Honeyside Mansion (Part 4)

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THE WAIT HAS BEEN TOO LONG. HERE'S THE NEXT PART! UP NEXT, I WILL WRITE THE END OF THE CURRENT TPZI CHAPTER!
-Akita's Pov-
Of ALL the places we can search, Sarah makes us look around in the basement. Uuuugggghhh.
One of the worse places in your average horror movie, is the BASEMENT. Aside from being stranded in the middle of the woods at midnight...
But that's not the point.
Dogey, Muffin and I head through the moldy doors, right after Sarah and Absol's team.
The air is heavy, sooo heavy. The place smells like sweaty gym socks and butter. It's like my nose is being punched by a butter sock, dipped in gross, wrapped in gross and marinated in gross grossness. I held my orange paw up to my nose, and squinted my eyes. The place was DUSTY. There were old armor stands, and portraits of this old lady. Perhaps it was the first owner of the place....
She sure is ugly.
"Meow, this place must have been glorious in its heyday." Muffin says, in a small voice.
"Yeah no kidding. Look at it now! It's a dump." Dogey says, with a grin.
Dogey holds up one of Pink's pink walkie talkies.
"Well, I wouldnt've chosen this color.." Dogey says, frowning.
"Meow, don't be such a critic." Muffin snaps at Dogey.
Dogey presses the "Speak" button on the device, and says int it,
"This is your captain speaking, where might we possibly find the entrance to the cellar thing"
Sarah looks at Dogey, who is ten feet away.
"Really" she says. "It's right in front of you!"
"O" Dogey says, embarrassed.
Muffin, Dogey and I stare down the stairs, leading to darkness.
"*Gulp*, Who's going first?" I ask.
Muffin and Dogey are both staring at me. Of course. Fine, I take one step on the creaky basements steps. S-s-s-o far so good.
"RRRAH!" Dogey screams, and grasps my shoulders.
I scream, my legs turn to jelly and I fall down the stairs for a while, then... I black out.
-Muffin's POV-
"Meow, DOGEY YOU FOOL!" I yell.
Dogey is on the floor, rolling around laughing. I'm shaking, I take out a flashlight and turn it on quickly, and shine it down the basement. All I see is brown. The air down there is too dusty for me to see. The things I do for friends...
I head down the stairs.
I feel a draft go through me. I shake it off and continue.
...
Seems I've been walking for a while. I look back and -- Oh there's the basement entrance.
I facepalm. I continue on...
Finally, I reach the dirt basement floor, and shine my light up and what do you know, it flickers, and dies.
"What are the odds." I think.
I try to feel around the walls, looking for a switch. I get this feeling that someone is looking at me...
Found the switch. I turn it on, the light is very, very dim-- Hey... is that...?
Akita?!
I-is she okay?
Her eyes are a bright, light red. Not her actual red eyes...... her teeth were bared, claws withdrew, and swaying her tail around.
"A...Akita...?" I say her name.
"Hey there...." She whispered.
That voice... It wasn't Akita's. It sounded like an Old Woman's voice.
Could it be THE woman who died here first? Has her spirit taken over Akita's body?
Akita slowly looks behind me, smiling.
I turn around...
"Hello, kitty..." A male spirit spoke.
I start feeling cold, as if the male spirit is trying to control me... and I black out....
-Dogey's POV-
HAHAHA! That was great kthxbye
Ima play some games.
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Narrator:
?Muffin? and ?Akita? go up the stairs with a zip.
?Muffin? disappears somewhere.
?Akita? walks up to Dogey, who is sitting on the floor playing on a Nintendo 3ds. She stares at him. Dogey looks up, and loses his smile.
"Uh" He said.
?Akita? grabs the back of his neck, and throws him against a wall.
"Agh..!" Dogey chokes on his words. "Akita..."
"I'm not Akita." ?Akita? says.
Just then, Sarah runs down the hall, into the main room where Dogey and that... thing is.
"Are you ok!? I heard--" Sarah cut herself off.
?Akita? was staring directly at Sarah...
"Akita! What's wrong with you!?" Dogey weakly shouts, standing up.
"Dogey.... That's not Akita." Sarah says, terrified.
?Akita? zooms up to Sarah, and scratches Sarah with both paws, in an X formation.
Sarah stumbles back, and falls against the floor, trying to hold back tears.
"Dogey help!" Sarah yells.
"I-I don't want to hurt Akita!" He replies.
"That's not Akita! Dogey face it! Akita may be dead already! Help!" Sarah yells.
"I'm sorry, Akita...." Dogey thinks.
Dogey's shades shine in the moonlight peeking through a window, and puts his "Someone's gonna get pwned" face on.
Dogey jumps onto Akita, making her fall. Dogey's claws, digging through ?Akita?'s skin, and biting her ear.
?Akita? gives out a small yell in pain, and scratches Dogey's face, making him loosen his grip, and shoves him off. ?Akita? stands. Dragazo suddenly rushes down the stairs and throws a knife at ?Akita?'s gem, damaging it and making ?Akita? die. The female spirit leave's Akita's body before she dies, and vanishes into the air.
Dragazo hides his face, Sarah too terrified to do anything else. Dogey staring at Akita's body.
The rest of the teens run into the main room
Dizzy, Fox, and basically everyone else that ran in gasped.
"AKITA!" Pink screams, and breaks down crying.
"She's... Dead?" Fox says, with a tear going down his face.
"Oh no..." Jack says.
Absol just covers her face.
"DRAG! YOU KILLED HER!" Dogey yells.
"I was trying to protect you both!" Dragazo says, with anger.
Sarah looks at Dragazo.
"Did... is he...? Was that a faint smile?" Sarah thinks. "Hmmmm..."
A figure stands in the Mansion doorway, staring at the kids. They stare back.
"You lot are making a big mistake... Just like I did." the figure says to them
.............
TO BE CONTINUED >: )
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Starring!

