The Valley Of Death - Episode Four 'Two Reflections'

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3rd Theme Song - Impossible By Shontelle


I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did, I did
And you were strong and I was not
My illusion, my mistake
I was careless, I forgot
I did
And now when all is done
There is nothing to say
You have gone and so effortlessly
You have won
You can go ahead tell them

Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the skyline
All we had is gone now
Tell them I was happy
And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Falling out of love is hard
Falling for betrayal is worst
Broken trust and broken hearts
I know, I know
Thinking all you need is there
Building faith on love and words
Empty promises will wear
I know (I know)
And now when all is gone
There is nothing to say
And if you're done with embarrassing me
On your own you can go ahead tell them

Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof tops
Write it on the skyline
All we had is gone now
Tell them I was happy
And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible

Ooh impossible (yeah yeah)

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did

Tell them all I know now
Shout it from the roof top
Write it on the skyline
All we had is gone now
Tell them I was happy (I was happy)
And my heart is broken
All my scars are open
Tell them what I hoped would be
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible
Impossible, impossible

I remember years ago
Someone told me I should take
Caution when it comes to love
I did


Read more: Shontelle - Impossible Lyrics | MetroLyrics


If you havn't heard of The Last Of Us, it's surposed to be one of the best games of all time, it's an apocalyptic game like my last story Himura Sanzo. But this has an emotional storyline that gets you linked in.

The actual story contains swear words. But since I'm not allowed to use them on here, I'll be using replacement words like 'damn' and 'crap' so, idk, but if you want you can replace those words with words you think would actually go there, but tbh i don't recommend it.


Profiles that havn't been edited:

Name: A.j.
• Gender: FEM
Age (15-18) 16
Appearance: long red hair, with a old truckers cap (if you Google Bobby SPN it's the hat he's wearing) black and red flannel, dark ripped jeans, black combat boots
Personality (try to be specific): nerd, introvert, romantic, smart, shy, can be phycopathic, IS A sociopath
How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): I would like to be in S2 pls and thx
Extra: sorry if this doesn't fit, bc I've been to busy playing UNCHARTED jk but I'm a fan of SPN Sherlock and Hamilton irl and story so X3

• Name: Mandy Banks
• Gender: Female
• Age: 17
• Appearance: Sexy af. Black hair going straight down to shoulders, purple eyes. Purple skirt, pale purple boot shoes, white button up shirt and purple tinted sunglasses. Would betray best friends within batting her eyes
• Personality (try to be specific): Would do anything to protect herself. Selfish, liar, manipulative, bossy, evil. Would even kill if it means she doesn't have to suffer. Weakness is yogurt
• How far do you want to get in the story: One of the sole survivors or at least really far? If this character survives Season 1, they might die early in Season 2?
•Extra: Antagonist of the season?

• Name: Sakai Izo
• Gender: Male
• Age (15-18) 18
• Appearance: Black Curly hair, Sorta muscular (but not absolute bodybuilder), Green eyes, Always wears a bandanna mask
• Personality (try to be specific): Mysterious, Misunderstood, Protective, Almost Silent, Wise, Has constant silent rage
• How far do you want to get in the story? Doesnt matter, but he'll probably die =3
•Extra: He tries to stay solo, but he'll help out others when needed (But he wont stick around with them long because tRuST iSsUEs)

• Name: Wren Gader
• Age (15-18): 16
• Gender: Female
• Appearance: Mousy brown hair, matching brown eyes. Lots of freckles, quite strong as she lived on a farm (pre-whatever this is). However, she is quite short, and no one takes her that seriously. She usually wears all black and a grey scarf that covers her face.
• Personality (try to be specific): Wren is extremely shy as she was the youngest of all her siblings, she usually just hid behind them and never said anything. She's also very awkward as she fears she'll say something wrong because of all the times her siblings berated her for just that. She doesn't fight for herself verbally as she always had her family to protect her. Even so, she is exceptional with hand to hand combat as her brother taught her several self-defense techniques.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you might be back for part II. (S2): Even though she seems feeble, she will probably be one of the suckers who pull through. Whether she likes it or not.
•Extra: She has four older siblings (two sisters and a brother).

