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Episode 1 Choices (Read the episode and choices first!)


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So here's the first episode. I will say, this first episode is very hectic so I can get the plot moving. Episode 2 should run more smoothly and get a bit more into the story but I hope you enjoy nevertheless.:D

The story is shown in a form of a chat log. A chat log and a choice spoiler is one episode. However, do not open the choices spoiler or vote until you have read the whole episode as the choices may not be clear and you might not be able to change it.


@Craz3h_ @GalaxyMeep Cowardlyy__ aka @IfLostReturnToEwie @Holliie @Kitcat416 @LordOfTheRings @emerald @Grac3h @Julian Marceaux have all been just invited to the group chat and things start happening immediately.

Main chat room - 18:00
[Craz3h has joined]
Craz3h: Hello?

[GalaxyMeep has joined]

[Cowardlyy__ has joined]

GalaxyMeep: Hiii :D

Cowardlyy__: What is this?

Craz3h: Idk, street just invited me to it
GalaxyMeep: Same

GoingMainStreet: Not everyone has joined yet
Cowardlyy__: What is this chat for?

GoingMainStreet: I wanted to explain when everyone joined

[Holliie has joined]

[Kitcat has joined]

[LordOfTheRings has joined]


Holliie: What’s going on?

[Emerald has joined]

[Grac3h has joined]


GoingMainStreet: Something strange has been going on
[Julian has joined]

GoingMainStreet: Three weeks ago, someone knocked on my door. I opened it and nobody was there.

LordOfTheRings: And?

GoingMainStreet: For a whole week that went on, I don’t know who is doing it. My dad is never at home until like dawn and he’s asleep until he goes again.

GoingMainStreet: So I’m pretty much the only one who hears this.

Craz3h: So you think we’re knocking on your door?

GoingMainStreet: There’s more. On Monday, I started hearing knocks on my window but my room is on the second floor.

Holliie: First floor*

GoingMainStreet: ?

Holliie: It’s the ground floor then the first floor unless you have three floors in your house. Which you don’t.

Kitcat: Nobody cares Holliie.

GoingMainStreet: Point is, there’s no way someone could knock on my window. Unless they somehow got a ladder, knocked on my window then climbed down and took the ladder before I came to the window.

Cowardlyy__: Creepy.:eek:

GoingMainStreet: Now it’s the holidays and I’ve been hearing the knocking non-stop.

Craz3h: You haven’t answered my question.

GoingMainStreet: Idk if you’re doing this. You are all my friends and you all know where I live.

GalaxyMeep: Well, I’m not doing it.

Holliie: Same

GoingMainStreet: And I know it can’t be something like the noise of a pipe breaking

Grac3h: A pipe breaking?

GoingMainStreet: Pipes break don’t they?

Emerald: Probably?

GoingMainStreet: It’s just an example -_-

Holliie: It was a bad example.

Julian: WHAT ARE WE EVEN TALKING ABOUT?!

Holliie: Caps

GoingMainStreet: Ugh! I heard it again!

LordOfTheRings: Keep the door open so you can always see if someone knocks

Craz3h: …What?

LordOfTheRings: I don’t mean ALL the time, like every now and again
Cowardlyy__ : So what do you want us to do?

GalaxyMeep : Yea?

GoingMainStreet : I was hoping you could help me.

Kitcat : Call the police? This like umm… trespassing right?

Holliie : No.

Main chat room - 19:00

GoingMainStreet : I left the curtains open so I can see if anybody is there.

Grac3h : You’re overreacting.

GoingMainStreet : You’re NOT in my position!

Emerald : How is everyone btw?:)

GoingMainStreet : THE KNOCKING IS THERE AGAIN!!!

Holliie : Caps

GoingMainStreet : I’m opening the window! I can’t stand this!

GalaxyMeep : You didn’t do that before?

LordOfTheRings : You open the curtains but not the window?

GoingMainStreet : HOW ON EARTH?!

Holliie : Caps

Emerald : Shut up already.

GoingMainStreet : There’s “Don’t move” painted on my window!

Grac3h : Is this a joke?
Cowardlyy__: Idk

GoingMainStreet : Guys, I’m scared. It actually says “Don’t move”!!!

