Caught (CHAPTER 1)

Do you like the first chapter?

  • Yes it could use some improvements though.

    Votes: 6 100.0%
  • No change everything about it.

    Votes: 0 0.0%

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11 people fell to the ground, stranded, and hurt, they didn't know each other as they weren't from the same area, but that's alright! Or is it? "Guh, what is this place! Eh, who are you guys?" Said a girl with purple hair, another boy with blonde hair said "Ergh," he rolled his eyes then said his name, "Percy.. Now get me out of this cell." Percy said, "Aha, I found a note! *cute little anime gasp* My name? My name.. Is Jesseigh!" Jesseigh squeeled, as cute as a little boop on the nose "What does it say?" The purple haired girl asked, "First what's your name? Eheh!" Jesseigh asked, then psychotically giggled.. "Im.. Akaia? Akaia Ryn Suzuki... Now what does the note say?" Akaia looked to her left and saw 8 other people, all trapped in cells reading a note, a moment later they all heard a tapping noise.. Percy looked to his left and screamed, as he saw a black figure emerge from his back wall, "Ah! Whoa who are you, bud?" he said with a sassy tone in his voice, "Shush darlin' im settin yin's free, be grateful." the black figure then snapped his 2 fingers and WABLAM the door's opened, and it disappeared. 2 other people ran out and looked around, then Akaia walked out and shrugged, and Jesseigh ran out happily to the other side, "Jesseigh-" Jesseigh was already on the other side and Akaia couldn't yell to her.. Percy and Akaia jogged to the other side, while the rest walked out of their cells...


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