The Day I found out I was Dying (Please read) [spreading awareness] (Upsetting)

[reddd]

This is a post I've made myself to raise awareness of the feeling of having a set time to die - this can be any illness, not any specific one. Please enjoy and spread the word if possible.




The day i found out i was dying,
I was rushed to hospital.
They told me i'd fallen -
What's happening..?

The day I found out I was dying,
I snook in to the waiting room.
I saw my parents crying.
I don't have a long time.

The day I found out I was dying,
My class made me a card.
"Hope you get better soon!"
"All the best wishes, the guys!"

The day I found out I was dying,
My friend stayed with me.
I cried on their shoulder,
They didn't even pry.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't see straight.
I was off the charts,
I was round the bend.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't feel a thing.
Only for a while,
But it still stings.

The day I found out I was dying,
They told me I couldn't go home.
They told me I had to stay,
They told me this was my home.

The day I found out I was dying,
I had an operation.
The docters said I'm OK,
But then my parents cried.

The day I found out I was dying,
My legs stopped working.
I dragged myself along the floor,
But they wouldn't switch on again.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't hear a thing.
My ears screamed,
My heart screached.

The day I found out I was dying,
I coughed up blood.
I bled from my nose,
They still say I'm OK.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't feel my arms.
I couldn't hold their hands,
I just don't know anymore.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't sit upright.
The doctors say I'm paralysed.
But they promised me I was OK.

The day I found out I was dying,
They had told me straight.
I had 30 days.
And they won't go to waste.

The day I found out I was dying,
I cried again with my friend.
They told me not to give up,
It was only beginning.

The day I found out I was dying,
I went blind.
I could only hear,
I promise I'm still here...

The day I found out I was dying,
The beeping machine stopped.
My skin went pale,
My breath went cold.

The day I died,
My parents cried.
My friends cried.
My class cried.
.....
.....
.....
.....
.....
I promise you... i tried.

 

[yuc KK y]

holy crap that's depressing

 

[HuskyInAHat]

This is so amazingly written

 

[reddd]

holy crap that's depressing

This is so amazingly written

thanks guyss

 

[Cloud]

holy crap this made me cry ;-;

 

[reddd]

holy crap this made me cry ;-;

awh im sorry!! I wrote it and i was tearing up too picking the words im sorryyy!!

 

[aiden]

help I've fallen and I cant get up

 

[doge can rap levitate]

hey are you actually dying? if so lord help you


but if you arent, amazing story

 

[reddd]

help I've fallen and I cant get up

lol

hey are you actually dying? if so lord help you


but if you arent, amazing story

No, im not but thank youu

 

[allykardashian]

woah i think im going to cry, brilliant and such a touching story

 

[Lolbye]

I almost cried. Nevermind, i pretty much did. This is such an amazingly well written... oh my god. Thats so depressing. I was about to say something sappy. But I'm going to cry if i do.

 

[reddd]

woah i think im going to cry, brilliant and such a touching story

I almost cried. Nevermind, i pretty much did. This is such an amazingly well written... oh my god. Thats so depressing. I was about to say something sappy. But I'm going to cry if i do.

haha thanks guys
this is the first time ive wrote something thats made you guys cry, im sorry
ill join in, i was crying a bit while writing and picking the words for it

 

[ilyd]

The tears start now ~ ♥

 

[aullie]

this is-- UGH youre such a good writer i cried omy

 

[Emviar]

I have faith in this generation's ability to create good poetry thanks to you.

 

[Valiencian]

Are these the first tears I've felt in three years? Yep. Don't judge me



Anyways so amazingly written and I'm really proud of you Red. You go!

 

[Bori]

Wow, this is beautiful. After reading this, I legit stood up, and uh.. started tearing up, so I got comfort food. ;w;

 

[SomePersonn]

This is a post I've made myself to raise awareness of the feeling of having a set time to die - this can be any illness, not any specific one. Please enjoy and spread the word if possible.




The day i found out i was dying,
I was rushed to hospital.
They told me i'd fallen -
What's happening..?

The day I found out I was dying,
I snook in to the waiting room.
I saw my parents crying.
I don't have a long time.

The day I found out I was dying,
My class made me a card.
"Hope you get better soon!"
"All the best wishes, the guys!"

The day I found out I was dying,
My friend stayed with me.
I cried on their shoulder,
They didn't even pry.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't see straight.
I was off the charts,
I was round the bend.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't feel a thing.
Only for a while,
But it still stings.

The day I found out I was dying,
They told me I couldn't go home.
They told me I had to stay,
They told me this was my home.

The day I found out I was dying,
I had an operation.
The docters said I'm OK,
But then my parents cried.

The day I found out I was dying,
My legs stopped working.
I dragged myself along the floor,
But they wouldn't switch on again.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't hear a thing.
My ears screamed,
My heart screached.

The day I found out I was dying,
I coughed up blood.
I bled from my nose,
They still say I'm OK.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't feel my arms.
I couldn't hold their hands,
I just don't know anymore.

The day I found out I was dying,
I couldn't sit upright.
The doctors say I'm paralysed.
But they promised me I was OK.

The day I found out I was dying,
They had told me straight.
I had 30 days.
And they won't go to waste.

The day I found out I was dying,
I cried again with my friend.
They told me not to give up,
It was only beginning.

The day I found out I was dying,
I went blind.
I could only hear,
I promise I'm still here...

The day I found out I was dying,
The beeping machine stopped.
My skin went pale,
My breath went cold.

The day I died,
My parents cried.
My friends cried.
My class cried.
.....
.....
.....
.....
.....
I promise you... i tried.

I'm crying

 

[reddd]

The tears start now ~ ♥

this is-- UGH youre such a good writer i cried omy

I have faith in this generation's ability to create good poetry thanks to you.

Are these the first tears I've felt in three years? Yep. Don't judge me



Anyways so amazingly written and I'm really proud of you Red. You go!

Wow, this is beautiful. After reading this, I legit stood up, and uh.. started tearing up, so I got comfort food. ;w;

I'm crying

haha thank you guyss

 

[Stelthy_River007]

HOLY JUACAMOLY. When I first read the first few ones I was thinking "Hmm this sounds like that movie I watched on the bus" Until I kept reading. What. The. Actual. Heck. I can just feel the emotion burn through the screen and into my heart. But no, I didn't cry. Only stuff that I have experience mostly makes me cry for some reason. (I'm a very non emotional person at times.)







(Everyone else basically stole what I was going to say....)