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Hallo everyone! So I enjoy writing and thought I could make a story/game-ish thing. So my favorite book series has a competition of sorts in the first book: a battle of criminals. I thought that maybe I could make a story off of this with a few twists to the storyline. So here's the story plot:

(This is a more medieval time period so nothing ahead of that time period when filling out the application, please.) Once apon a time, there was a world full of magic... but then one day, it was not... You are one of the world's most feared criminals- at least until you we're put behind bars. You have been selected by a sponsor who is part of the kings court. Your sponsor has been given the task to present the king the perfect person to eliminate his enemies and you are what your sponsor thinks will win this for him/her. There is 11 other contestants in this game apart from you and each will stop at nothing to win. Some aren't even human. You will be put through some of the toughest training in the world with an assessment every week, each week one person is eliminated. When the competition is down to the last week the last two criminals will battle, the winner is the King's Champion. Is there a prize you ask? Your reward for winning the most grueling competition of your life is your freedom. Except being the king's servant is not exactly your idea of 'freedom'. The losers-... well they aren't so lucky, they are sent back to wherever they were found. This competition of the king's seems pretty well planned, however there are those who will go... beyond the rules, but making promises to the dark gods in exchange for power isn't the smartest of ideas. If you step out of line just once with them, its over. Those losers will get sent back, provided that they aren't killed before they get the chance to be forced into a prison cell once again. Unfortunately for 11 of you, there can only be one winner to this deadly contest.

Species you can be (I forgot to add these so sorry those of you who didn't get to pick a species):
Human- I think you know what that is.
Witch- You have razor sharp iron nails and teeth that grow over your regular nails and teeth whenever you will it. You ride on a wyvern (dragon). Probably best no one discovers your true heritage. You are also immortal, but only after magic is freed.
Fae- You are a immortal creature in hiding from the king. It is your #1 goal that no one finds out your fae heritage. You have an animal form you can shift into at any time and one elemental power when magic is one day freed. You are also immortal, but only after magic is freed.

Don't make your application unrealistic. Example: Strength: 10, Speed: 9. A person that strong just simply can't be that fast.
Just so you know, your answers to the following questions will play a large part in whether you live, die, or win.
All you need to do to apply is fill out this form. This is a LGBTQ+ story btw. EDIT: PMs don't work for me at the moment so for the time being I'm just gonna reply whether you are accepted or not.

Full name:
Age:

Gender:
Sexuality:
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.):
Sponsor (It could be anyone):

Favorite weapon(s):
Strength (1-10):
Knowledge (1-10):
Speed (1-10):
Trustworthiness (1-5):
Bluffing (1-5):
Confidence (1-5):
Appearance:
Personality:
Strengths (Max: 4):

Weaknesses (At least 3):
Backstory (Optional):
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?):
Anything Else?

NO MORE APPLICATIONS WILL BE ACCEPTED!

Current characters:


Full name: Elain Salvaterre
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bisexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Assassin
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Rowan Thorne (Member of king's court)

Favorite weapon(s): Daggers/bow and arrow/iron nails
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): 9
Speed (1-10): 5
Trustworthiness (1-5): 1
Bluffing (1-5): 5
Confidence (1-5): 4
Appearance:
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Personality: Cruel, unthoughtful, smart, quiet, self conscious.
Strengths (Max: 4): Inhuman strength, calm, and immortality.

Weaknesses (At least 3): The loss of magic, doesn't harm children, she often gets tired fast.
Backstory (Optional): Doesn't wish to tell.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Witch
Anything Else?
Full name: Chyrilos Vendei
Age: 20

Gender: Female
Sexuality: Asexual/Panromantic
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Thief
Sponsor (It could be anyone): A retired Assassin, named Devin Charles.