Kitcat : Then don’t move.:p

Craz3h : lol

GoingMainStreet : I’M NOT JOKING

GalaxyMeep : *Waits for Holliie to say “caps”*

Holliie : You’ve done it for me.

LordOfTheRings : I just heard something too.

Emerald : Cool?

LordOfTheRings : I mean something on my computer. I have headphones on and I just heard something on my computer.

19:40

Grac3h : I’m leaving.

[Grac3h has left]

Julian : That was abrupt.

Craz3h : ikr

[Grac3h, you have 30 seconds to join back…]

Kitcat : Wait what?!

Holliie : What the…

GalaxyMeep : What does that mean?!

Emerald : Is that new?
Cowardlyy__ : This is soo creepy.:eek:

[Grac3h, you have 15 seconds to join back now...]

[Grac3h has joined]

Grac3h : HELP! Someone’s in my house!

Craz3h : What!?

Grac3h : I heard someone’s voice, it was quiet but I heard it. It was counting!

GalaxyMeep : That just happened in chat! Scroll up!

Grac3h : I’m scared. I’m going to call the police!

GoingMainStreet : NO!

Holliie : So you hear someone and the first thing you do is go back on your computer and join a group chat?
Cowardlyy__ : ikr I would had just ran xD

GoingMainStreet : The thing says “Don’t move”

Grac3h : I know but my phone is next to me, I joined back because I was waiting for my phone to turn on

GoingMainStreet : Hang on! What if something happens before the police comes?

Emerald : Like what?

GoingMainStreet : There’s someone in Grac3h’s house! What if they attack you?

Grac3h : If I can’t move or call someone then what should I do?!

Kitcat : RUN!

GoingMainStreet : NO!

Grac3h : If I run, I could call the police or yell for help! I don’t feel safe in here doing nothing.

Cowardlyy__ : Run to your neighbour and tell them someone broke in your house!

Grac3h : I am on the ground floor. I can see the front door and nobody is there. I can get out before something happens.

GalaxyMeep : LordOfTheRings are you still here btw?

Craz3h : LordOfTheRings hasn’t talked for ages. What if something happened to her?!

Julian : Everyone just stay in the group chat. Lock your door to make sure nobody comes in.

GoingMainStreet : We can’t get off our computers though.

Kitcat : Can I move if I take my computer with me?

Grac3h : What should I do about the person then?!

Craz3h : The last thing LordOfTheRings said was “I mean something on my computer. I have headphones on and I just heard something on my computer.”

Emerald : Guys… a board just appeared behind me...

GoingMainStreet : YOU’RE NOT SUPPOSED TO MOVE EMERALD!

Holliie : Caps.

GoingMainStreet : -_-

Emerald : There’s a board, a whiteboard, just like in school. A giant one. Just sitting there.

GalaxyMeep : Paranormal activity all around us! :O
Holliie : Or just a prank.

GalaxyMeep : Paranormal.

Holliie : Prank.

GalaxyMeep : Paranormal...

Craz3h : Am I the only one who cares that LordOfTheRings is gone?!

Emerald : Am I the only one who cares that someone or something just put a whiteboard behind me?!

Grac3h : Am I the only one who cares that someone’s in my house?!

GoingMainStreet : Am I the only one that cares that someone painted on my window?!

Holliie : Am I the only one who doesn’t care?!
Cowardlyy__ : People! Calm down.

Kitcat : Yea, we need to just focus on getting things sorted out.
Cowardlyy__ : Let’s sort out one thing at a time.

Julian : Ok, what are we doing first then?

Once you finished reading Episode 1, open the choice box to vote.

With stuff going crazy for no apparent reason, it's about time the group explores what is going on. But which should they do first?

Vote 'A' to focus on the disappearance of LordOfTheRings
Vote 'B' to focus on the person in Grac3h's apartment
Vote 'C' to focus on the whiteboard in Emerald's room
Vote 'D' to focus on the vandalism on GoingMainStreet's window
 
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That was amazing! The mash of sarcastic humor, etc.. And the pure panic is so much fun to read! Can't wait to see this progress
 
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I love this so far ❤️❤️ Lol I hope I don't die soon
 
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Great Story and what a unique way of telling it.
 
