Missing Pieces Prologue!

Should I continue?

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LeilaAndStitch

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So I'm finally getting the story started! If enough people like it, I'll continue it. If people don't, I won't. It's just the prologue so it's gonna be a bit short.

In this chapter are three characters.
Zoura
Ortensia
Annie

Prologue:
I pushed my hair out of my face as Annie continued talking. Ortensia was standing behind her watching the clock with her bright green eyes.

"Zoura! Are you listening to me?" Annie continued. I nodded and turned my head back to her. "This is really important! You can't mess it up. If you do-"

"I know, it won't be good." I said before she could say it, "Annie, you and Ori have taught me everything I need to know. It will be fine, I promise." Annie sighed and then handed me a little bundle.

"Make sure you get these to the babies by 4:30" Ortensia said, "remember the illusions we told you about."

"I remember of course! Don't worry about me, I'll be fine." I said. Ortensia and Annie looked at each other and then chorused,

"Good luck!" And with that, they vanished. I stood by myself in a little workshop. All there was in it was a sofa, a table, a few gems, and an old rug. To anyone else, it would look abandoned. But to the three of us, it was full of magic. We were the elves. Although you may be looking at me and thinking 'she's an elf?!' I know, I'm tall. But that isn't my fault. At 6'1 I tower over Annie and Ori. I sat and looked at the clock. 3:45, that left me plenty of time to deliver the rings. What should I do? I have a lot of time. I went to the fridge and opened it. Nothing. I groaned and lay back on the couch. I struggled to keep my eyes open. I yawned, plenty of time to take a nap, I thought. I let the force close my eyes. And I slept.


"Zoura? Wake up!" I sat up and saw Annie shaking me. "Did you deliver the rings?" I forced a nod and tried to push the rings down in my pocket.

"Awesome!" Ori said, "I knew you could do it!" The guilt was eating me alive. So I just grinned nervously. And as we went to eat, I felt the rings burning a hole through my pocket.

The End of the Prologue!
Again:
The chapters will be much longer. So let me know if y'all like it!
 
So far so good!
 
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Wait what this was in Zoura's perspective my gog im happy xD (Just a side note, Zoura classifies themself as Gender Fluid, also known as Genderqueer or Non-Binary, and his gender at birth is male =P)
 
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Woah what when

Edit~
Forgot to finish, but lol
This is amazing daughter! You're. .. ungrounded? Idk, but this is something i would read and never stop reading.
 
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Awesome! I'm really enjoying it so far, keep it up love!
 
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whoever voted 'no' should stop
 
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Actually really interesting, keep it up Leila <3

Can I just mention the rug though? Seems like a really nice rug.
 
Actually really interesting, keep it up Leila <3

Can I just mention the rug though? Seems like a really nice rug.
Aw thanks Mish <3

And I'm sure it was an amazing rug.
 
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