at Nicole, obviously hinting at something.
"Shut uuupp... Anyway.. A.J's the one who ships everyone at the complex.." Nicole taunted.
"NOT TRUE! NOT. TRUE!" A.J flipped out.
Sakai laughed at them. "C'mon, let's go down now."




Garrison pats them on the heads as they climb the ladder to get on to the wall. (It's by the gate).
"When I'm on patrol by this gate, i hate having to see your stupid faces." Garrison laughed, he was being sarcastic.
"Ha-Ha." Sakai smiled at Garrison as he went through the door to the ladder.
"Love you too, Garrison!" Nicole dragged her voice like she couldn't be bothered today.
"What she said!" A.J was bouncing off the walls with excitement, metophorically, of course.
Sakai started wandering along the left of the wall. He then looked to his right and out in to the distance.
"There, you see them, guys?" Sakai pointed, he turned around only to find out that Nicole was peering over the wall to try and find Watson, while A.J was peering over the other side, getting a perfect view of the herd.




Kit, Ellie, Wren, and Akihiko.


"EEEEE---LLLIIIIEEEEE!!!!" Kit screeched at the top of his lungs. The birds flew from the nearby tree. "SAN MYSHUNO'S GOT A HERD ON THE HORIZON AND IT'S HERE TO TAKE THE LAST OF YOUR MAKE-UP!"
"OK, I'M COMING, I GET IT!" Ellie shrugged.
"WREN, AKI, GET UP, LAZY BUTTS!" Kit shouted through. "THERE'S A HERD O-- "
"SHUT UP, DORK, WE ALL LIVE IN THE SAME ROOM!" Wren taunted (by shouting at) Kit.
"OK, I GET IT!" Kit screeeeeched

~They went on patrol, North (Kit), East (, West, and Aki went on the wall.~

"Aki, How big's the herd?" Wren looked up on the wall where Aki was stationed.
"Huge."
"Wait, it's surrounding us!?" Wren's eyes widened
Aki nods. "It's probably the biggest herd we've seen all year."
"I'll agree to that. I'll pass the message on and get somebody to ask Garrison if we should warn the people in the city about it." Wren ran down the street.







....TEH GREEN BANDITS WILL PREVAIL! HAHAHAHUWFEAHA ;D





People who are in the story or yet to be in it:

@HelloColdWorld
@Huskyyyy
@stelth_elf007
@gavin


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Thank you for reading!





Choices:

A. Get Wren to run all the way to Garrison. If the herd gets in, Wren's zone will be open and unprotected,. plus, they will be the last warned.
B. Get Aki to run to Garrison. That part of the herd will be overflowing, and hard to take down. Making it easier to break in.
C. Get Nicole to warn Garrison. She's on the other side of the city and that wall will lose 33.3% defense. She has a 75% chance of losing breath on the way, and the word never getting to Garrison at all, since Nicole will most likely take a break and go and alert the nearest compound instead. The word will get out slower that way.
D. Don't warn anyone, let the people on the wall Garrison's at and let them notice that the herd is surrounding them, The herd will be around 1000 yards away by then, (THAT IS CLOSE FOR HOW FAST THEY MOVE)
E. Get Aki to pass the word on through the wall, certain parts of the wall will be deduced in defense. Keeping in mind the monsters are strong enough to break through the wall.
F. Warn the compounds of the city first. (The sections). But tell them to standby. This'll freak out everyone, and Garrison will be seriously mad, and there'll be consequences, but at least they'll be ready quicker. For this one I'll put in a random generator 5 options on what Garrison does to combat this, from 'lightly' to 'hardcore'. It's a 20% chance for each.


Thanks for reading, Again!
 
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Nobody has commented on how awesome this story is.....
ITS AWESOME
 
Doing ep 2 tonight, if a choice doesnt get another vote to get it in the lead ill have to put them in a random generator :3
 
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Meanwhile me just waiting patiencely for the next Ep...
Me irl: *pacing around getting over excited and worried*
Me online: ..... I said patiently... right?...
 
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