[Characters FOUND!] The Mors Island Incident

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EDIT: I now have all of the characters that I need. In fact, I have more than I need! Thank you all for your amazing support, and I hope you all enjoy the story when it comes out!

GREETINGS!
I am currently developing my first MCPZ forum story! It will (most likely, I might change it) be called "The Mors Island Incident." It's going to be a Murder story, and it's also going to be choose-your-own-path. I'm looking for people to sign up as characters for the story.

If you don't know what a choose-your-path story is, it's basically where you choose some of the things the character does. For example, at the end of a chapter you might choose whether the character will go left, right, or forward at a fork in the road. Some choices may seem small and insignificant at the beginning, but they can end up affecting the story dramatically!

I'm looking for a total of ten characters to be in the story, however I might add/remove characters if necessary. And I might just make it more than ten if I get enough characters! :)

If you'd like to sign up to be a part of the story, please reply below in this format:

Your character's name:
Your character's nickname:
Character's gender:
Character's age:
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games):
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story):

I'd also just like to say that I only have the outline of the story done, so it might be a little while before I actually release the story. I'm going to release it all at once because I think it'll be really weird to do a choose-your-path story in chunks.

Thank you so much in advance for your time! I look forward to hearing from you and learning all about your characters!

Edit: Don't feel like you have to use your real name or age. Also, don't feel like your character has to have a different nickname than the name. I just wanted to specify that so you can make sure to put in a nickname if you wish. Thanks!

-Emviar
ha woops, just had to edit the signature because I changed my name x)

 
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Your character's name: Aiden
Your character's nickname: Aiden
Character's gender: boi
Character's age: 13 almost 14
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games): A hobby is being really deep in thought; daydreaming. Fears? No. Skills? Martial Arts. Karate, Wing Chun, and Jiu Jitsu.
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): Red

*I edited this because last night I was a lazy butt.

**Why not?

*** It makes sense
 
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AmazeAiden,

Thank you so much for replying so quickly! :D I'm actually just about to start typing up the prologue on my computer. Once again, though, I'll probably release everything at one time. If you don't mind, it would be great if you could send some of your friends my way so they can sign up! The faster I get characters, the faster the full story can come out! Thanks again! :)
 
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Your character's name: Savi!
Your character's nickname: Savi
Character's gender: Female
Character's age: 16
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games): Enjoys sewing, stealing, drawing, and eating candy. Is a hyper girl, and is very quick on her feet. She fears "Normal" people as well as pain.
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): Arwy <3
 
Name - Reena
Nickname - Reese (Like the Candy ) or ReRe
Gender - Girl
Age- 16
About- Reena is a bookworm and very stubborn yet shy. She hates crowds and is a secluded person, she has a HUGE fear of dogs & heights. Her skills involve reading & her high intelligence
Character Best Friend- A loner.... Reena doesn't make 'friends'
 
*GASP*

Thank you all so much for the replies! I'm so excited to say that we're now halfway to the minimum character amount! I want to have at least ten characters (I've made two that weren't stated here) and now we're at five! I also just got finished writing the Prologue. I'm so excited for this story! Thanks again!
 
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Your character's name: Lillian
Your character's nickname: Lil
Character's gender: Female
Character's age: 16
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games): Description: She is a young funny girl with the humor of a 20-year old man.
Hobbies: Gaming, Drawing, Practicing her fighting skills, Hanging out with friends.
Fears: Spiders, Being alone, giving up on friends, losing her friends
Skills: Art, Singing, Dancing, Gaming, Fist Fighting
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): She is generally friends with everyone.
bOi!
 
