Rising from the dead.

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This is my story! So it won't be good cause I'm bad at stories as I NEVER write stories, but I tried to give a go at it. Enjoy!


A chill was sent down my spine as I felt it loom behind me as I opened the old rusty creaking door. It was dark and well... scary? Let's say it as that... I was terrified that I had to do this as a dare.. I was very dumb, well I felt like it anyways.. heh... Suddenly a pot fell down and was SMASHED by the old floor. "AH!" I screamed, but then I was even more terrified as in movies that I watched, everytime someone screamed something awful would happen! I walked down the long 'echoey' corridor. It was a big house I must say, but more importantly TERRIFYING! 'tick tock tick tock..' went the clock "What was that?' I said in a terrified voice, I was so scared I couldn't move.

Soon I passed out, as I woke up I saw my well grandparents, but like they were away, for a good couple months. I didn't believe that they would just randomly live in this old rusty house, it's just like not them!

My 'grandparents' were just staring... whispering something but I couldn't hear ANYTHING it's like they just fake talking? Or something..
I slowly backed away.. but where ever I went they just... like STARED AT ME

I fell on my back but not hard it wasnt painful as a door was behind me I rushed to get up off the floor get in the room and LOCK the doors..


It wasn't a good idea.. I may say, as it was dark. As everywhere in the house so... eh.
But this time it was just making me breath like heavily like.. REALLY heavily.. I tried to ignore it but I just couldn't then I smelt well.. blood? and as I smelt the 'blood' or whatever it was I stepped in it.. "EWWWW! What is this?! AH is this blood?!" I said while panicking

"It may is my dear, haha." Said someone.

"You've stomped in the wrong path, haven't you my dear." Said another.

"Who are you? I can't see you, I can't like feel you.." I said.

"Haha, you haven't figured out yet? Well were a spirit. You're our like fifth? sixth? I don't know. But I do know ur one of our trapped ones." Said one

"Is there like.. three of you guys?" I said surprised.

"Haha, no two only. We like acting like theres more but there isn't. May you turn on the light sweetheart. It's right behind you." Said one..

"Uh ok.. but I don't see it, is it this... SKULL?!" I said nervously.

"Oh uh, we can't afford a arm one so we got a skull one. Now turn it on! No more questions!" Said the second one.

"Uhh ok.." I felt disgusted, that I had to touch a skull for light. Like who's skull even is it? These 'people' or whoever they are. Their weird for a fact tho I know. Anyways I turned it on.

"See all of these? Their out well trapped ones. But dead.. We'll go easy on you as your grandparents are our friends. Haha." She laughed mysterously.

"Ah! wait.. what do you mean about 'friends'? my grandparents are your friends??.."

"Aha I see she hasn't told you anything, yes WE are her friends. Our names are Lulizet and Kelisha."

*Clap clap* Clapped Lulizet, the one saying like EVERYTHING!

"Ah! It's even more brighter than it was. UHHH you look like 120 e.O" I said in confusion

"Ah well, I'm 100 for your information and Kelisha is 101!" Said Lulizet

"Sooo... what are you exactly..?" I said in a calm voice

"Hahahha!" Cackled the witch

"What is that?..." I wasn't so calm after hearing THAT!

"Oh uh... It's just our roomate, laila shes a witch" Said Kelisha


I was uhh well terrified!
I wanted to get out but well then this happened

"Don't be scared ^>^" Laughed Kelisha

I legit ran the fastest I could out the room and up to the next floor.

Wasn't a good idea...

"I need to go fast and get out of here!" I said while running up the sta-

"AHHHHHHHHHHH" I screamed while well FALLING DOWN THE STAIRS

I had a shocked face as I saw the stairs
"Do these stairs move?.." I said

Suddenly I passed out.

After like I don't know long e.o As I was passed out duh

"Ah where am I, i don't remember much... I passed out again I'm guessing, how long? Anyone here?!" I said panicking


Then I noticed something weird..

"Wait.. is this my house?! was it all a dream?! OMG! YES!" I said happily..

"No it isn't my dear." Said a whisper

"Uh.. what was that?.." I said not so happily after all..

"Dear would you like to go to ur house? If so say Yes if not say No." Said the whisper but like it was closer now..

"Uh.. obviously yes." I said well calm..

"Great! well then this challenge is for you. Esacpe! that's the challenge." Said the whisper even more CLOSER!


I felt heavy breathing on my shoulder but no one was there. I ran well downstairs all safely this time and tried everything! but nothing worked!

"Lila!" Said 'my mom' ??..

I was confused, it sounded like my moms voice, saying MY name!

"Lila! Answer me! Why are you back so late?!" Said 'my mom'

"Oh hi 'mom'??..." I said

"What's wrong? You sound stressed.." 'My mother said'

And once again I passed out..

and woke up EVERYTHING normal.. this time..

"Ah! MOM!" I screamed

My mom ran upstairs, this time I could tell it was really her.

"What is it sweetheart?!" My mother asked

"Oh mom! Another 'nightmare'!" I said with a mix off calmness and stress..

"Oh it's okay sweetheart! You're safe here!" My mother said with a happy look on her face.

It's all normal for now...

I've getting these nightmares for long now... each time scarier.. But I'm not getting anymore nightmares, maybe their gone 'FOREVER'!..
 
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Amazing! Can't wait to see more!
 
Love it! I assume you entered into the event, good luck
 
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