The Orphanage - What a 'wonderful' place to be! - Part. 1

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Before it starts, I'm sure you'd like some insight on the characters! So, here we go:

Book/@Bookeh:
She's a feisty, rebellious type. She disobeys Madame Swindone regularly, but it also a good helping hand/friend when you need her.
Backstory:
Her father was both alchoholic and abusive. Not only to her mother, but also to her. This caused her to set out on a mission; a runaway mission. So, she did. She's been now at the orphanage for 18 months.

Moon/@Moonberreh:
She's the smart, crafty type who's timid but also has a sassy side. She's the leader type, and always in charge because of her brains.
Backstory:
Both her parents passed away in a car crash, and as her grandparents were also dead, she was sent off to Madame Swindone's orphanage. She's lived here for 2 1/2 years.

Hunt/@X_Huntress_X:
She's a secretive, cautious type. She's always worried about getting in trouble, but when you get to know her, she's the loudest person you'll meet!
Backstory:
Her mother died of at birth, and father couldn't handle it and commited suicide. She's been at the orphanage for her whole life.

Citrine/@CitrineRaindrop:
She's the loud, gullible type, who always falls for silly pranks etc.
Backstory:
Her father left her at a young age, so it was her and her mum. However, she had a teen mother, meaning she was very much incapable of caring for her child, so she sent her away to Madame Swindone.

And of course...
Madame Swindone:
She is a rude, sassy and strict lady who owns the orphanage.

Let's start, shall we?
~=~
Chapter one

~Book's P.O.V~

It was a crisp November evening. Everything was silent until;
"Okay children! Listen up. It's 8:30pm. By 8:45 I want you ready for bed. Clear?!" squealed Madame Swindone.
"Yes, Miss Swindone." answered the 4 girls.
"AHEM!" she chanted.
"M-Madame." they whispered, frightened.

***
I swiftly shoved on my ugly, frilly nightdress that Miss Swindone (or as I like to nickname her, Miss Ratface!) insists that we wear. I heaved by body to the sinks were my toothbrush was kept. I wrapped my fist around the toothpaste tube, and squeezed some out. I then brushed my teeth. I checked the time. 8:38, already?! I quickly sped back to the dormitory, greeting the other 3, who were ready.
"I haaaaate Miss Ratface." I moaned.
The others nodded.
"Oh well," I said, "I guess we'll have to sleep."
I flicked the light switch, triggering the rest of the lamps and light bulbs. I then placed my head on the soft, warm pillow.

***
I'd never woken so early in the entirety of my life! Screeching sirens and bellowing men's voices echoed outside. I blinked, and crept up to the window. I then saw Miss Ratface standing before a short, plump man wearing a striking yellow hat. I listened into the conversation.
"You CANNOT shut this orphanage down!" she screamed, "I have 4 pathetic children to care for!"
When she insulted us, my eyebrows furrowed. It angered me that talked about us in such a manner behind our backs! I clenched my fists, but then heard the yawning of fellow roomates...

~Moon's P.O.V~

I woke up yawning, and saw Book standing at the window, fists clenched, eyebrows furrowing. I felt to ask 'what's up?' or 'how are you?' but then erased the idea, as I knew it would anger her further. I then noticed the utter racket of cranes, vans and sirens outside. I accompanied Book up by the window, and saw Madame Swindone arguing with a plump builder of some sort. Book realised my presence and greeted me with:
"Ratface said we're pathetic!" she squealed, clearly angered "And someone wants to shut this place down!"
I saw her eyes light up when she said that.
"Heh- cool, I guess?" I replied, awkwardly.
"Ugh, forget it." she moaned, "I'm hungry."

~=~

So I hope you enjoyed reading this first part of 'The Orphanage'! <3
 
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Before it starts, I'm sure you'd like some insight on the characters! So, here we go:

Book/@Bookeh:
She's a feisty, rebellious type. She disobeys Madame Swindone regularly, but it also a good helping hand/friend when you need her.
Backstory:
Her father was both alchoholic and abusive. Not only to her mother, but also to her. This caused her to set out on a mission; a runaway mission. So, she did. She's been now at the orphanage for 18 months.

Moon/@Moonberreh:
She's the smart, crafty type who's timid but also has a sassy side. She's the leader type, and always in charge because of her brains.
Backstory:
Both her parents passed away in a car crash, and as her grandparents were also dead, she was sent off to Madame Swindone's orphanage. She's lived here for 2 1/2 years.

Hunt/@X_Huntress_X:
She's a secretive, cautious type. She's always worried about getting in trouble, but when you get to know her, she's the loudest person you'll meet!
Backstory:
Her mother died of cancer, and father couldn't handle it and commited suicide. She's been at the orphanage for 6 months.

Citrine/@CitrineRaindrop:
She's the loud, gullible type, who always falls for silly pranks etc.
Backstory:
Her father left her at a young age, so it was her and her mum. However, she had a teen mother, meaning she was very much incapable of caring for her child, so she sent her away to Madame Swindone.

And of course...
Madame Swindone:
She is a rude, sassy and strict lady who owns the orphanage.

Let's start, shall we?
~=~
Chapter one

~Book's P.O.V~

It was a crisp November evening. Everything was silent until;
"Okay children! Listen up. It's 8:30pm. By 8:45 I want you ready for bed. Clear?!" squealed Madame Swindone.
"Yes, Miss Swindone." answered the 4 girls.
"AHEM!" she chanted.
"M-Madame." they whispered, frightened.

***
I swiftly shoved on my ugly, frilly nightdress that Miss Swindone (or as I like to nickname her, Miss Ratface!) insists that we wear. I heaved by body to the sinks were my toothbrush was kept. I wrapped my fist around the toothpaste tube, and squeezed some out. I then brushed my teeth. I checked the time. 8:38, already?! I quickly sped back to the dormitory, greeting the other 3, who were ready.
"I haaaaate Miss Ratface." I moaned.
The others nodded.
"Oh well," I said, "I guess we'll have to sleep."
I flicked the light switch, triggering the rest of the lamps and light bulbs. I then placed my head on the soft, warm pillow.

***
I'd never woken so early in the entirety of my life! Screeching sirens and bellowing men's voices echoed outside. I blinked, and crept up to the window. I then saw Miss Ratface standing before a short, plump man wearing a striking yellow hat. I listened into the conversation.
"You CANNOT shut this orphanage down!" she screamed, "I have 4 pathetic children to care for!"
When she insulted us, my eyebrows furrowed. It angered me that talked about us in such a manner behind our backs! I clenched my fists, but then heard the yawning of fellow roomates...

~Moon's P.O.V~

I woke up yawning, and saw Book standing at the window, fists clenched, eyebrows furrowing. I felt to ask 'what's up?' or 'how are you?' but then erased the idea, as I knew it would anger her further. I then noticed the utter racket of cranes, vans and sirens outside. I accompanied Book up by the window, and saw Madame Swindone arguing with a plump builder of some sort. Book realised my presence and greeted me with:
"Ratface said we're pathetic!" she squealed, clearly angered "And someone wants to shut this place down!"
I saw her eyes light up when she said that.
"Heh- cool, I guess?" I replied, awkwardly.
"Ugh, forget it." she moaned, "I'm hungry."

~=~

So I hope you enjoyed reading this first part of 'The Orphanage'! <3
Could you change the cancer part...

Thats personal to me my real mother survied cancer.
 
EVERY. TIME. I. WRITE. A. BOOK. SO. DOES. EVERYONE. ELSE. I'M. INSPIRING. OR. SOMETHING.
 
awesome first part! :D
 
This is really GOOD
 
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