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Your character's name: Sheryl Willow Hart
Your character's nickname: Bheryl Roll
Character's gender: Female
Character's age: 18
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games):
Hobbies: Playing Computer Games, Reading, Practicing Martial arts.
Fears: Only needles. Terrified of needles to the point she will resort to violence and hurting others just to be away from the needles.
Skills: Archery, Quick Thinking, Bilingual(Spanish and English), Sneaky, Very Smart such Intelligence much meme. and Really good with computers.
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): AngryRena's character. Rena's character is also Sheryl's sister. Since Rena and I are sisters. {Gonna force her to make a character in this.}
 
Name: Rena Hart (omg)
Age: 16
Hobbies: Writing, playing computer games with Sheryl and Zan, Reading, Drawing, constantly relates to everything to the point where it's annoying.
Fears: Abandonment, Disappointment, and failure.
Skills: Can get along with most people, is a good problem solver, is a hard worker and does her best, even if she ends up failing.
Best friend: Sheryl. (Best friend/Sister)
 
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Oh my goodness.
I can't believe I already have so many characters, and I only posted this thread today! It's blowing my mind.
I just want to let you all know that we're almost to the character minimum, and I've already finished making the Prologue and a Chapter. Since I'm going to release it all at once, it's going to take a little while to write the entire thing because there are multiple timelines. There are going to be six endings, I'm so excited!


Unfortunately I may need to close submissions. It's not final; feel free to submit a character if you haven't already, but I promised a few friends a spot in the story if they want it. With all three of them in the story, we'll be at ELEVEN! This is blowing my mind!

This is my first story on the forums, and my first complete choose-your-path story that I've ever done, so it might be fairly short. Once again, though, I'm so thankful for all of you wonderful people who have submitted characters!
Thanks for being patient with me; I hope to have the full story out in the next week or two, but don't quote me on that. It just depends on how life goes :)
Thanks again!
 
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Your character's name: Jasmine
Your character's nickname: Jas
Character's gender: Female
Character's age: 14
Hobbies: Singing, acting crazy, screeching like a pterodactyl, and using the dog filter on Snapchat x)
Fears: Being forgotten, drowning, and never waking up.
Skills: Jasmine has no skills because she's bad x)
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): SMGxPanda, but he's more than a friend if you get what I'm saying x) ;) (I don't know his character name)
 
Name: Red
nickname: --
gender: female
age: 14
hobbies: Guitar playing, singing,
Fears: Being alone. Dieing.
skills: Guitar playing and singing :p
friend: Eeehhhh Aiden
 
Your character's name: Jerome
Your character's nickname: Jer
Character's gender: Male
Character's age: 16
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games): Hobbies = Playing computer games and hanging out with his friends, fears disappointing his friends, and is skilled in combat with hands or a sword
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): Do I have to pick a friend, Really? Well I refuse -n-
 
Your character's name: Gabby
Your character's nickname: Gab
Character's gender: girl
Character's age: 13
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills: uh, afraid of spiders, likes to draw and sing, and v v hyper, but v v nice, sometimes can get mean
Character's best friend: no pls
 

Your character's name: Samuel
Your character's nickname: Sam
Character's gender: Male
Character's age: 14
A little bit about the character, such as hobbies, fears, or skills (this is not The Hunger Games):
Hobbies : Soccer, Basketball, Drawing random things (lol, don't ask), watching cringe worth on YouTube (Don't ask either, lol).
Fear : Heights
Skills : Minecraft PvP, Soccer.
Character's best friend (doesn't have to be a character in the story): Oh, please.

;)
 
Hey, everyone!
I just wanted to give you all a quick update as to what's going on.

I now have all of the characters that I need for the story, and I'm currently writing the story itself. I have completed the Prologue and three chapters.

Thank you all so much for your patience with me, and for your support of the story. I hope you all come back to read the finished product when it comes out! I'll make sure to give you all updates everyone in a while so you can know when the story will be finished.

Thanks again!
 
Sounds amazing, Em :)
 
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Alright, I feel like I need to give everyone an update since the thread has been somewhat inactive for a while.
Basically, I've been having a wave of writer's block and it's been somewhat difficult to write the remaining chapters for the story. I still need to write four chapters and four endings.
I'm also going to be leaving for summer camp on Sunday, which means that I won't be able to work on the story at all because I'll be gone all week.
I apologize for the inconvenience; thank you so much for being patient with me. I want to try to write a chapter or two before we leave, but I've still gotta pack for camp in the first place ;)
Thanks again for your patience! I hope you're all looking forward to reading the full story when I release it.
 
Yes we are!
And that's okay we all have stuff like that!
 
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