Murder Story (Part Two)

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WOWKITTY'S POV
I saw Poke's gamertag disappear. There was no other nametags near her's... unless the murderer was crouching.
clone, Alvin, and Boom were meeting in the center of the lobby. "Hey guys."I said, walking over. Alvin grabbed something shiny behind his back. "Isn't it suspicous we saw Poke die, and you come from that direction?" he scowled. Suddenly, Kitty ran over from the east... opposite side from where the murder happened. her shirt was slightly ripped, and she was crying. "Alvin! Clone! Boom! I saw Wow kill Poke!! i was hiding in the bushes!" she sobbed.
wow. if she was an actress, her skills were perfect!
CLONE'S POV
"I was in the bushes, you liar! FAKER! FAKER!" Wow yelled. "I think Wow is lying...." I said. "Kitty's shirt is ripped. your's is not." Boom agreed. Kitty ran behind us, and i saw Wow gulp.
Yeah, wow is a killer.
I saw wow begin to cry, and felt something cold behind me.
THEN IT HAPPENED.
Alvin crushed to the ground.
Boom crushed along with him. Wow screamed.

And i felt the cold metal of a knife go into my leg. i screamed.

my leg was oozing red stickiness... blood. i sobbed and fell to the floor, crying. Wow screamed and bolted off. Kitty laughed, and i looked up at her... tears in my house. She crouched down, and whispered; "Sleep well, clone." she whispered in my ear.
Her eyes were black and red... and her hair was mussed. she laughed evilly, and sprinted off after Wow and the other three left.

Then, it went black.
and i left this earth


TO BE CONTINUED

THIS WASN'T A GAME ON PARTYZONE. THIS WAS REAL LIFE
 
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I love this line <3 !

<3 I read LOTS Of divergent. i know how to make a good death scene.
wait is that bad?


my favorite line was 'It all went black. and then i left this earth', and
'THIS WASN'T A GAME ON PARTYZONE... THIS WAS REAL LEFT.'
 
KITTY YOU LITTLE BACKSTABBING LIAR
D:< BUT MAKE
MOREEE

phew i lived so far :3
 
could you also try to tag everybody that was in it pweez?
 
<3 I read LOTS Of divergent. i know how to make a good death scene.
wait is that bad?

my favorite line was 'It all went black. and then i left this earth', and
'THIS WASN'T A GAME ON PARTYZONE... THIS WAS REAL LEFT.'
I read alot of HG, InkHeart, InkSpell, InkDeath, :D also I'm planning on reading Divergent soon!!! IF THE LIBRARY'S BACK WALL DIDN'T FRIGGIN COLLAPSE!!!! I would be reading it right now. Also, I can do good death scenes, prolonged, dragged out, blood everywhere.
I'm Demented
 
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I read alot of HG, InkHeart, InkSpell, InkDeath, :D also I'm planning on reading Divergent soon!!! IF THE LIBRARY'S BACK WALL DIDN'T FRIGGIN COLLAPSE!!!! I would be reading it right now. Also, I can do good death scenes, prolonged, dragged out, blood everywhere.
I'm Demented

DIVERGENT IS SO GOOD!!!!! but, be INCREDIBLY Careful when getting attached to characters.


It's embarassing, trust me.
 
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