Haute as Hell - Story thread -Still very glitched :(

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Ella : Ever wonder what happens when 11 contestants are locked up into a house 24/7? All competing to be the best model? Well this show might be for you, everybody welcome to....

=+ HAUTE AS HELL +=

10 different people are all placed into a house, monitored 24/7 (Like Big Brother) every week there will a competition based around modelling (It’s a modelling gameshow). At the end of the week the three harsh and brutal judges will discuss who they think should no longer be in the running for haute as hell. Do you think you have what it takes to become haute as hell?

Haute as hell will be uploaded in chunks instead of ‘chapters’ you will know when I have updated since I will reply to all the messages on the thread. Nominations are chosen by me (or the judges) however evictions will be in a random name generator. You are allowed to talk about anything that happens in the show except for evictions as this is counted as a spoiler.
Enjoy!
@Bori @Twixela @Technoscrub @christmochi @cailey_birb @MaeThePidgeon @PepperMints
Week 1
DAY 1 - WELCOME TO HAUTE AS HELL
Jazzy : Ugh, are you guys ready?

Patricia : Um, Ready? Im ecstatic!

Jazzy : But why?

Patricia : Jazzy, why are you acting like this

(At that moment,
Taylor walks in with her hair half done while applying mascara)

Taylor : Jaz is just in a mood because Stellan Prescott, her ex-boyfriend is going to be a contestant

Patricia : Awe Jaz, dont let that get you down, we'll just eliminate him first

Jazzy : Ok to begin, that is not why. And if we get rid of him first, it will obviously rigged so... also everyone should get a fair chance

Taylor : Well ok

(
Taylor walks back into the bathroom en-suite)

Jazzy : Ugh, Pat, idk I'm just stressed

Patricia : Hey, theres still another 10 contestants! Don't just focus on Stellan

Jazzy : I guess you're right

Patricia : ....

Patricia : Was it a bad break-up?

Taylor : Pat!!

Patricia : Sorry, I'm curious!

Jazzy : Ok, yes it was, now hurry up, we've got a show to do.
Crowd : HAUTE AS HELL! HAUTE AS HELL!

(At that moment the room goes silent. The double doors open and Ella walks out wearing a beautiful emerald green gown encrusted with diamonds)

Crowd : WOOOOOO

Ella : Hello everybody!

(Ella walks forward onto the stage podium)

Ella : Welcome everyone to HAUTE AS HELL! Are you all ready?

Crowd : WOOOOOO

Ella : Well then, for anyone who doesn't know what this show is all about, 11 people, strangers are locked up in house monitored 24/7, every week they will take part in numerous tasks to prove if they are worthy of the title 'Haute as hell'. At the end of the week, the judges shall decide who will no longer be in the running for a big cash prize and the right to be called 'Haute as hell' so without further ado, lets meet our first five houseguests!
(The crowd quiets down as the double doors open, a 5'0 girl with periwinkle hair and an eyepatch steps out)

Crowd : WOOOOO

(
Margo steps forward and joins Ella on the stage podium)

Ella : Hello Margo!

Margo : Hiya!

Ella : Are you ready to get into that house?

Margo : Yep, im so excited, sorry to be rude but can i go in?

Ella : Well, i wouldn't say no to that! Go ahead!

(
Margo walks into the house)
(As Margo walks into the house, a taller man with brown hair and tan skin steps out)

Leo : Ciao!

Ella : Ooo! An Italian!

Ella : Come stai?

(Leo comes and joins Ella on the podium)

Leo : Mi sento abbastanza bene, grazie! Come stai?

Ella : Oh, um, i don't know that much Italian, sorry!

(Leo rolls his eyes in a joking manner)

Leo : Well, this got awkward fast, I think ill go in now!

Ella : Yep! Goodbye Leo!
(Leo walks into the house however this time, two house guests step out, one tall man with bright aqua eyes with a sweet and innocent looking girl. They give each other funny looks as they approach Ella)

Ella : Hi!

Ash & Leila : Hi!

Ash : Oh my god who is this?