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caps caps caps caps
 
That was amazing! The mash of sarcastic humor, etc.. And the pure panic is so much fun to read! Can't wait to see this progress
Haha thanks! :)
I love this so far ❤️❤️ Lol I hope I don't die soon
I guess it depends on what happens next episode!
This is amazing! I love the suspense

@LordOfTheRings LORD BB Don't worry we will find you~
Thanks!
The Story Left Me In Chills Im Scared And Also Excited To See Episode 2 :D
Really glad you're enjoying it! :thumbs-up:
OKAY THIS IS CREEPY, EVERYTHING HAPPENING IN THE CHAT IS LTTERALLY WHAT I WOULD SAY.
(CAPS)
and yay! I get to have a creepy whiteboard. Yay!
And you said you invited us to a group chat, I am very confused about that, is that just part of the story?
Great story BTW.
Thank you very much! And yea, me inviting you to a group chat is just for the story. I haven't actually made a group chat :p
Great Story and what a unique way of telling it.
:D
caps caps caps caps
CAPS
 
That was so cool! You really did something original here - I've never seen a story written like this on the PZ forums. I love the sarcastic humor and the personality that you've given to the characters (yeah, I realize they're people on the forums). I also think it's cool that you're taking a vote from the readers to decide where to bring the story.

I love it. I hope you keep doing this (and if you ever do another, feel free to throw me in if you want! <3)! Great job!
 
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Brilliant :p

You're a great writer- got some skills

AND WHO WOULD THINK ABOUT A WINDOW OR A WHITE BOARD, WHEN YOUR FRIEND IS MISSING?

*Holliie don't ya dare say caps...*
 
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Brilliant :p

You're a great writer- got some skills

AND WHO WOULD THINK ABOUT A WINDOW OR A WHITE BOARD, WHEN YOUR FRIEND IS MISSING?

*Holliie don't ya dare say caps...*
caps

btw this was great i love my character she's so annoying bahhahahaahahahah can't wait for 2nd part
 
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That was so cool! You really did something original here - I've never seen a story written like this on the PZ forums. I love the sarcastic humor and the personality that you've given to the characters (yeah, I realize they're people on the forums). I also think it's cool that you're taking a vote from the readers to decide where to bring the story.

I love it. I hope you keep doing this (and if you ever do another, feel free to throw me in if you want! <3)! Great job!
Very happy you like the story so far :)
Brilliant :p

You're a great writer- got some skills

AND WHO WOULD THINK ABOUT A WINDOW OR A WHITE BOARD, WHEN YOUR FRIEND IS MISSING?

*Holliie don't ya dare say caps...*
I wouldn't say I got any writing skills but I'm really glad you like the story!

And a window or a whiteboard does have a huge effect in the story just like everything else (especially the whiteboard but I won't spoil;))
caps

btw this was great i love my character she's so annoying bahhahahaahahahah can't wait for 2nd part
Glad you like it and yeah, your character is the more annoying/rude one in the group!
 
Very happy you like the story so far :)

I wouldn't say I got any writing skills but I'm really glad you like the story!

And a window or a whiteboard does have a huge effect in the story just like everything else (especially the whiteboard but I won't spoil;))

Glad you like it and yeah, your character is the more annoying/rude one in the group!
eheh its different :p
 
GUYS, we actually MIGHT HAVE A PROBLEM. LordOfTheRings has said NOTHING in this thread! The story has come true, except for the whiteboard.
:eek:

UPDATE!
The voting is supposed to end today but I just saw that set it to the 3rd of Dec for some reason?

ANYWAYS, voting is closed! You are still able to vote till 03/12/16 but it won't count.


Next episode should be posted soon :) (probably tomorrow or maybe even later today idk)
 
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UPDATE!
The voting is supposed to end today but I just saw that set it to the 3rd of Dec for some reason?

ANYWAYS, voting is closed! You are still able to vote till 03/12/16 but it won't count.


Next episode should be posted soon :) (probably tomorrow or maybe even later today idk)
YAY! I'm so excited! Like I said, you really did something original here. I'm looking forward to seeing what unfolds!
 
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