@MuffinLovesAlot
@Dogey
@TriSarahTops
Featuring!
@PinkWL
@Dragazo?
@outcastjack
@Absol1991
@FoxGold13
 
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Dizzy was featured too, but that's cool..


Great story 10/10!! Much spook very scare such wow
 
I'm just yokin' ya :p *bops nose* it's cool
 
THE WAIT HAS BEEN TOO LONG. HERE'S THE NEXT PART! UP NEXT, I WILL WRITE THE END OF THE CURRENT TPZI CHAPTER!
-Akita's Pov-
Of ALL the places we can search, Sarah makes us look around in the basement. Uuuugggghhh.
One of the worse places in your average horror movie, is the BASEMENT. Aside from being stranded in the middle of the woods at midnight...
But that's not the point.
Dogey, Muffin and I head through the moldy doors, right after Sarah and Absol's team.
The air is heavy, sooo heavy. The place smells like sweaty gym socks and butter. It's like my nose is being punched by a butter sock, dipped in gross, wrapped in gross and marinated in gross grossness. I held my orange paw up to my nose, and squinted my eyes. The place was DUSTY. There were old armor stands, and portraits of this old lady. Perhaps it was the first owner of the place....
She sure is ugly.
"Meow, this place must have been glorious in its heyday." Muffin says, in a small voice.
"Yeah no kidding. Look at it now! It's a dump." Dogey says, with a grin.
Dogey holds up one of Pink's pink walkie talkies.
"Well, I wouldnt've chosen this color.." Dogey says, frowning.
"Meow, don't be such a critic." Muffin snaps at Dogey.
Dogey presses the "Speak" button on the device, and says int it,
"This is your captain speaking, where might we possibly find the entrance to the cellar thing"
Sarah looks at Dogey, who is ten feet away.
"Really" she says. "It's right in front of you!"
"O" Dogey says, embarrassed.
Muffin, Dogey and I stare down the stairs, leading to darkness.
"*Gulp*, Who's going first?" I ask.
Muffin and Dogey are both staring at me. Of course. Fine, I take one step on the creaky basements steps. S-s-s-o far so good.
"RRRAH!" Dogey screams, and grasps my shoulders.
I scream, my legs turn to jelly and I fall down the stairs for a while, then... I black out.
-Muffin's POV-
"Meow, DOGEY YOU FOOL!" I yell.
Dogey is on the floor, rolling around laughing. I'm shaking, I take out a flashlight and turn it on quickly, and shine it down the basement. All I see is brown. The air down there is too dusty for me to see. The things I do for friends...
I head down the stairs.
I feel a draft go through me. I shake it off and continue.
...
Seems I've been walking for a while. I look back and -- Oh there's the basement entrance.
I facepalm. I continue on...
Finally, I reach the dirt basement floor, and shine my light up and what do you know, it flickers, and dies.
"What are the odds." I think.
I try to feel around the walls, looking for a switch. I get this feeling that someone is looking at me...
Found the switch. I turn it on, the light is very, very dim-- Hey... is that...?
Akita?!
I-is she okay?
Her eyes are a bright, light red. Not her actual red eyes...... her teeth were bared, claws withdrew, and swaying her tail around.