Favorite weapon(s): Her sword, and small knives.
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): 9
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 3
Appearance: http://imgur.com/a/5kEHE
Personality: Chyrilos is pretty nice, besides the fact she'll take everything you have. She can come off as unemotional, quiet and overall...creepy. She barely talks, usually putting up an "OK" sign or a thumbs up. She does plan on settling down with someone, but she doesn't know when.
Strengths (Max: 4): She needs silence, she likes to meditate when not stealing, she adores the nighttime, and she likes to use potions every now and then.
Weaknesses (At least 3): She hates being in crowds, a lot of light, and she cannot stand spiders at all!
Backstory (Optional): She wants to keep this private...
Anything Else? She's a full Irish girl, she loves to get drunk. Whenever she's alone she likes to doodle on random things.
Full name: Wren
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Aromantic asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Thief and killer.
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Marie Scott, a famous assassin who's known as The Black Rose
Favorite weapon(s): Small axes and daggers/knives
Strength (1-10): 5
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 2
Confidence (1-5): 3
Appearance: Shoulder length curly dark blonde hair. Dark green eyes, small nose, lots of freckles. She is 5'4 - 5'5. She doesn't appear very muscular however for her size she is quite strong. She usually wears long cloaks and a scarf to hide her face and also her weapons. Underneath her cloak is a simple tunic, trousers and sturdy, leather boots.
Personality: Wren may appear short-tempered as she rarely talks until someone makes her mad. She is snarky and is known to roll her eyes a lot. Her sarcasm is so strong many people may actually take her seriously. However she is a bit of a social wreck as she thinks everyone is going to gang up on her. Because of this she is defensive and spiteful.
Strengths (Max: 4): She is logical and can solve puzzles easily. She is also 'immune' to flirting, because she has no attraction to anyone, she does not get flustered or embarrassed when someone tries to flirt with her. She is very accurate with her weapons, her aim is always impeccable.
Weaknesses (At least 3): In comparison to many, she is very weak, this is because she is kinda small. Rats, she hates rats. She always tries to protect young children, this could be exploited as a weakness.
Backstory (Optional): Wren was the youngest of four siblings, her siblings were Robyn, her oldest sister, and Finch and Raven, they were twins. They lived in a kingdom as peasants, their father was a guard and their mother looked after them. When Wren was 11, a plague was unleashed in the kingdom, it was transmitted through rats, making Wren hate them. Wren always wore scarves around her face as she hated to talk, the scarf is actually the thing that saved her life. She never contracted the plague but her entire family did. To save her, her family paid for her safe travel to another town. However, the people that were meant to take her were crooks who took their money and dumped her on the road to die. Fortunately, Wren managed to survive long enough to reach a farm, she was taken in until she was 16 when she ran away after they began to exploit her as a slave. On her own, she made a name for herself as a thief and a murderer as she killed the crooks who left her to die. She's been living as a criminal for over a year until her capture.
Anything Else?: I know this is a lot so nope!
Full name: Knox Martin
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.):
Thief
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Samantha Porter, a mother who is part of the King's Court.
Favorite weapon(s): Knives; he usually has one or two hidden with him
Strength (1-10): 4
Knowledge (1-10): 10
Speed (1-10): 9
Trustworthiness (1-5): 2
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 2
Appearance: Very short dark brown hair, narrow light blue eyes, and pale skin. He is 5'8 and very lean. He is often looked as to not be a threat, but his speed and quick thinking often prove otherwise.
Personality: Knox is very intelligent. He is a quick learner and a quick thinker. He can make the most out of some situations. He is mostly a solo worker, but is willing to work with others if it means winning the competition. He is also very fast.
Strengths (Max: 4): Very fast, intelligent, a quick learner, and a quick thinker.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Is a little weak, a target, and a little indipendent.
Backstory (Optional): Knox grew up with his mother. They were very close. A terrible fire destroyed their village and his mother died soon after. At the age of 17, he travelled in search for another village. He found one, which reluctantly welcomed its new resident. When he was 18, he found a small girl who was 3 wandering around the village. Deciding her guardian was just working, he did nothing. But, day after day, he found her once again. Finally, he decided to take her in. Knox felt as he had the same responsibility as his mother. And the only way he could care for the child was by stealing. This was because he was too young to be hired for a job, or at least, no one would hire him. So he did this, swiftly grabbing anything he could find without being noticed. Once he got caught, he was worried about what would happen to his daughter. He is determined to get out of prison and find his daughter.
Anything Else?: Good luck on the story!
Full name: Liv Hunt
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Murderer/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Richard, the King's step brother
Favorite weapon(s): Her old mini knife/dagger. She always uses the same dagger when killing people.
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): When it comes to killing, she knows a lot, but when it's general knowledge, shes around a 5.
Speed (1-10):
6
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 2
Appearance: Liv is quite short, but has hip-length dark black hair with darker brown tips. Her tan skin brings out her warm emerald eyes and faint freckles. She has small, pointy ears with one cartilage pierced.
Personality: She enjoys killing guilty people, she thinks she does the right thing. But she can never kill anyone who hasn't done anything wrong. If you're nice to her, she'll be nice to you. Often she can be scary by the way she speaks to people, but inside she is actually quite calming. She is always determined to get want she wants, and can be very stubborn.
Strengths (Max: 4): Persuading people that she is right, bluffing, using a knife/dagger and charming anyone who tries to get in her way.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her family, killing innocent people and love.
Backstory (Optional): She doesn't remember a lot, but, her real family disappeared when she was very young, so another family raised her up, her thinking it was her real family. Her 'father' taught him everything he knew about using knives and weapons to protect herself. Her 'mother' thought it was a bad idea and attempted to stop them, but her 'father' flipped and got rid of her. Liv then ran away from her 'father', but still protected herself with everything he taught her, but soon she got out of hand and started to use her weapons for something else.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, she can turn into any type of bird, power; she controls the wind.
Anything Else? She only kills people who are guilty of doing bad things, so she finds it extremely hard to kill innocent people and at times doesn't have the strength to do it.
Full name: Fleur Cadenza Waters
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Biromantic Asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Bounty Hunter/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Jean Paul, once a famous serial killer who went into hiding. Formally known as "Riptider"
Favorite weapon(s): Crossbow, it is designed with jewels and encrusted with symbols
Strength (1-10): 6
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3.5
Bluffing (1-5): 5
Confidence (1-5): 5
Appearance: Jet black hair, with deep gray eyes. Intimidating yet soothing. Shes got tanned skin with freckles spread across her cheeks and nose. Shes got a slightly buffed figure and is quite skinny.
Personality: She is agile, sly, and very deep, emotinally wise. She can be calm and is always ready for anything. She is very secretive and mysterious. She'll never miss a shot and can be very stubborn. Don't try to act smug or you'll be sorry.
Strengths (Max: 4): Never misses a shot*never has*. No one recognises her when shes out of suit. She knows everything, about everyone.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her backstory. Her family. And animals.
Backstory (Optional): She was born into a typical snobby rich family. Sent to the best places and was made sure she was "happy". Fleur was never happy but tried to show on the outside she was. She always felt out of place and as if she wasn't doing what she wanted. When she was 13, her family kicked her out for attempting to pick pocket a elderly woman at the side of the street. Fleur then moved in with her boyfriend who had a record of being a bounty hunter, but retired when someone offered him 1 million to kill Fleur. But then, he encouraged Fleur to become a bounty hunter when he saw how good she was with a gun. Fleur never wanted to embrace her power or the fact she was a fae, but was forced to when she started bounty hunting. Her boyfriend brought out the worst in her, and soon, he would regret it. A year after the events, someone in her class offered her a lot of money to kill her love. She took it. She gave him no mercy. She was so hurt by what she'd become because of him, that in her eyes. He deserved it. She ran away that day, never to be seen again. Until now, shes become more active and has learnt to embrace being a fae, and her powers. But also got attached to nature and its animals.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, shes a coyote. And power to read and manipulate minds.
Anything Else? Thats it! This book sounds amazing!
Full Name: Lauren Diamond
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal Occupation: Assassin/Thief/Bounty Hunter
Sponsor: Daniel, the crown prince
Favorite Weapon: hand-made dagger, with encrusted jewels and intricate designs, along with her pointy gauntlets that can rip out throats in a heartbeat.
Strength: 7
Knowledge: 10
Speed: 9
Trustworthiness: 1 (when you first see her)
Bluffing: 5
Confidence: 4
Appearance: Raven black hair and piercing red eyes. Her features are sharp, being fae with pointed ears. (When she's in her normal form). When you see her, she looks very intimidating, and when she looks you straight on, it feels like she's staring into your soul. She also happens to have Fae beauty in both forms.
Personality: Confident, arrogant, witty, has spunk
Strengths: Has almost perfect aim, hardly loses her confidence, tries to master everything she does and is never discouraged.
Weaknesses: Her family, heavy weapons; mace, longsword, and pretty males
Backstory: Will never tell, but you can get bits and pieces out of by asking questions. All you can really find out is that someone really important to her died. It is assumed that they were horribly murdered. She also hints that around that time is when she began to kill.
Species: Fae; animal form: a human and elemental power: Fire
Anything Else: She has a weakness for luxury and men, so she gets a little... flirty and knows Elain. She also doesn't care of she kills innocents because they "Don't have anything better to do."
 
