Haunted House Part 5

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Here's Part 5!

~Amina's POV~
We all stand as we sigh in relief.
"What a surprise, that was easy" Millin Says.
BooLoo dusts off her clothes, I yawn.
"This is very tiring."
"Agreed" BooLoo says as she nods.
"Sleep then" Millin says walking out the door.
I look around the room to see an old dresser, I walk towards it sitting against it, I close my eyes falling asleep as I hear footsteps.

~BooLoos POV~

I walk out the room once Amina closes her eyes, she was never a night owl. I wouldn't say I am either but for sure Dragzo and Millin are. I walk forward barely seeing the shadow of Millin.
"Wait up!" I yell running towards Millin. A piece of wood sticks up from the floor boards not seeing it... *BLAM* I fall.
"OW!" I scream out in pain. I look forward to see Millin running towards me.
"ARE YOU OKAY?" Millin says looking worried.
"Ye-" I say cutting myself off as I stand up.
"Let's just keep searching" We walk past 2 rooms as we see a light from the room up ahead, going towards the end of the hallway, we see a window. We both pause as Millin reaches for a flashlight.
"We should of used one from the beginning" I say smacking my forehead.
We turn left into a open room.
"That's odd weren't all the rooms closed?" Millin says.
"I don't remember, but that's not our main priority" I say as we walk in, Millin waves his flashlight around the room looking for a light switch, as he sees it he turns it on, the light turns on flashing on and off until the lights go out completely, but in those few seconds of not complete darkness I saw the room clearly.
The room was clean, it looked as someone were already living here, the wallpaper was a white background with beautiful purple flowers. Furniture was in tip top shape. We both smile as we know this is a perfect spot to sleep, we both exit calling out for Silver & Dragzo.
"Silver! Dragzo!" We both scream out.
I begin walking towards the room which Amina is sleeping I shake her waking her up.
"We found a room."
She wakes as I grab her wrist dragging her into the room, she's half asleep, we enter the room as I set her on the made bed as she falls back to sleep instantly.

~Dragzo's POV~

I help Silver up as I laugh, we hear rumbling and voices from up stairs, we choose to ignore it as we enter the kitchen to see a pot on the stove, water in it. It's filled to the top, a few seconds past and it boils over the top, Silver dashes towards the stove turning the knob that's turns off the stove. I hold the flashlight looking for a light switch anywhere. I turn right starring at a door which leads to the back yard, I see a shadow I point towards it seeing nothing, I walk towards the door bumping into the table hard.
"Ha, that's what you get." Silver says somewhat laughing.
"Agh!" I say.
We hear from upstairs "Silver! Dragzo!"
We both turn ours heads towards the stairs as we walk. We run up the stairs, pointing my flashlight in front of us, without seeing I trip over a piece of wood. *BAM*
"AGH!!" I stop myself
From swearing.
Silver laughs.
BooLoo runs towards me helping me up.
"I fell there as well" BooLoo say slightly giggling.
"Haha very funny, what is it you need?" I say.
"We found a room to sleep in" Millin says from across the hallway.
"Great!" Silver throws his hands in the air yawning.
We all towards the room, making extra sure there's nothing to trip or hit into.
We enter the room to see Amina sleeping.
"Great spot" Silver says.
We all set up our sleeping bags we brought.
Millin sets a lantern he brought in the middle of the room for us to see. Once we're all done setting up, we enter our sleeping bags.
"Goodnight" we all say.
I look at my watch to see 4 hours have passed...
20 to go.

~I really hope you enjoy my story, sorry that there's lots of parts in this xD, feel free to comment your favorite part, or what you think is going to happen next~


Starring: @SilverAkita @Dragazo? @BooLoo2012 @Millin

~

Part #1: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-1.6386/
Part #2: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-2.6391
Part #3: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-3.6422
Part #4: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-4.12529
 
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Here's Part 5!