• Name: River
• Gender: Female
• Age (15-18): 17
• Appearance: Teal hair and eyes. Light gray tank top with short jean shorts. 3 small bangles 2 arm the other on the other. Each colour having a meaning.
• Personality (try to be specific): Is daring to do anything, is caring, smart when it comes to last second decisions, Serious but mostly funny.
• How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): Maybe top 4 people.
•Extra: Will do anything for a friend before myself.

Name: Kitsune "Kit" Robinson
Gender: Male
Age (15-18): 16
Appearance: Very thin, meager, messy black hair, no facial hair, 5'8", male, white, looks weak but is very stealthy.
Personality: Fun (but only once you get to know him), apathetic, sarcastic, intelligent, prefers not to get involved with things unless there's a specific benefit for him, secretly not confident and very self-conscious, quiet.
How far do you want to get in the story? I really don't care too much, just take my character as far as you think he can go.
Extra: He flies solo unless he's forced to work with others or he gradually warms up to someone over time.

The little girl from A.j, Mandy, and Sakai's teaser. She's now 14 and is great at gun and hand to hand combat. She doesnt remember how her parents died and sakai and a.j dont feel shes ready to remember yet.


Profiles that've been edited:

• Name: Garrison Miller
• Gender: Male
• Age: 20
• Appearance: Has dark-brown hair, pale skin, and aqua-colored eyes. Is lean and 5'9. Wears gray jeans, a long-sleeved white shirt, and black tennis shoes. Is generally weak, but can be skilled with weapons.
• Personality (try to be specific): He's very intelligent, along with being strategic. He's often skeptical and negative, but always looking out for the people close to him. He's quiet at times, but is open with friends.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you may be back for part II. (S2): I'd like to make it particularly far in the story (At 3 people, maybe even living would be cool). But, whatever works for you I'm fine with!
•Extra: Idk, good luck on the story! Oh and this.

Kiria is a mde-up character who is only here for this episode (a.k.a teaser).
She's 12 years old, and is Garrison's daughter. She's intelligent and mature, and she knows what she's doing.

James is Garrison's brother. He's in this episode and another episode too, but later in this series. He's tough and stubborn, but no matter how heated things get, he'll always stand up for his family even if it means he's on the losing side.

Tal? Who?





...Ehhhh.. Choices results:


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random.org says all:
C WINS :D




'Two Reflections In The Night'

"..Aki... Please.. Stop..." Nicole shook Aki's bomber-jacket sleeve. "You've gotta stop... It hurts more when you're running.. And it hurts you too.. Don't deny it.. Please, Just stop..."
"...I can't!" Aki starts bleeding from a slit on his forehead. It runs down his noise and the side of his eye. "If we get back quicker, we'll get seen to faster!"
"AKI!" Nicole starts crying, it hurt to shout. "Stop.. W-We need to rest.."


Aki puts Nicole down, but sits her up on the wall. She can't move by herself. Aki starts to keep walking the way he was going.
"...Aki!?" Nicole watches him with widened eyes.
"...I'm getting you help. We'll get you over the wall.. You'll be safe! The herd's still a while away, I'll be quick!" Aki starts to run off on a left-ward slant, limping.
"....Aki.."



A P.O.V of two silhouettes


She shouted: "Keep running!"

"You too, Einstein!" He laughed slightly.
He grabbed the two pocket-knives that fit in to his slit pockets and she grabbed two machetes from two holders at her sides. But they kept running still. They put their arms behind them in a running position to make them run faster. (
It's how the guy runs on the roof here:
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~3 hours passed~


~Nicole, Still waiting for Aki, or someone to drop from the wall and get her. She keeps looking up at the wall and trying not to look at the herd. They've lost their weapons when they fell.~


~back to those other guys~

"I CAN SEE IT!" She shouted. She looked at him.
"...Same! C'mon! We gotta keep going!" He shouted back when he looked at her.

