One By One [We'll Call This...Mini-Chapter One!]

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Thank you guys for the support of the teaser!
This is how the story will work:
-The POV will be a different character each chapter(Unless due to specific situations)
-If there is a kill, it might be switched to the murderer's POV for a bit(If it doesn't reveal who the murderer is.)
And just as a note, I'm sorry if I didn't portray your character the way you wanted, I'm learning through this too! :D
This "Chapter" Also isn't very long, once the story is progressed more, I will try to make them a lot longer!
:D I hope you enjoy!(Leave
Kiera's POV
God...where am I? My head is aching. I take a look around the area. A whole bunch of trees and leaves.
"Great." I mutter under my breath as I stand up and brush myself off. Should I yell for help? I mean it's not like I'm in any danger. I shrug and start to wander about the forest. I notice the texture under my feet began to change, looking down I realise I'm on a gravel-like path. Well why not follow it? I don't really have a choice anyways..* After quite a bit of walking, I see a huge mansion in front of me, looking somewhat abandoned. Then I hear a voice somewhere from my left. "Hi!" He says pretty loudly. I jump when I hear his voice. "Can you try a normal approach?" I say a trace of agitation in my tone. "I'm sorry! I didn't mean to scare you I just haven't seen anyone in a few hours and I'm so sorry!" He says quickly.
"Calm down, yeesh! You just scared me that's all. I haven't heard any voices lately either, so you kind of expect it." I sigh,"What's your name?" I ask afterwards. "Oh, my name? My name is Donovan! What's yours?" He asks. "My name is Kie-" we hear a slight creaking noise and freeze.

The door to the mansion was opening.
@Meeshy @FlavoredFox @stelth_elf007 @TeamTyler @gavin @Chrissy @HelloColdWorld @RedHatesBlu
Once more, I am very sorry how short it is :/
 
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YES ITS HERE!

Also Thats how i would act like if i was lonely for hours waiting for people xD
Thanks man
Btw its Donovan not Donvan xD
 
YES ITS HERE!

Also Thats how i would act like if i was lonely for hours waiting for people xD
Thanks man
Btw its Donovan not Donvan xD
Sorry bout' that! Edited! :D
 
Yassss can't wait to see my character
 
That awkward moment when you don't get notified and it's about your darn character

Looking good so far, can't wait for the next chapter!
 
Just saw this now. Great job! I'm excited for more! <3
 
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