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Hello everybody, how are you today?
I’m great thanks for asking, anyways don’t jump off tall structures with bikes or you’ll break your wrist and forearm : ) don’t pull a speedy
 
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Wym it’s a story? Lmao someone wants to become helper

I’m great thanks for asking, anyways don’t jump off tall structures with bikes or you’ll break you wrist and forearm
i thought that's a fact?? that you could break your wrist/forearm by falling off structures?? no real "i broke my wrist and forearm by falling off a structure"?? bro you gotta start a story off with an actual opener that shows its a story like
once upon a time i broke my wrist and forearm by falling off a structure
or
jack and jill went up the hill to fall down the hill and end up breaking their wrist and forearm in the process
 
i thought that's a fact?? that you could break your wrist/forearm by falling off structures?? no real "i broke my wrist and forearm by falling off a structure"?? bro you gotta start a story off with an actual opener that shows its a story like
once upon a time i broke my wrist and forearm by falling off a structure
or
jack and jill went up the hill to fall down the hill and end up breaking their wrist and forearm in the process
Lmao facts are easily stories like ex. My grandfather fought in world war 2 (fact). “hey you guys wanna hear a story?” My grandfather fought in world war 2 (story) just because it’s not made up and ten paragraphs like the ones on here doesn’t mean it’s not a story, think before you speak #ThinkingSavesLives
 
Lmao facts are easily stories like ex. My grandfather fought in world war 2 (fact). “hey you guys wanna hear a story?” My grandfather fought in world war 2 (story) just because it’s not made up and ten paragraphs like the ones on here doesn’t mean it’s not a story, think before you speak #ThinkingSavesLives
But you didn’t say: Wanna hear a story? You just said hey guys how are you today.
 
Lmao facts are easily stories like ex. My grandfather fought in world war 2 (fact). “hey you guys wanna hear a story?” My grandfather fought in world war 2 (story) just because it’s not made up and ten paragraphs like the ones on here doesn’t mean it’s not a story, think before you speak #ThinkingSavesLives
but.. you included "my"
that means its a story from your family + a fact but you were just like
hey kids!! Dont fall off of a wall or else youll break your arms!! (A fact)
Instead of:
Hey kids, i fell off of a wall once and broke my arms. Please be careful!!
(Story//fact)
 
Typically when you say ‘how are you guys’ it doesnt become, or count as, a story since you are asking the readers a question and getting the readers involved :3
 
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