i wrote a short story called melancholy.

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this is a short story. i may continue it if asked to. leave suggestions or questions or comments or tell me if you want more down below. all characters and words are mine.



blue. those were the color of his eyes, almost as deep and dark as the chlorine tinted water she would swim in for most of her nights. brown. those were the color of her eyes, amber as a burning ember and slightly tinted as green as the color of the grass that grew in their backyards during summer. they spent every spare moment together, him the perfect hero to her fairytale story of life. they would swim together, loving the feeling of the cool, salty spray of the ocean and the brightness of the endless days of june and july and august. they were infinite and nothing could ever break them. until it did. she yelled that there was a riptide. she yelled that it was unsafe. she yelled and yelled but he wouldn’t listen. he went under the waves and his tanned skin would never see the sun again. his eyes were as blue as the ocean and water and the swimming she once loved and her eyes were brown , brown as the single shade of color her life was now.


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