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This is a story I wrote last night, if it has any mistakes just tell me and I'll update it.

Once a girl asked her mother, father and Grandma if they could live without her, they said no... But what the girl's parents and grandmother didn't know was she had a tumor on her heart, the girl didn't know either... Days past. A week later, the girl fell to the ground clutching her heart in pain, she went to hospital... As the doctors were wheeling her into surgery, the girl had a final request... To hug her parents and Grandma and hold their hands for the final time... As 8 hours pass, the doctor comes out with good and bad news "Good news: She's pulled through the surgery, Bad news is, until we get a heart donor, she's got limited time to live".

A week passes, once again this girl has another pain in her heart, she's wheeled into surgery for the last time... 10 horrendous hours pass, once again, the doctor comes out... "I have news, she's made it tthrough the surgery. A month passes and she goes home to find a letter sitting on her bed "Dear Jane, if your reading this, you probably made it through the surgery. I love you. You know I was dying too. Love Grandma"
 
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Aww, I literally got sad inrl.
 
liudmil said:
Aww, I literally got sad inrl.
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Well... This was my first story made, looks like I did good to reach everyone's emotions
 
But. No. HOW.
 
Cookie_Pugs said:
This is a story I wrote last night, if it has any mistakes just tell me and I'll update it.

Once a girl asked her mother, father and Grandma if they could live without her, they said no... But what the girl's parents and grandmother didn't know was she had a tumor on her heart, the girl didn't know either... Days past. A week later, the girl fell to the ground clutching her heart in pain, she went to hospital... As the doctors were wheeling her into surgery, the girl had a final request... To hug her parents and Grandma and hold their hands for the final time... As 8 hours pass, the doctor comes out with good and bad news "Good news: She's pulled through the surgery, Bad news is, until we get a heart donor, she's got limited time to live".

A week passes, once again this girl has another pain in her heart, she's wheeled into surgery for the last time... 10 horrendous hours pass, once again, the doctor comes out... "I have news, she's made it tthrough the surgery. A month passes and she goes home to find a letter sitting on her bed "Dear Jane, if your reading this, you probably made it through the surgery. I love you. You know I was dying too. Love Grandma"
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This is very sad and Its a great story
 
Thanks guys! i tryed to make this as sad as i could think so...
 
i feel like ive swallowed knife's
 
AmazeAiden said:
Wat

If you have a brain and nerves then you ahould have emotion, there is no exception for luxrays
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long story
red wanted to be friends with the really bad scientist who took out people's emotions stuff but he did it to red too
 
Farenhite - CCBT said:
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long story
red wanted to be friends with the really bad scientist who took out people's emotions stuff but he did it to red too
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That's not a long story..
For that to happen, the "really bad scientist" must have erased certain parts of your limbic system in the brain, so if you want your emotions back, you'll need a doctor to transplant the areas of the limbic system that were damaged or destroyed.
 
AmazeAiden said:
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That's not a long story..
For that to happen, the "really bad scientist" must have erased certain parts of your limbic system in the brain, so if you want your emotions back, you'll need a doctor to transplant the areas of the limbic system that were damaged or destroyed.
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im fine
 
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