Chapter 8- Lost in space , The finale Part-2

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WARNING! This chapter is sad. If your Emotional You may want tissues.
( May , Some people cry easily xD )

Roles!
-The Intelligant- @HelloColdWorld ( Kaya )
-The Independent- @ShootingStqr (Sam )
-The Brave- @Oliiver ( Maximus)
-The Sassy- @loocii (Lucy ) DEACESED!
-The Abandoned- @LuckyIsNotOnFire (Saffron )
-The Rich- @HulloItzLucy ( George )
-The Kind- @Am3li4H ( Lunar ) DEACESED!
-The scared- @stellcr ( Fantasma )
-The host- ( Galacta / Louise )
Chapter 8- Not so lost anymore
''I'm gonna go get something to eat.'' Maximus said. ''Ooo I'll come to , I can just leave this to fly into an asteroid and I can play it again later!'' George quickly replied just about to leave the controls.
''NOO!'' Everyone shouted pretty much in unison. ''But why? I'm HUNGRY!!'' George replied complaining about his stomach. ''You don't need food right now , Else we won't have enough to get home!'' Kaya replied glaring at Maximus. Maximus glared back with a look on his face , That just screamed 'LIAR!'.
Maximus stormed out of the room to get the food he wanted. ''Aweeeeeeee!'' George moaned.
Fantasma wandered around upstairs not knowing what to do until George made a sharp turn knocking her over. She fell to the floor and hit her head on the doorway , Laying still. She occasionally rolled around because of the ship but that was it.

Maximus was finished stropping and eating his food and walked back upstairs to his laptop.
He saw Fantasma on the floor with a cut on her head , That had been bleeding since she fell (Which was about 10m ago). Maximus ran to her and checked her pulse... She wasn't breathing!
He started CPR and screamed for help , Which is when Sam ran up the stairs to see what was happening.
''Oh my! What happened!?'' Sam asked. ''I don't know! I came up and she was just on the floor!'' Maximus quickly replied out of breath.
Sam got towels and cleaned the gashing cut on her head. Maximus soon realised she was chocking on the gum she had in her mouth , He performed the Heimlich possibly saving her life.
Fantasma was soon breathing again , and lay on the floor unconscious. She was moved to her bed and they headed downstairs to see how far of the asteroid field they had left.
Good news was that they weren't dead yet , The bad news was that they were heading into the earths atmosphere at a VERY high speed.

Saffron screamed running around trying to find a parachute , So she could escape this wreck of a ship alive.
Kaya and George were still trying to land the ship gracefully and Sam ... Sam was gone.
She sat in the corner of the room shaking ; She wasn't there. You could call her name and she wouldn't answer , You could tap her arm and she wouldn't respond. She was broken - Her body couldn't take anymore stress. Kaya and George started to scream for their lives. Which wasn't a good sign.

1 hour later.
The plain was in a wreck in the middle of the forest. Saffron had twisted her ankle and had a few cuts on her face but she was pretty much fine , She picked up a stick and used it as a walking stick so she went off to try and find the others. George climbed out of the wreckage wailing in pain , When really he was fine.
Saffron checked to see if he was okay and they went on to search for the others.

Kaya was being squished by a piece of the ships wing , She couldn't breath.
She tried to scream for help but they couldn't hear her as no noise came out of her mouth.
She picked up a rock and started to bang it on the piece of metal stuck on top of her , Until George came running towards her. ''Kaya!'' George screamed sadly. ''Are you ok!?''
Kaya groaned still unable to speak. George struggled to lifted the piece of metal off of her stomach until he realised it had split her in half , He quickly placed it back down stopping the blood from escaping.
''Kaya ... I-I d-don't think y-you will m-make it..'' George said crying.
Kaya had a shocked look on her face and squeezed George's hand. ''I-it's ok...'' She said calmly finally able to speak. ''W-what?'' George said still crying. ''George...'' Kaya replied.
''Y-yes Kaya?'' George said.. trying to sound calm.
''I I L-love y---'' Kaya said with a smile on her face when her eyes closed and her hand dropped to the floor.
''Kaya! Kaya! Wake up!'' George cried. Kaya's hand turned cold and George sat on the floor hugging her.
''Kaya... Nooo! Come back to me.'' George exclaimed sadly. ''I l-love you to.''

Saffron found Sam lying on the floor next to Fantasma. Sam was covered in Dirt and had crawled towards Fantasma who was as pale as snow. Saffron ran to them scared , ''Sam! Fantasma!?'' Saffron said worried they had died. Sam cried ''I cant move! I cant feel anything!''
Saffron touched Sam's back and said ''Can you feel this?''
''Feel what?'' Sam replied unable to move. Saffron picked Sam up of the floor , And set her against a tree.
She watched as Louise , Who was clearly full of adrenalin , Tend to Maximus' wounds.
She checked Fantasma's pulse , But there was nothing. Saffron fell to the floor and hugged Fantasma goodbye , She closed Fantasma’s eyes and left.

Saffron checked on Sam who had no Emotion anymore , It felt like she had left Sam behind on that space ship and she wasn't here anymore. Saffron carried Sam over to George , Who wouldn't leave Kaya's side.
They then finally got George to move and they slowly made their way to Louise and Maximus.
Louise was bleeding out of her previous wound , But she had bandaged that and Maximus' leg was split open. She had managed to sew it back together ( Temporarily ) with some Stitches and a Saftey needle.
''H-hi....'' George said looking at the floor with no expression but sorrow.
George was holding Kaya's tablet , They used to escape the ship.
Sam sat on the floor holding George's hand , Crying.
They set of a Help signal and were soon rescued. Sam was given a wheel chair and they were all taken to hospital.

Louise had surgery on her Stomach , Where she was shot.
She was then reunited with her long lost family.
George was taken to a fancy private hospital , And his parents paid for Kaya's funeral.
George got given a picture of Kaya before she went to the 'Boarding school' and her framed it and still has it till this very day.
Sam was adopted by a family who couldn't have children , And found her at the hospital alone.
She then ended up with 4 siblings ( One of which was Saffron ), And lived with a wheel chair for the rest of her life.
Kaya was cremated and her ashes were given to her family and George.
Maximus returned to his family , With a fake leg. Otherwise he was fine.
Fantasma's family was horrified , But was buried underneath a cherry tree in the middle of nowhere. ,
Saffron ended up with a good life , Living with Sam and finally had someone she could call
Parents.

The end. Hope you enjoyed it!
 
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I have sand in my eyes. I’m not crying
 
That was really good and I did really enjoy it!
 
Who was your character or where you just crying cause your favourite character died?
I didn’t have a character. But I was sad Fantasma and Kaya died in the end
 
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