Leila : I have the same question

Ella : This shouldn't of happened? Are you sure you guys have the right time

Leila : What time is it now?
Ella : 8:10

Ash : AHA!

(Ash shows Ella his wristband which says 8:10)

Ella : Um, Leila, can i see yours?

(Leila shows hers to Ella and realises it actually says 8:20)

Ella : Um, Leila, this says 8:20...

Leila : Wait what? I swear it said 8:10

Ash : Pff, classic

Leila : Excuse me?

Ella : Okkkkk, lets settle down, just go into the house you guys.

(Ash & Leila walk into the house, still looking at each other weirdly. And they a very flamboyant man with white messy hair and feminine hips steps out)

Denji : WHATS UP MY QUEENS

Crowd : WOOOOOO

Denji : YASSS MAKE SOME NOISE

Ella : Ok everyone settle down!

(Denji walks up the stage to the podium)

Denji : Sorry, its just they love me so much! AM I RIGHT?

Crowd : WOOOOOOO

Ella : Well ok then...

Denji : Anyway darling, got no time to waste, gotta go!

(Denji skips away into the house)

Ella : Dang he's a handful!
Ella : So, our first five house guests are in! Little do they know that they won't be meeting the other six until tomorrow morning!


(All the house guests are sitting on the settee, everybody knows each others name however they are waiting for everyone to be there before they fully introduce themselves. the time is currently 11:05)

Margo : Well, is this it?

Leila : What do you mean?

Margo : Like is this everyone

Ash : Obviously not!

Margo : Ok, I'm just saying, we've been here for 3 hours

Leila : The girl's got a point

Leo : Well it could be

Leila : I hope not, we can't have a contest with just 5 contestants!

Denji : Why not? its more chance of winning

(Denji winks)

Ash : So should we keep waiting

Leo : Maybe we should wait until tomorrow, they might be com----

Denji : Shh, i have an idea

(
Denji places his finger onto Leo's lips)

Denji : Maybe we should wait until tomorrow! They might be coming tomorrow!

Leila : Oh yeah, thats pretty obviously

Leo : Wow, i wish i thought of that

(
Leo gives Denji a glare)

Denji : What darling? I just said my opinion

Margo : Ok then so should we go to bed? we can meet the new houseguests quicker!

Leila : Lets do it!

DAY 2 - NEW ARRIVALS
(It is currently 7:28, Leila & Margo are sitting in the kitchen with a cup of coffee)

Margo : Ugh the boys in this house...

Leila : I know! we are expecting guests and they are just slumped in bed!

Margo : I wonder when they will come

Leila : I know right! Denji and Ash are driving me insane!

(Leo walks into the kitchen in his dressing gown)

Leo : Ciao!

Leila : Hey Leo! sit with us!

(Leo smiles and sits with the girls)

Margo : We just talking about Ash and Denji
Leo : I know, they are such ragazzi pigri's

Margo : Woah, watch your language

Leo : What? Ragazzi pigri means lazy boy in Italian

Margo : Oh right aha!

Leila : So Leo, what was up with Denji shushing you yesterday?

Leo : I don't know but I'm just like-----

(Leo is cut off by a loud alarm going off all around the house. Denji and Ash run into the kitchen)

Denji : WHATS HAPPENING?

Ash : WHAT DID YOU GUYS DO?

Margo : I DONT KNOW!

(They quickly realise that the door is opening, 6 new faces walk through the door)

Pipin : Whats up my people!

Gabe : Woooo!

(Raes moves out the way to reveal...)

Margo : Wait... Mona??

Mona : Hello Margo

(Mona puts on an evil grin)

 
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i read it before it was deleted, it's awesome C;
 
Sounds like a great story, can't wait to read it! :)
 
Ok guys, as you can see, its still really glitchy. Ive tried everything, I've re-write it, copy & pasted it from a different application, tried to fix it manually and its not working! So i really really hate to do this but i think i might need to cancel the story, but don't worry, i will start it again some-day when the forums are less glitchy! And i will use all your characters! :D
@Bori @MaeThePidgeon @cailey_birb @Technoscrub @Avum @PepperMints @christmochi
@Twixela
 
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