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Full name: Chyrilos Vendei
Age: 20

Gender: Female
Sexuality: Asexual/Panromantic
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Thief
Sponsor (It could be anyone): A retired Assassin, named Devin Charles.

Favorite weapon(s): Her sword only.
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): 9
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 3
Appearance: http://imgur.com/a/5kEHE
Personality: Chyrilos is pretty nice, besides the fact she'll take everything you have. She can come off as unemotional, quiet and overall...creepy. She barely talks, usually putting up an "OK" sign or a thumbs up. She does plan on settling down with someone, but she doesn't know when.
Strengths (Max: 4): She needs silence, she likes to meditate when not stealing, she adores the nighttime, and she likes to use potions every now and then.
Weaknesses (At least 3): She hates being in crowds, a lot of light, and she cannot stand spiders at all!
Backstory (Optional): She wants to keep this private...

Species: Human
Anything Else? She's a full Irish girl, she loves to get drunk. Whenever she's alone she likes to doodle on random things.
 
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Full name: Wren
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Aromantic asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Thief and killer.
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Marie Scott, a famous assassin who's known as The Black Rose
Favorite weapon(s): Small axes and daggers/knives
Strength (1-10): 5
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 2
Confidence (1-5): 3
Appearance: Shoulder length curly dark blonde hair. Dark green eyes, small nose, lots of freckles. She is 5'4 - 5'5. She doesn't appear very muscular however for her size she is quite strong. She usually wears long cloaks and a scarf to hide her face and also her weapons. Underneath her cloak is a simple tunic, trousers and sturdy, leather boots.
Personality: Wren may appear short-tempered as she rarely talks until someone makes her mad. She is snarky and is known to roll her eyes a lot. Her sarcasm is so strong many people may actually take her seriously. However she is a bit of a social wreck as she thinks everyone is going to gang up on her. Because of this she is defensive and spiteful.
Strengths (Max: 4): She is logical and can solve puzzles easily. She is also 'immune' to flirting, because she has no attraction to anyone, she does not get flustered or embarrassed when someone tries to flirt with her. She is very accurate with her weapons, her aim is always impeccable.
Weaknesses (At least 3): In comparison to many, she is very weak, this is because she is kinda small. Rats, she hates rats. She always tries to protect young children, this could be exploited as a weakness.
Backstory (Optional): Wren was the youngest of four siblings, her siblings were Robyn, her oldest sister, and Finch and Raven, they were twins. They lived in a kingdom as peasants, their father was a guard and their mother looked after them. When Wren was 11, a plague was unleashed in the kingdom, it was transmitted through rats, making Wren hate them. Wren always wore scarves around her face as she hated to talk, the scarf is actually the thing that saved her life. She never contracted the plague but her entire family did. To save her, her family paid for her safe travel to another town. However, the people that were meant to take her were crooks who took their money and dumped her on the road to die. Fortunately, Wren managed to survive long enough to reach a farm, she was taken in until she was 16 when she ran away after they began to exploit her as a slave. On her own, she made a name for herself as a thief and a murderer as she killed the crooks who left her to die. She's been living as a criminal for over a year until her capture.
Anything Else?: I know this is a lot so nope!
 
