The Valley of Death - TEASER 3 (STILL NEEDS CHARACTERS!)

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Theme song - Ellie from The Last Of Us' version of "Through The Valley".

Search on any browser including Youtube "The Last of us 2" and watch the trailer video, or:

listen to: https://soundcloud.com/dynsay/the-last-of-us-2-ellie-sings-through-the-valley-lyrics

Lyrics:

I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
And I fear no evil because I'm blind to it all
And my mind, my gun they comfort me
Because I know I'll kill my enemies when they come

Surely goodness and mercy will follow me
All the days of my life
And I will dwell on this earth forevermore
Said I walk beside the still waters and they restore my soul

But I can't walk on the path of the right
because I'm wrong

No I can't walk
On the path of the right
'Cause I'm wrong


If you havn't heard of The Last Of Us, it's surposed to be one of the best games of all time, it's an apocalyptic game like my last story Himura Sanzo. But this has an emotional storyline that gets you linked in.

The actual story contains swear words. But since I'm not allowed to use them on here, I'll be using replacement words like 'damn' and 'crap' so, idk, but if you want you can replace those words with words you think would actually go there, but tbh i don't recommend it.


Profiles that havn't been edited:

Name: A.j.
• Gender: FEM
Age (15-18) 16
Appearance: long red hair, with a old truckers cap (if you Google Bobby SPN it's the hat he's wearing) black and red flannel, dark ripped jeans, black combat boots
Personality (try to be specific): nerd, introvert, romantic, smart, shy, can be phycopathic, IS A sociopath
How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): I would like to be in S2 pls and thx
Extra: sorry if this doesn't fit, bc I've been to busy playing UNCHARTED jk but I'm a fan of SPN Sherlock and Hamilton irl and story so X3

• Name: Mandy Banks
• Gender: Female
• Age: 17
• Appearance: Sexy af. Black hair going straight down to shoulders, purple eyes. Purple skirt, pale purple boot shoes, white button up shirt and purple tinted sunglasses. Would betray best friends within batting her eyes
• Personality (try to be specific): Would do anything to protect herself. Selfish, liar, manipulative, bossy, evil. Would even kill if it means she doesn't have to suffer. Weakness is yogurt
• How far do you want to get in the story: One of the sole survivors or at least really far? If this character survives Season 1, they might die early in Season 2?
•Extra: Antagonist of the season?

• Name: Sakai Izo
• Gender: Male
• Age (15-18) 18
• Appearance: Black Curly hair, Sorta muscular (but not absolute bodybuilder), Green eyes, Always wears a bandanna mask
• Personality (try to be specific): Mysterious, Misunderstood, Protective, Almost Silent, Wise, Has constant silent rage
• How far do you want to get in the story? Doesnt matter, but he'll probably die =3
•Extra: He tries to stay solo, but he'll help out others when needed (But he wont stick around with them long because tRuST iSsUEs)

• Name: Wren Gader
• Age (15-18): 16
• Gender: Female
• Appearance: Mousy brown hair, matching brown eyes. Lots of freckles, quite strong as she lived on a farm (pre-whatever this is). However, she is quite short, and no one takes her that seriously. She usually wears all black and a grey scarf that covers her face.
• Personality (try to be specific): Wren is extremely shy as she was the youngest of all her siblings, she usually just hid behind them and never said anything. She's also very awkward as she fears she'll say something wrong because of all the times her siblings berated her for just that. She doesn't fight for herself verbally as she always had her family to protect her. Even so, she is exceptional with hand to hand combat as her brother taught her several self-defense techniques.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you might be back for part II. (S2): Even though she seems feeble, she will probably be one of the suckers who pull through. Whether she likes it or not.
•Extra: She has four older siblings (two sisters and a brother).

• Name: River
• Gender: Female
• Age (15-18): 17
• Appearance: Teal hair and eyes. Light gray tank top with short jean shorts. 3 small bangles 2 arm the other on the other. Each colour having a meaning.
• Personality (try to be specific): Is daring to do anything, is caring, smart when it comes to last second decisions, Serious but mostly funny.
• How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): Maybe top 4 people.
•Extra: Will do anything for a friend before myself.

Name: Kitsune "Kit" Robinson
Gender: Male
Age (15-18): 16
Appearance: Very thin, meager, messy black hair, no facial hair, 5'8", male, white, looks weak but is very stealthy.
Personality: Fun (but only once you get to know him), apathetic, sarcastic, intelligent, prefers not to get involved with things unless there's a specific benefit for him, secretly not confident and very self-conscious, quiet.
How far do you want to get in the story? I really don't care too much, just take my character as far as you think he can go.
Extra: He flies solo unless he's forced to work with others or he gradually warms up to someone over time.



Profiles that've been edited:

• Name: Garrison Miller
• Gender: Male
• Age: 30, 50 after this episode.
• Appearance: Has dark-brown hair, pale skin, and aqua-colored eyes. Is lean and 5'9. Wears gray jeans, a long-sleeved white shirt, and black tennis shoes. Is generally weak, but can be skilled with weapons.
• Personality (try to be specific): He's very intelligent, along with being strategic. He's often skeptical and negative, but always looking out for the people close to him. He's quiet at times, but is open with friends.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you may be back for part II. (S2): I'd like to make it particularly far in the story (At 3 people, maybe even living would be cool). But, whatever works for you I'm fine with!
•Extra: Idk, good luck on the story! Oh and this.

Kiria is a mde-up character who is only here for this episode (a.k.a teaser).
She's 12 years old, and is Garrison's daughter. She's intelligent and mature, and she knows what she's doing.

