A Simple Act of Murder <> Part Fifteen

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Moonberreh

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I just came to the realization, Waffle is the only remaining boy xD I wasn't being sexist it was just because I had already said the murderer was a girl so I wanted to keep the possibilities as wide as possible. I just came to another realization o-o I just wrote a paragraph in Waffle's point of view before changing my mind, and I have been spelling Citrines name wrong the entire time xD Oh well, her name is Citrene now.
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@CitrineRaindrop/Citrene's Point of View.
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I was literally blind as a bat. I couldn't see my hand in front of my face. I had been stubborn and said I would walk myself, but I changed my mind when I slammed into a brick wall. I wasn't happy about it though. "This is so idiotic, why should I be blinded anyway?" I grumbled.
"Stop complaining, start walking. I'm helping you but I ain't gonna drag you." Waffle snapped. I huffed and kept walking.


I may have not been able to see, but I could tell we weren't making good speed. I was repeatedly bashing into poles which Waffle said were from a marketplace we were in. We eventually made it out though. Waffle turned a corner and I smashed into the corner of the wall, letting go of his hand in the process. "Hey! Watch it!" I shouted. But I got no reply. Did he bail on me? I wouldn't blame him, he had no reason to stay with me really, but all the same it was a douche move. I was still blinded, and had no idea where I was going. In other words, I was completely stuck. I did the only thing I could. "Hey! Come back you-!"

"He won't be coming back..." A sly female voice spoke. It sounded like it was coming from a roof or something. I heard a bang on the floor, and I assumed they had jumped down. My spine shivered.
"What do you mean; "Not coming back."? Who are you?" I asked, worried.

"Oh, so many questions, I know your type. Your one of those stuck up girls that only care about their-selves. Well, he isn't coming back; he has just met a rather unfortunate fate you see..." The girl replied, cackling. I gasped in realization.
"It's you! Your the murderer! The one who killed Purplex and Hunt back in the warehouse!" I shuddered. She just laughed in reply.
"That's correct... Citrene..." She said.
"How do you know my name? Actually never mind, I'm about to die anyway, right?" I asked, letting go of all hope. I was going to die, here and now.


"Hmm... Let's not jump to conclusions. Your blinded, I know that much. That means you can't see my face... I could have some fun with you..." The girl muttered sinisterly. I crumpled to the floor in defeat. I would rather die then be this monsters toy. When I sat down, I felt a horrific squish from my feet.
"Oh bravo, that's Waffle's body your sitting on there!" The murderer laughed. I started crying, but then I realized. If this was Waffle's body, then that meant... I swallowed my fear; I knew what I had to do.
"No." I said, trying to sound braver then I felt.
"What was that?" The girl asked.


"NO! I refuse to be your puppet! Just kill me already!" I shouted. I could practically see the murderer pursing her lips in amusement and contempt.
"No. Why should I? I want to have some fun!" She retorted. If that was the case, then I had no choice. I felt my hand touch something metal, and gripped it in determination.
"Fine, if you wont kill me then-!" I said determinedly. I picked up the gun, and put it to my head, my finger shaking on the trigger.
"No way! You wouldn't, you little s-"
BANG!


CitreneRaindrop shot an innocent player.

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Well, that took a turn for the worse pretty quickly! The darkest part yet I would say! I was making that up as I went along, because I only planned EVERYTHING out up until part twelve. I know some things the murderer is gonna do, but that wasn't one of them. TOTALLY MADE UP I SAY! Anyway, just to help you guys and my brain, I'm going to put a list here of everyone who isn't confirmed dead. Like with Citrene, we know for a fact she is dead, but with someone like Meepy, she could still be alive so she will be on the list of alive people. This is just a list of people we don't know for sure are dead.

Possibly alive people are:
Meepy
Mmg
Moon
Kona
Rich
Book


Wow, that ain't that many huh...

While I'm here, Ima make a proper thing for Kona.
Name-KonaGeo
Story Name-Kona
Hair colour- Black
Eye colour- Brown
Skin colour- Olive
Jewelry
- An anklet
Marks/Scars- None
Accessories- None
Nationality- Greek
Age- 15
Personality- Brave, Bold, Athletic
Backstory- She was the national teenage champion of girls football

 
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Ermmmm whyyyyyyyy would I shoot myself when the murd is right there????? Am I that stupid???? Oh well killing myself kinda makes up for shooting Bacon.... Does it????
 
Ermmmm whyyyyyyyy would I shoot myself when the murd is right there????? Am I that stupid???? Oh well killing myself kinda makes up for shooting Bacon.... Does it????
Because you didn't know where the murderer was
 
but I can hearrrrrrrrrr them :eek:ooooo
 
me tbh
 
http://imgur.com/a/nyaUM <- Info sheeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
I just came to the realization, Waffle is the only remaining boy xD I wasn't being sexist it was just because I had already said the murderer was a girl so I wanted to keep the possibilities as wide as possible. I just came to another realization o-o I just wrote a paragraph in Waffle's point of view before changing my mind, and I have been spelling Citrines name wrong the entire time xD Oh well, her name is Citrene now.
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@CitrineRaindrop/Citrene's Point of View.
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I was literally blind as a bat. I couldn't see my hand in front of my face. I had been stubborn and said I would walk myself, but I changed my mind when I slammed into a brick wall. I wasn't happy about it though. "This is so idiotic, why should I be blinded anyway?" I grumbled.
"Stop complaining, start walking. I'm helping you but I ain't gonna drag you." Waffle snapped. I huffed and kept walking.