Full name: Knox Martin
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.):
Thief
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Samantha Porter, a mother who is part of the King's Court.
Favorite weapon(s): Knives; he usually has one or two hidden with him
Strength (1-10): 4
Knowledge (1-10): 10
Speed (1-10): 9
Trustworthiness (1-5): 2
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 2
Appearance: Very short dark brown hair, narrow light blue eyes, and pale skin. He is 5'8 and very lean. He is often looked as to not be a threat, but his speed and quick thinking often prove otherwise.
Personality: Knox is very intelligent. He is a quick learner and a quick thinker. He can make the most out of some situations. He is mostly a solo worker, but is willing to work with others if it means winning the competition. He is also very fast. He is not interested in being in a relationship.
Strengths (Max: 4): Very fast, intelligent, a quick learner, and a quick thinker.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Is a little weak, a target, and a little indipendent.
Backstory (Optional): Knox grew up with his mother. They were very close. A terrible fire destroyed their village and his mother died soon after. At the age of 17, he travelled in search for another village. He found one, which reluctantly welcomed its new resident. When he was 18, he found a small girl who was 3 wandering around the village. Deciding her guardian was just working, he did nothing. But, day after day, he found her once again. Finally, he decided to take her in. Knox felt as he had the same responsibility as his mother. And the only way he could care for the child was by stealing. This was because he was too young to be hired for a job, or at least, no one would hire him. So he did this, swiftly grabbing anything he could find without being noticed. Once he got caught, he was worried about what would happen to his daughter. He is determined to get out of prison and find his daughter.
Anything Else?: Good luck on the story!
 
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Full name: Chyrilos Vendei
Age: 20

Gender: Female
Sexuality: Asexual/Panromantic
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Thief
Sponsor (It could be anyone): A retired Assassin, named Devin Charles.

Favorite weapon(s): Her sword, and pistol.
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): 9
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 3
Appearance: http://imgur.com/a/5kEHE
Personality: Chyrilos is pretty nice, besides the fact she'll take everything you have. She can come off as unemotional, quiet and overall...creepy. She barely talks, usually putting up an "OK" sign or a thumbs up. She does plan on settling down with someone, but she doesn't know when.
Strengths (Max: 4): She needs silence, she likes to meditate when not stealing, she adores the nighttime, and she likes to use potions every now and then.
Weaknesses (At least 3): She hates being in crowds, a lot of light, and she cannot stand spiders at all!
Backstory (Optional): She wants to keep this private...
Anything Else? She's a full Irish girl, she loves to get drunk. Whenever she's alone she likes to doodle on random things.
A pistol would be non-existent in this time period so is there another weapon you would like or just a sword? Anywho, your character is accepted.
Full name: Wren
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Aromantic asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Thief and killer.
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Marie Scott, a famous assassin who's known as The Black Rose
Favorite weapon(s): Small axes and daggers/knives
Strength (1-10): 5
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 2
Confidence (1-5): 3
Appearance: Shoulder length curly dark blonde hair. Dark green eyes, small nose, lots of freckles. She is 5'4 - 5'5. She doesn't appear very muscular however for her size she is quite strong. She usually wears long cloaks and a scarf to hide her face and also her weapons. Underneath her cloak is a simple tunic, trousers and sturdy, leather boots.
Personality: Wren may appear short-tempered as she rarely talks until someone makes her mad. She is snarky and is known to roll her eyes a lot. Her sarcasm is so strong many people may actually take her seriously. However she is a bit of a social wreck as she thinks everyone is going to gang up on her. Because of this she is defensive and spiteful.
Strengths (Max: 4): She is logical and can solve puzzles easily. She is also 'immune' to flirting, because she has no attraction to anyone, she does not get flustered or embarrassed when someone tries to flirt with her. She is very accurate with her weapons, her aim is always impeccable.
Weaknesses (At least 3): In comparison to many, she is very weak, this is because she is kinda small. Rats, she hates rats. She always tries to protect young children, this could be exploited as a weakness.
Backstory (Optional): Wren was the youngest of four siblings, her siblings were Robyn, her oldest sister, and Finch and Raven, they were twins. They lived in a kingdom as peasants, their father was a guard and their mother looked after them. When Wren was 11, a plague was unleashed in the kingdom, it was transmitted through rats, making Wren hate them. Wren always wore scarves around her face as she hated to talk, the scarf is actually the thing that saved her life. She never contracted the plague but her entire family did. To save her, her family paid for her safe travel to another town. However, the people that were meant to take her were crooks who took their money and dumped her on the road to die. Fortunately, Wren managed to survive long enough to reach a farm, she was taken in until she was 16 when she ran away after they began to exploit her as a slave. On her own, she made a name for herself as a thief and a murderer as she killed the crooks who left her to die. She's been living as a criminal for over a year until her capture.
Anything Else?: I know this is a lot so nope!
I really loved this character so she is definitely going to be in the story :)
Full name: Knox Martin
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.):
Thief
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Samantha Porter, a mother who is part of the King's Court.
Favorite weapon(s): Knives; he usually has one or two hidden with him
Strength (1-10): 4
Knowledge (1-10): 10
Speed (1-10): 9
Trustworthiness (1-5): 2
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 2
Appearance: Very short dark brown hair, narrow light blue eyes, and pale skin. He is 5'8 and very lean. He is often looked as to not be a threat, but his speed and quick thinking often prove otherwise.
Personality: Knox is very intelligent. He is a quick learner and a quick thinker. He can make the most out of some situations. He is mostly a solo worker, but is willing to work with others if it means winning the competition. He is also very fast.
Strengths (Max: 4): Very fast, intelligent, a quick learner, and a quick thinker.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Is a little weak, a target, and a little indipendent.
Backstory (Optional): Knox grew up with his mother. They were very close. A terrible fire destroyed their village and his mother died soon after. At the age of 17, he travelled in search for another village. He found one, which reluctantly welcomed its new resident. When he was 18, he found a small girl who was 3 wandering around the village. Deciding her guardian was just working, he did nothing. But, day after day, he found her once again. Finally, he decided to take her in. Knox felt as he had the same responsibility as his mother. And the only way he could care for the child was by stealing. This was because he was too young to be hired for a job, or at least, no one would hire him. So he did this, swiftly grabbing anything he could find without being noticed. Once he got caught, he was worried about what would happen to his daughter. He is determined to get out of prison and find his daughter.
Anything Else?: Good luck on the story!
Accepted :)
 