James is Garrison's brother. He's in this episode and another episode too, but later in this series. He's tough and stubborn, but no matter how heated things get, he'll always stand up for his family even if it means he's on the losing side.

WARNING: THE PROFILES THAT ARE UNEDITED MAY BE EDITED IN FURTHER EPISODES.



Mandy, A.j, and Sakai's story

Mandy = Gray/White, A.j = Blue

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Green = Mandy, White/Gray = Sakai, Blue = A.j.

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"Hey, Sakai!" A.j ran along the street
"Oh, hey." Sakai stood on Mandy's doorstep. "You knock"
"WHY ME!?" A.j glared at him. "''Cause." Sakai replied
"Ugh fine, I'll just do it then.." Sakai goes to knock on the door

creaaak

*Mandy opens the door just as Sakai goes to knock hardly..*
*mandy gets punched right in the stomach, she moves backwards.*
"WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?" Mandy screeched
"I-I DIDN'T MEAN TO!" Sakai waved his hands around
"S-SORRY.. What did you want us here for, Mandy..?" A.J says softly

"...Get in" Mandy closed the door behind them.
"There's a kid upstairs, she was running past the house screaming so i got her inside. She says her parents died, she said she's 4.." Mandy looks up the stairs a bit.
"..A 4-year-old said that?" A.j looked confused.
"It's a bit compact for a 4-year-old to know, right? or do you think he saw this happen?" Sakai is confused too.
"It's a she, Sakai." A.j looked at Mandy while telling him this.
Mandy nods. "Come on, I'll take you upstairs, i think you guys should talk to her, i hate kids."
"..Oh, Ok." Sakai looks at A.j and shrugs. "It'll have to be one at a time, right?"
"What do you mean?" A.j looks back at Sakai, confused
"If this kid has seen what they said had happened, like seeing their parents die, they must be traumatised." Sakai explained. Mandy goes in to the lounge and looks out the window. "Guys, get in here, now.."
Sakai and A.J walk in to the lounge, Both shocked when they look out the window to see many lifeless bodies walking past the house outside, growing a fungus-like substance from their skulls.
"MOMMY, DADDY!" The little girl ran down the stairs and pounded on the doors. The 'Monsters' heard.
"CRAP, GRAB HER!" Mandy shouted at them. Mandy shoved her back against the door. Sakai ran and picked her up, the girl screamed and struggled but he just kept hold of her against her will.
Mandy jumped quickly from the door as the monsters broke in, just as the 4 of them got to the kitchen. A.J and Mandy blocked the door by pushing the fridge in the way, they then ran out of the back door and jumped the fence, then ran the rest of the way to the station.

They weren't far from the station, when a wall of barbed wire got in their way. Mandy grabbed a part that wasn't sharp and managed to lean on it to jump over.

"WHAT ARE YOU LOT DOING!?" Some soldiers ran down the road behind them.
"DAMN IT! MANDY GRAB HER!" Sakai tried to get the girl over the fence to Mandy, but instead she turned around and ran the rest of the way to the station.
"MANDY YOU TRAITOR!" Sakai shouted, A.J Shook nervously,
"C-COME ON!" A.j grabbed Sakai and Sakai still carried the little girl, who was now crying. A.J dragged him to the left until they reached the corner of the fence, where there was a hole. The soldiers were gaining on them. They squeezed through the small hole that somebody had dug under the fence, that slowed the soldiers down. They met up with Mandy again. Sakai gave the girl to A.J and slapped Mandy, they were on the train platform, and they had lost track of the soldiers.
"YOU DITCHED US!" Sakai shouted at Mandy.
"BE THANKFUL YOU GOT OUTTA THERE ALIVE, KID!" Mandy crossed her arms, the train came down the track about 10 minutes away, but they could still see it. The 'Monsters' has gotten hold of the soldiers, the monsters were now reaching inside the fence, but they couldn't get in.

Sakai and A.J stayed quiet, the little girl cried on to A.J's shirt, They were trying to get her to not look at what was happening to where they had lived.
The train pulls up.
The train driver screams at them to get on quickly, as one slow 'monster' manager to get under the fence.
The door closes, Mandy goes down one way of the train, and the other three go down the other way.
"You not coming down here?" Mandy turns and glares at them.
"...We would have before.. But not after that stunt you just pulled back there." Sakai glared back.
"See you, Mandy." Sakai, A.j, and the little girl all went to the very right of the train, and Mandy went to the very left, once they got off the train, Mandy and the group parted ways.




People who are in the story or yet to be in it:

@HelloColdWorld
@Huskyyyy
@stelth_elf007
@gavin
@Tyler
@Meeshy
@FriskStep

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Thank you for reading.
 
Wait. Who's the little girl first off. XD
Second, I mean that AJ and them are older
A.J and Sakai meet the little girl when they get to mandy's house because mandy says that "she was running down the street screaming"
Then when they part ways with Mandy they take the little girl with them, i've given her a name

(I UPLOADED FIRST EP OF LE FULL STORY ;))

...in the ep i uploaded since she's then 14 in that
So sakai and A.J take her in like a little sister
 
A.J and Sakai meet the little girl when they get to mandy's house because mandy says that "she was running down the street screaming"
Then when they part ways with Mandy they take the little girl with them, i've given her a name

(I UPLOADED FIRST EP OF LE FULL STORY ;))

...in the ep i uploaded since she's then 14 in that
So sakai and A.J take her in like a little sister
You said that you'll bring in my character in the 3rd teaser In the 1st teaser. But I guess u can bring her in later?
 
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