I may have not been able to see, but I could tell we weren't making good speed. I was repeatedly bashing into poles which Waffle said were from a marketplace we were in. We eventually made it out though. Waffle turned a corner and I smashed into the corner of the wall, letting go of his hand in the process. "Hey! Watch it!" I shouted. But I got no reply. Did he bail on me? I wouldn't blame him, he had no reason to stay with me really, but all the same it was a douche move. I was still blinded, and had no idea where I was going. In other words, I was completely stuck. I did the only thing I could. "Hey! Come back you-!"

"He won't be coming back..." A sly female voice spoke. It sounded like it was coming from a roof or something. I heard a bang on the floor, and I assumed they had jumped down. My spine shivered.
"What do you mean; "Not coming back."? Who are you?" I asked, worried.

"Oh, so many questions, I know your type. Your one of those stuck up girls that only care about their-selves. Well, he isn't coming back; he has just met a rather unfortunate fate you see..." The girl replied, cackling. I gasped in realization.
"It's you! Your the murderer! The one who killed Purplex and Hunt back in the warehouse!" I shuddered. She just laughed in reply.
"That's correct... Citrene..." She said.
"How do you know my name? Actually never mind, I'm about to die anyway, right?" I asked, letting go of all hope. I was going to die, here and now.


"Hmm... Let's not jump to conclusions. Your blinded, I know that much. That means you can't see my face... I could have some fun with you..." The girl muttered sinisterly. I crumpled to the floor in defeat. I would rather die then be this monsters toy. When I sat down, I felt a horrific squish from my feet.
"Oh bravo, that's Waffle's body your sitting on there!" The murderer laughed. I started crying, but then I realized. If this was Waffle's body, then that meant... I swallowed my fear; I knew what I had to do.
"No." I said, trying to sound braver then I felt.
"What was that?" The girl asked.


"NO! I refuse to be your puppet! Just kill me already!" I shouted. I could practically see the murderer pursing her lips in amusement and contempt.
"No. Why should I? I want to have some fun!" She retorted. If that was the case, then I had no choice. I felt my hand touch something metal, and gripped it in determination.
"Fine, if you wont kill me then-!" I said determinedly. I picked up the gun, and put it to my head, my finger shaking on the trigger.
"No way! You wouldn't, you little s-"
BANG!


CitreneRaindrop shot an innocent player.

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Well, that took a turn for the worse pretty quickly! The darkest part yet I would say! I was making that up as I went along, because I only planned EVERYTHING out up until part twelve. I know some things the murderer is gonna do, but that wasn't one of them. TOTALLY MADE UP I SAY! Anyway, just to help you guys and my brain, I'm going to put a list here of everyone who isn't confirmed dead. Like with Citrene, we know for a fact she is dead, but with someone like Meepy, she could still be alive so she will be on the list of alive people. This is just a list of people we don't know for sure are dead.

Possibly alive people are:
Meepy
Mmg
Moon
Kona
Rich
Book


Wow, that ain't that many huh...

While I'm here, Ima make a proper thing for Kona.
Name-KonaGeo
Story Name-Kona
Hair colour- Black
Eye colour- Brown
Skin colour- Olive
Jewelry
- An anklet
Marks/Scars- None
Accessories- None
Nationality- Greek
Age- 15
Personality- Brave, Bold, Athletic
Backstory- She was the national teenage champion of girls football
Yes that eliminates the fact of you shipping me Haha!
Anyway great part!
( I look nothing like your description ^^)
 
...Citrine could have used common sense and shot where the murderer's voice was coming from.
This is what I was saying the whole time ;)
 
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She was panicking she didn't think of it, besides the murderer would have had PLENTY of warning considering she didn't know exactly where to shoot and the murderer would see her with the gun :p
...Citrine could have used common sense and shot where the murderer's voice was coming from.
 
I just realized.
Moon. One of the possibly alive people are the murderer? Since They aren't dead and those are possibly alive. Unless your adding someone else.
 
I just realized.
Moon. One of the possibly alive people are the murderer? Since They aren't dead and those are possibly alive. Unless your adding someone else.
Yes well done, a murderer cannot be dead -.-
No I'm not adding anyone else, not as part of the game anyway. If you guys wanted me to continue the story then ofc there would be new roles
 
Yes well done, a murderer cannot be dead -.-
No I'm not adding anyone else, not as part of the game anyway. If you guys wanted me to continue the story then ofc there would be new roles
;n;

didnt have to be that harsh when telling me I am stupid y'know
 
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