Yeah yeah Hm, a small dagger please.
 
Full Name: Lauren Diamond
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal Occupation: Assassin/Thief/Bounty Hunter
Sponsor: Daniel, the crown prince
Favorite Weapon: hand-made dagger, with encrusted jewels and intricate designs, along with her pointy gauntlets that can rip out throats in a heartbeat.
Strength: 7
Knowledge: 10
Speed: 9
Trustworthiness: 1 (when you first see her)
Bluffing: 5
Confidence: 4
Appearance: Raven black hair and piercing red eyes. Her features are sharp, being fae with pointed ears. (When she's in her normal form). When you see her, she looks very intimidating, and when she looks you straight on, it feels like she's staring into your soul. She also happens to have Fae beauty in both forms.
Personality: Confident, arrogant, witty, has spunk, and thinks everyone is below her.
Strengths: Has remarkable aim, almost never loses her confidence, tries to master everything she does and is never discouraged.
Weaknesses: Her family, heavy weapons; mace, longsword, and pretty males
Backstory: Will never tell, but you can get bits and pieces out of by asking questions. All you can really find out is that someone really important to her died. It is assumed that they were horribly murdered. She also hints that around that time is when she began to kill.
Species: Fae; animal form: a human and elemental power: Fire
Anything Else: She has a weakness for luxury and men, so she gets a little... flirty and knows Elain. She also doesn't care of she kills innocents because they "Don't have anything better to do."

 
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Full name: Liv Hunt
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Murderer/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Richard, the King's step brother

Favorite weapon(s): Her old mini knife/dagger. She always uses the same dagger when killing people.
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): When it comes to killing, she knows a lot, but when it's general knowledge, shes around a 5.
Speed (1-10): 6
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 2
Appearance: Liv is quite short, but has hip-length dark black hair with darker brown tips. Her tan skin brings out her warm emerald eyes and faint freckles. She has small, pointy ears with one cartilage pierced.
Personality: She enjoys killing guilty people, she thinks she does the right thing. But she can never kill anyone who hasn't done anything wrong. If you're nice to her, she'll be nice to you. Often she can be scary by the way she speaks to people, but inside she is actually quite calming. She is always determined to get want she wants, and can be very stubborn.
Strengths (Max: 4): Persuading people that she is right, bluffing, using a knife/dagger and charming anyone who tries to get in her way.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her family, killing innocent people and love.
Backstory (Optional): She doesn't remember a lot, but, her real family disappeared when she was very young, so another family raised her up, her thinking it was her real family. Her 'father' taught him everything he knew about using knives and weapons to protect herself. Her 'mother' thought it was a bad idea and attempted to stop them, but her 'father' flipped and got rid of her. Liv then ran away from her 'father', but still protected herself with everything he taught her, but soon she got out of hand and started to use her weapons for something else.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, she can turn into any type of bird, power; she controls the wind.
Anything Else? She only kills people who are guilty of doing bad things, so she finds it extremely hard to kill innocent people and at times doesn't have the strength to do it.
 