"A...Akita...?" I say her name.
"Hey there...." She whispered.
That voice... It wasn't Akita's. It sounded like an Old Woman's voice.
Could it be THE woman who died here first? Has her spirit taken over Akita's body?
Akita slowly looks behind me, smiling.
I turn around...
"Hello, kitty..." A male spirit spoke.
I start feeling cold, as if the male spirit is trying to control me... and I black out....
-Dogey's POV-
HAHAHA! That was great kthxbye
Ima play some games.
----------
Narrator:
?Muffin? and ?Akita? go up the stairs with a zip.
?Muffin? disappears somewhere.
?Akita? walks up to Dogey, who is sitting on the floor playing on a Nintendo 3ds. She stares at him. Dogey looks up, and loses his smile.
"Uh" He said.
?Akita? grabs the back of his neck, and throws him against a wall.
"Agh..!" Dogey chokes on his words. "Akita..."
"I'm not Akita." ?Akita? says.
Just then, Sarah runs down the hall, into the main room where Dogey and that... thing is.
"Are you ok!? I heard--" Sarah cut herself off.
?Akita? was staring directly at Sarah...
"Akita! What's wrong with you!?" Dogey weakly shouts, standing up.
"Dogey.... That's not Akita." Sarah says, terrified.
?Akita? zooms up to Sarah, and scratches Sarah with both paws, in an X formation.
Sarah stumbles back, and falls against the floor, trying to hold back tears.
"Dogey help!" Sarah yells.
"I-I don't want to hurt Akita!" He replies.
"That's not Akita! Dogey face it! Akita may be dead already! Help!" Sarah yells.
"I'm sorry, Akita...." Dogey thinks.
Dogey's shades shine in the moonlight peeking through a window, and puts his "Someone's gonna get pwned" face on.
Dogey jumps onto Akita, making her fall. Dogey's claws, digging through ?Akita?'s skin, and biting her ear.
?Akita? gives out a small yell in pain, and scratches Dogey's face, making him loosen his grip, and shoves him off. ?Akita? stands. Dragazo suddenly rushes down the stairs and throws a knife at ?Akita?'s gem, damaging it and making ?Akita? die. The female spirit leave's Akita's body before she dies, and vanishes into the air.
Dragazo hides his face, Sarah too terrified to do anything else. Dogey staring at Akita's body.
The rest of the teens run into the main room
Dizzy, Fox, and basically everyone else that ran in gasped.
"AKITA!" Pink screams, and breaks down crying.
"She's... Dead?" Fox says, with a tear going down his face.
"Oh no..." Jack says.
Absol just covers her face.
"DRAG! YOU KILLED HER!" Dogey yells.
"I was trying to protect you both!" Dragazo says, with anger.
Sarah looks at Dragazo.
"Did... is he...? Was that a faint smile?" Sarah thinks. "Hmmmm..."
A figure stands in the Mansion doorway, staring at the kids. They stare back.
"You lot are making a big mistake... Just like I did." the figure says to them
.............
TO BE CONTINUED >: )
-------
Starring!

@MuffinLovesAlot
@Dogey
@TriSarahTops
Featuring!
@PinkWL
@Dragazo?
@outcastjack
@Absol1991
@FoxGold13
OH GOD SPOOKYNESS IM SCARED FOR LIFE NOW
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someone make an animation of all these stories together!
 
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