~Amina's POV~
We all stand as we sigh in relief.
"What a surprise, that was easy" Millin Says.
BooLoo dusts off her clothes, I yawn.
"This is very tiring."
"Agreed" BooLoo says as she nods.
"Sleep then" Millin says walking out the door.
I look around the room to see an old dresser, I walk towards it sitting against it, I close my eyes falling asleep as I hear footsteps.

~BooLoos POV~

I walk out the room once Amina closes her eyes, she was never a night owl. I wouldn't say I am either but for sure Dragzo and Millin are. I walk forward barely seeing the shadow of Millin.
"Wait up!" I yell running towards Millin. A piece of wood sticks up from the floor boards not seeing it... *BLAM* I fall.
"OW!" I scream out in pain. I look forward to see Millin running towards me.
"ARE YOU OKAY?" Millin says looking worried.
"Ye-" I say cutting myself off as I stand up.
"Let's just keep searching" We walk past 2 rooms as we see a light from the room up ahead, going towards the end of the hallway, we see a window. We both pause as Millin reaches for a flashlight.
"We should of used one from the beginning" I say smacking my forehead.
We turn left into a open room.
"That's odd weren't all the rooms closed?" Millin says.
"I don't remember, but that's not our main priority" I say as we walk in, Millin waves his flashlight around the room looking for a light switch, as he sees it he turns it on, the light turns on flashing on and off until the lights go out completely, but in those few seconds of not complete darkness I saw the room clearly.
The room was clean, it looked as someone were already living here, the wallpaper was a white background with beautiful purple flowers. Furniture was in tip top shape. We both smile as we know this is a perfect spot to sleep, we both exit calling out for Silver & Dragzo.
"Silver! Dragzo!" We both scream out.
I begin walking towards the room which Amina is sleeping I shake her waking her up.
"We found a room."
She wakes as I grab her wrist dragging her into the room, she's half asleep, we enter the room as I set her on the made bed as she falls back to sleep instantly.

~Dragzo's POV~

I help Silver up as I laugh, we hear rumbling and voices from up stairs, we choose to ignore it as we enter the kitchen to see a pot on the stove, water in it. It's filled to the top, a few seconds past and it boils over the top, Silver dashes towards the stove turning the knob that's turns off the stove. I hold the flashlight looking for a light switch anywhere. I turn right starring at a door which leads to the back yard, I see a shadow I point towards it seeing nothing, I walk towards the door bumping into the table hard.
"Ha, that's what you get." Silver says somewhat laughing.
"Agh!" I say.
We hear from upstairs "Silver! Dragzo!"
We both turn ours heads towards the stairs as we walk. We run up the stairs, pointing my flashlight in front of us, without seeing I trip over a piece of wood. *BAM*
"AGH!!" I stop myself
From swearing.
Silver laughs.
BooLoo runs towards me helping me up.
"I fell there as well" BooLoo say slightly giggling.
"Haha very funny, what is it you need?" I say.
"We found a room to sleep in" Millin says from across the hallway.
"Great!" Silver throws his hands in the air yawning.
We all towards the room, making extra sure there's nothing to trip or hit into.
We enter the room to see Amina sleeping.
"Great spot" Silver says.
We all set up our sleeping bags we brought.
Millin sets a lantern he brought in the middle of the room for us to see. Once we're all done setting up, we enter our sleeping bags.
"Goodnight" we all say.
I look at my watch to see 4 hours have passed...
20 to go.

~I really hope you enjoy my story, sorry that there's lots of parts in this xD, feel free to comment your favorite part, or what you think is going to happen next~


Starring: @SilverAkita @Dragazo? @BooLoo2012 @Millin

~

Part #1: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-1.6386/
Part #2: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-2.6391
Part #3: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-3.6422
Part #4: http://mcpz.net/threads/haunted-house-part-4.12529
" Dragzo "
The first misspell was my favourite part
 
Sorry it auto corrected to Dragzo, I made part 4 & 5 on my iPod. I'll fix it.
 
" Dragzo "
The first misspell was my favourite part
I'm sorry but it's not letting me edit the post, I'll make sure that I for sure spell it correctly in part 6 and on, hope you enjoyed it by the way ^-^
 
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