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Oh boy, Natalie. This was totally based off Throne of Glass.... And I can totally be strength 10 and speed 10. Cain did it, why can't I?? * Wiggles eyebrows *
 
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Full name: Fleur Cadenza Waters
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Biromantic Asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Bounty Hunter/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Jean Paul, once a famous serial killer who went into hiding. Formally known as "Riptider"
Favorite weapon(s): Crossbow, it is designed with jewels and encrusted with symbols
Strength (1-10): 6
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3.5
Bluffing (1-5): 5
Confidence (1-5): 5
Appearance: Jet black hair, with deep gray eyes. Intimidating yet soothing. Shes got tanned skin with freckles spread across her cheeks and nose. Shes got a slightly buffed figure and is quite skinny.
Personality: She is agile, sly, and very deep, emotinally wise. She can be calm and is always ready for anything. She is very secretive and mysterious. She'll never miss a shot and can be very stubborn. Don't try to act smug or you'll be sorry.
Strengths (Max: 4): Never misses a shot*never has*. No one recognises her when shes out of suit. She knows everything, about everyone.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her backstory. Her family. And animals.
Backstory (Optional): She was born into a typical snobby rich family. Sent to the best places and was made sure she was "happy". Fleur was never happy but tried to show on the outside she was. She always felt out of place and as if she wasn't doing what she wanted. When she was 13, her family kicked her out for attempting to pick pocket a elderly woman at the side of the street. Fleur then moved in with her boyfriend who had a record of being a bounty hunter, but retired when someone offered him 1 million to kill Fleur. But then, he encouraged Fleur to become a bounty hunter when he saw how good she was with a gun. Fleur never wanted to embrace her power or the fact she was a fae, but was forced to when she started bounty hunting. Her boyfriend brought out the worst in her, and soon, he would regret it. A year after the events, someone in her class offered her a lot of money to kill her love. She took it. She gave him no mercy. She was so hurt by what she'd become because of him, that in her eyes. He deserved it. She ran away that day, never to be seen again. Until now, shes become more active and has learnt to embrace being a fae, and her powers. But also got attached to nature and its animals.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, shes a coyote. And power to read and manipulate minds.
Anything Else? Thats it! This book sounds amazing!
 
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Full name: Fleur Cadenza Waters
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Biromantic Asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Bounty Hunter/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Jean Paul, once a famous serial killer who went into hiding. Formally known as "Riptider"
Favorite weapon(s): Guns, specifically her Glock 17 pistol with a compensator and red-dot sight.
Strength (1-10): 6
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3.5
Bluffing (1-5): 5
Confidence (1-5): 5
Appearance: Jet black hair, with deep gray eyes. Intimidating yet soothing. Shes got tanned skin with freckles spread across her cheeks and nose. Shes got a slightly buffed figure and is quite skinny.
Personality: She is agile, sly, and very deep, emotinally wise. She can be calm and is always ready for anything. She is very secretive and mysterious. She'll never miss a shot and can be very stubborn. Don't try to act smug or you'll be sorry.
Strengths (Max: 4): Never misses a shot*never has*. No one recognises her when shes out of suit. She knows everything, about everyone.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her backstory. Her family. And animals.
Backstory (Optional): She was born into a typical snobby rich family. Sent to the best places and was made sure she was "happy". Fleur was never happy but tried to show on the outside she was. She always felt out of place and as if she wasn't doing what she wanted. When she was 13, her family kicked her out for attempting to pick pocket a elderly woman at the side of the street. Fleur then moved in with her boyfriend who had a record of being a bounty hunter, but retired when someone offered him 1 million to kill Fleur. But then, he encouraged Fleur to become a bounty hunter when he saw how good she was with a gun. Fleur never wanted to embrace her power or the fact she was a fae, but was forced to when she started bounty hunting. Her boyfriend brought out the worst in her, and soon, he would regret it. A year after the events, someone in her class offered her a lot of money to kill her love. She took it. She gave him no mercy. She was so hurt by what she'd become because of him, that in her eyes. He deserved it. She ran away that day, never to be seen again. Until now, shes become more active and has learnt to embrace being a fae, and her powers. But also got attached to nature and its animals.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, shes a coyote. And power to read and manipulate minds.
Anything Else? Thats it! This book sounds amazing!
You can't use guns.... :/
 
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Full Name: Lauren Diamond
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal Occupation: Assassin/Thief/Bounty Hunter
Sponsor: Daniel, the crown prince
Favorite Weapon: hand-made dagger, with encrusted jewels and intricate designs, along with her pointy gauntlets that can rip out throats in a heartbeat.
Strength: 10 (Not like, crush a rock with your hands strong. More like, she's stable on her feet)
Knowledge: 10
Speed: 9
Trustworthiness: 1 (when you first see her)
Bluffing: 5
Confidence: 5
Appearance:
Raven black hair and piercing red eyes. Her features are sharp, being fae with pointed ears. (When she's in her normal form). When you see her, she looks very intimidating, and when she looks you straight on, it feels like she's staring into your soul. She also happens to have Fae beauty in both forms.
Personality: Confident, arrogant, witty, has spunk
Strengths: Has perfect aim, never loses confidence, tries to master everything (usually succeeds), and is immortal
Weaknesses: Her family, heavy weapons; mace, longsword, and pretty males
Backstory: Find out (Lol I'm just lazy)
Species: Fae; animal form: a human and elemental power: Fire
Anything Else: She has a weakness for luxury and men, so she gets a little... flirty and knows Elain. She also doesn't care of she kills innocents because they "Don't have anything better to do."