Within ten minutes, they were touching the hard Wurtzite boron nitride wall. (Hardest substance, comes from meteorites). They were both sweating buckets.
"Whew.. We made it! Finally...! ....But we still got a while to go, right?" She looked at him yet again.
"..A kilometer and a 1/4-ish" He headbutted the wall. "We better start going again, then..." He then peered round the wall, to the other side.

He sees a girl - Nicole.
The herd is about twenty minutes away from her. It's closer to that side than any other.
"....River. Get take a look at this." He peered round the wall.
"...Tal? W-What's wrong?"
she peers round the wall
"..What the heck is she doing!? We HAVE TO GET HER OUT OF THERE!" River shouted. She ran off. Tal followed.
"Tal! In front!" River slowed down and let Tal overtake her. "Grab her!" River then slid on the grown sideways to stop herself. She waited for him to grab her.
One of the monsters grabbed Nicole's arm and got close to her face, then it growled at her.
Tal grabbed the monster's arm and wrestled it to the ground, then got up and grabbed Nicole, he then zipped off to River, who was waiting for him. Then the battalion on the wall started shooting at the herd. They were right at the wall.. The wall's indestructible, though.
Atleast they didn't see the three of them.



~Half a day later, The herd only has a fifth of what it started with left. The 3 of them are close to the gate.~

River stops Saike by getting closer to him while running and dragging his sleeve while she stopped herself running by sliding her feet sideways.
River checks up on Nicole.
"..Here, I can carry her the rest of the way." River held her hands out for Tal to hand Nicole over to her.
"...Fine. But only 'cause my arms are nearly dropping off." He hands her over. "There'll be medics in here for her."
"Alright, There'll only be a few more minutes of straight running, right?" River looked at Tal in question.
Tal stared at the gate in the distance. "Yeah, Come on,"
They started running again.


There was constant electrocution noises from the top of the wall where A.J's charge gun was still going beserk. Sakai was peering over the wall that curved over the top of the gate like a bridge going over a river. He stared at them.

"WHO ARE YOU, AND WHY DO YOU HAVE NICOLE!?" Sakai was angry. Garrison climbed up the ladder and looked over. A.J also stopped shooting.
Garrison turned around and shouted to Kitsune
"Kit! Open the gate!"
"W-Will do, Garrison!"
Ellie helped him pull the chain down for the gate. They got the three of them in fast. Wren slid down the ladder with Sakai and A.J. Sakai grabbed Nicole from River and thanked them. A.J Ran over to them and hugged them tightly. A.J offered for them to come with them. They told A.J and Garrison of how they had ran all the way there to be safe. He offered them a job on the wall and they accepted. They accompanied them to the hospital where Aki and Nicole had been given their own ward.

James and Mandy were there.


..Sakai took one look around the door.
....he slung back around...
...Looked A.J right in the eyes....
(like this v)
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...And right behind the hospital ward door.
"SAKAI!!" Wren screeched quietly.
"MANDY'S IN THERE!" They kept screeching under their breath. Sakai picked up A.J and brought her in to the ward. Everyone was hurrying around Nicole. Sakai plopped A.J In a bed across from Nicole.
"What the heck happened to her!?" Garrison glared at Sakai.
"She tripped!"(Sakai) "She was tired!" (Wren) (At the same time)

Garrison took a long and hard stare at them.
"Mmm-hmm?" He squinted his eyes. He then went close to Sakai and Wren's ears (In the middle of them, he had to bend down a bit. He pretended he was looking at A.J. He whispered to them.
"Mandy?"
"..Yeah, Sir.." They both said.


"...I shouldn't have left her." Aki thought







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Choices:


A. Punish Aki for running off. Do nothing about getting Mandy out of the room.

B. Get Mandy out of the Hospital room before Nicole and A.J wake up. This'll make Garrison angry. But just tell Mandy himself. (Sakai)

C. Let them wake up. Nothing else - It's that simple.


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YEAH! But another hard-ish decision. Grrreeeeeaaaaaatt XD. but at least my character sounds like another AOT person.
STORY IS AMAZING! KEEP UP DE GOOD WORK!

EDIT: ummm where do we place our vote? The choices thing isn't up
 
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