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Stelthy_River007

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Ok so, recently (for about almost 2 years now) I'v been trying to get a writing part for people that need other co-writers to help with stories such as Population 1, Population Reborn and others that are the same. I'v been declined 10 times and those where 10 different stories besides from the stories that I have created on PZ. I just need a little bit of help with this last application because I have too many ideas clogging my head right now. So what I'm going to do is make list each story idea and you get to vote which one you like the most. (Keep in mind most of these are going to be set in the medieval times and most likely have magic because of the theme that has been set).

Underground Family.
Such a big place but not much space, the main families take place at the heart of the rocky place as their hopes of ever seeing the surface vanishes with their dead ansectors. A family hopper and 1 of each of the 4 families' child comes out and seeks the hidden truth.

Sky Kingdom
They say that the world we all used to live in exploded. Well that's a shame, but now we live on the most breath taking sky kingdom in all of history. Where magic thrives to move and live it self, mostly to find it's true owner that might'v been blown in the process of it's making. But soon the heart of magic is dying, how? And why is the most important question, because everything has a reason. No matter what.

Enchanted Woods.
I know what your thinking. This is a classic, not so interesting if it's just about woods. But what if this forest is the very existence of time it self? That caught your eye. Life without time has no meaning.

Others?
If you have a suggestion then please vote for others and comment below an idea.

Thank you for helping me out.
 
Sky kingdom and enchanted forest sound epic, while the underground one could have that moment of "I wanna go to the surface" and have that bootyful panning the camera moment when it happens

I like sky kingdom tho ;) +1
 
Sky kingdom and enchanted forest sound epic, while the underground one could have that moment of "I wanna go to the surface" and have that bootyful panning the camera moment when it happens

I like sky kingdom tho ;) +1

Thx I'll keep that in mind!

{Waiting for 2 more People!}
 
Underground family is just okay, I the concept needs some work and then I think it could work. Maybe make like this:

A mother and father of 4 kids (2 boys 2 girls) were worried their kids would be oppressed and killed by the corrupt government. So they hid their kids underground they also hid a few other kids to hopefully one day rise up and defeat the oppressors. They left their oldest in charge, Rebekah. Over the next few years the parents visited their kids rarely and dropped off new kids to help, and sometimes even brought a new sibling.

I think that'd be a good start for a story, feel free to use that if you want! Also we could write a story together sometime, if you want :)

~AnEmerald
 
Underground family is just okay, I the concept needs some work and then I think it could work. Maybe make like this:

A mother and father of 4 kids (2 boys 2 girls) were worried their kids would be oppressed and killed by the corrupt government. So they hid their kids underground they also hid a few other kids to hopefully one day rise up and defeat the oppressors. They left their oldest in charge, Rebekah. Over the next few years the parents visited their kids rarely and dropped off new kids to help, and sometimes even brought a new sibling.

I think that'd be a good start for a story, feel free to use that if you want! Also we could write a story together sometime, if you want :)

~AnEmerald

Emerald. I didn't give the real run down. Meaning that ur too stupidly close to some of the story concept. Plus I did say vote for which one u liked the most. But anyhow, ur close :p
 
Emerald. I didn't give the real run down. Meaning that ur too stupidly close to some of the story concept. Plus I did say vote for which one u liked the most. But anyhow, ur close :p

I was just giving a suggestion based off of your idea, now other people can vote on it :) and I was just trying to be helpful by giving more detail to that storyline and make it slightly more interesting. Keep in mind I'm not trying to tell you what to do, or trying to tell you I hate your idea, I'm just giving suggestions. :)
 
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I was just giving a suggestion based off of your idea, now other people can vote on it :) and I was just trying to be helpful by giving more detail to that storyline and make it slightly more interesting. Keep in mind I'm not trying to tell you what to do, or trying to tell you I hate your idea, I'm just giving suggestions. :)
Emerald. I SAID UR IDEA WAS SOOOOO CLOSE TO WHAT THE STORY WAS ABOUT XD
 
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