I think this is a bit overpowered o-o
 
You can't use guns.... :/
Its been edited. Sorry. Also, sorry if this comes across as rude, but in the future don't correct peoples mistakes for the owner. Its not your story and some people consider these details slightly rude.
 
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Oh boy, Natalie. This was totally based off Throne of Glass.... And I can totally be strength 10 and speed 10. Cain did it, why can't I?? * Wiggles eyebrows *
The only way Cain did it was he was possessed by a demon and had the help of other demons, not to mention he was from the Black Mountains, which aren't in this story.
Full name: Liv Hunt
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Murderer/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Richard, the King's step brother
Favorite weapon(s): Her old mini knife/dagger. She always uses the same dagger when killing people.
Strength (1-10): 7
Knowledge (1-10): When it comes to killing, she knows a lot, but when it's general knowledge, shes around a 5.
Speed (1-10):
6
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3
Bluffing (1-5): 4
Confidence (1-5): 2
Appearance: Liv is quite short, but has hip-length dark black hair with darker brown tips. Her tan skin brings out her warm emerald eyes and faint freckles. She has small, pointy ears with one cartilage pierced.
Personality: She enjoys killing guilty people, she thinks she does the right thing. But she can never kill anyone who hasn't done anything wrong. If you're nice to her, she'll be nice to you. Often she can be scary by the way she speaks to people, but inside she is actually quite calming. She is always determined to get want she wants, and can be very stubborn.
Strengths (Max: 4): Persuading people that she is right, bluffing, using a knife/dagger and charming anyone who tries to get in her way.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her family, killing innocent people and love.
Backstory (Optional): She doesn't remember a lot, but, her real family disappeared when she was very young, so another family raised her up, her thinking it was her real family. Her 'father' taught him everything he knew about using knives and weapons to protect herself. Her 'mother' thought it was a bad idea and attempted to stop them, but her 'father' flipped and got rid of her. Liv then ran away from her 'father', but still protected herself with everything he taught her, but soon she got out of hand and started to use her weapons for something else.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, she can turn into any type of bird, power; she controls the wind.
Anything Else? She only kills people who are guilty of doing bad things, so she finds it extremely hard to kill innocent people and at times doesn't have the strength to do it.
Full name: Fleur Cadenza Waters
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Biromantic Asexual
Criminal occupation (Assassin, ect.): Bounty Hunter/Theif
Sponsor (It could be anyone): Jean Paul, once a famous serial killer who went into hiding. Formally known as "Riptider"
Favorite weapon(s): Crossbow, it is designed with jewels and encrusted with symbols
Strength (1-10): 6
Knowledge (1-10): 8
Speed (1-10): 7
Trustworthiness (1-5): 3.5
Bluffing (1-5): 5
Confidence (1-5): 5
Appearance: Jet black hair, with deep gray eyes. Intimidating yet soothing. Shes got tanned skin with freckles spread across her cheeks and nose. Shes got a slightly buffed figure and is quite skinny.
Personality: She is agile, sly, and very deep, emotinally wise. She can be calm and is always ready for anything. She is very secretive and mysterious. She'll never miss a shot and can be very stubborn. Don't try to act smug or you'll be sorry.
Strengths (Max: 4): Never misses a shot*never has*. No one recognises her when shes out of suit. She knows everything, about everyone.
Weaknesses (At least 3): Her backstory. Her family. And animals.
Backstory (Optional): She was born into a typical snobby rich family. Sent to the best places and was made sure she was "happy". Fleur was never happy but tried to show on the outside she was. She always felt out of place and as if she wasn't doing what she wanted. When she was 13, her family kicked her out for attempting to pick pocket a elderly woman at the side of the street. Fleur then moved in with her boyfriend who had a record of being a bounty hunter, but retired when someone offered him 1 million to kill Fleur. But then, he encouraged Fleur to become a bounty hunter when he saw how good she was with a gun. Fleur never wanted to embrace her power or the fact she was a fae, but was forced to when she started bounty hunting. Her boyfriend brought out the worst in her, and soon, he would regret it. A year after the events, someone in her class offered her a lot of money to kill her love. She took it. She gave him no mercy. She was so hurt by what she'd become because of him, that in her eyes. He deserved it. She ran away that day, never to be seen again. Until now, shes become more active and has learnt to embrace being a fae, and her powers. But also got attached to nature and its animals.
Species (If fae, animal form? Power?): Fae, shes a coyote. And power to read and manipulate minds.
Anything Else? Thats it! This book sounds amazing!
Accepted. Both characters are great. :)
Full Name: Lauren Diamond
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Criminal Occupation: Assassin/Thief/Bounty Hunter
Sponsor: Daniel, the crown prince
Favorite Weapon: hand-made dagger, with encrusted jewels and intricate designs, along with her pointy gauntlets that can rip out throats in a heartbeat.
Strength: 10 (Not like, crush a rock with your hands strong. More like, she's stable on her feet)
Knowledge: 10
Speed: 9
Trustworthiness: 1 (when you first see her)
Bluffing: 5
Confidence: 5
Appearance:
Raven black hair and piercing red eyes. Her features are sharp, being fae with pointed ears. (When she's in her normal form). When you see her, she looks very intimidating, and when she looks you straight on, it feels like she's staring into your soul. She also happens to have Fae beauty in both forms.
Personality: Confident, arrogant, witty, has spunk
Strengths: Has perfect aim, never loses confidence, tries to master everything (usually succeeds), and is immortal
Weaknesses: Her family, heavy weapons; mace, longsword, and pretty males
Backstory: Find out (Lol I'm just lazy)
Species: Fae; animal form: a human and elemental power: Fire
Anything Else: She has a weakness for luxury and men, so she gets a little... flirty and knows Elain. She also doesn't care of she kills innocents because they "Don't have anything better to do."

Ok, so yes looking at this now it DOES seem overpowered, at first I thought it was fine for some reason, but I do plan on continuing the story if this one goes well. As the plot mentions, this world the characters live in has no magic, I'm thinking that after this there is somehow a way they can free magic that is totally different from the way the characters free it in the actual story. This would include the same characters including the ones that would have died in this story. So please do change your character so she is more equal to everyone else. Considering the fact that she is fae, she will be a lot stronger after magic is freed.
 
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The only way Cain did it was he was possessed by a demon and had the help of other demons, not to mention he was from the Black Mountains, which aren't in this story.


Accepted. Both characters are great. :)

Ok, so yes looking at this now it DOES seem overpowered, at first I thought it was fine for some reason, but I do plan on continuing the story if this one goes well. As the plot mentions, this world the characters live in has no magic, I'm thinking that after this there is somehow a way they can free magic that is totally different from the way the characters free it in the actual story. This would include the same characters including the ones that would have died in this story. So please do change your character so she is more equal to everyone else. Considering the fact that she is fae, she will be a lot stronger after magic is freed.
Natalie, Lauren is an over-achiever, meaning that she wants to excel in everything she does. She might seem o.p., but it is just because she trained herself to be so. It's not like I made o.p. on purpose, however, I just want her to be a formidable opponent with an actual chance at winning.
Its been edited. Sorry. Also, sorry if this comes across as rude, but in the future don't correct peoples mistakes for the owner. Its not your story and some people consider these details slightly rude.
I was just trying to inform you.
I think this is a bit overpowered o-o
Same thing as I said to NaNatNat.
 
Natalie, Lauren is an over-achiever, meaning that she wants to excel in everything she does. She might seem o.p., but it is just because she trained herself to be so. It's not like I made o.p. on purpose, however, I just want her to be a formidable opponent with an actual chance at winning.
Katea_, it doesn't matter if Lauren is an over-achiever or not, I'm trying to make this fair for everyone. If you're skilled at almost everything, how is it fair for those who aren't? I clearly stated that your character cannot be o.p. no matter the circumstances. The reason your application matters is because of the assessments. If you are skilled in almost everything when it comes to the assessments you will eventually rise to the top no matter what and based on the fact that I told everyone to use common knowledge when making their character, you will win. So for the sake of making this fair, I'm not going to add your character unless it is changed.
 
Katea_, it doesn't matter if Lauren is an over-achiever or not, I'm trying to make this fair for everyone. If you're skilled at almost everything, how is it fair for those who aren't? I clearly stated that your character cannot be o.p. no matter the circumstances. The reason your application matters is because of the assessments. If you are skilled in almost everything when it comes to the assessments you will eventually rise to the top no matter what and based on the fact that I told everyone to use common knowledge when making their character, you will win. So for the sake of making this fair, I'm not going to add your character unless it is changed.
What, exactly, is it you want me to change? Also, to make it fair, I believe that if you are Immortal currently, that should be changed.
 
What, exactly, is it you want me to change? Also, to make it fair, I believe that if you are Immortal currently, that should be changed.
Your speed needs to be 5 at the most if you wish to keep your strength. If you want you speed to stay just make your strength 9. You will eventually run out of confidence so that can't be a strength. Also last time I checked, fae were also immortal.
 
Your speed needs to be 5 at the most if you wish to keep your strength. If you want you speed to stay just make your strength 9. You will eventually run out of confidence so that can't be a strength. Also last time I checked, fae were also immortal.
Oh, boy. Many points to.. eh... POINT out. :3 First, my strength is not in strength as much as it is in core strength. People can be fast yet strong on their feet, Nat. Confidence does not "run out", either. I can be confident, and that can be played as a strength as it goes hand in hand with bluffing. And, lastly, immortality is "op", seen as they can't die, so that should count as "magic". Let me know if I am incorrect.
 
Oh, boy. Many points to.. eh... POINT out. :3 First, my strength is not in strength as much as it is in core strength. People can be fast yet strong on their feet, Nat. Confidence does not "run out", either. I can be confident, and that can be played as a strength as it goes hand in hand with bluffing. And, lastly, immortality is "op", seen as they can't die, so that should count as "magic". Let me know if I am incorrect.
Katea_ I didn't write the book this is based off of, and when I mean your confidence will "run out", I mean that everyone at one point will doubt their ability to win. When I meant "Strength" in the application I meant physical strength. Yes immortality is magic, but she is not immortal until magic is freed. So you want to continue this argument start a convo with me.
 
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