The Valley Of Death - TEASER 2 (basically prologue 2) (This'll be a choose your own story story)

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Theme song - Ellie from The Last Of Us' version of "Through The Valley".

Search on any browser including Youtube "The Last of us 2" and watch the trailer video, or:

listen to: https://soundcloud.com/dynsay/the-last-of-us-2-ellie-sings-through-the-valley-lyrics

Lyrics:

I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
And I fear no evil because Iḿ blind to it all
And my mind, my gun they comfort me
Because I know I'll kill my enemies when they come

Surely goodness and mercy will follow me
All the days of my life
And I will dwell on this earth forevermore
Said I walk beside the still waters and they restore my soul

But I can't walk on the path of the right
because I'm wrong

No I can't walk
On the path of the right
'Cause I'm wrong


If you havn't heard of The Last Of Us, it's surposed to be one of the best games of all time, it's an apocalyptic game like my last story Himura Sanzo. But this has an emotional storyline that gets you linked in.

The actual story contains swear words. But since I'm not allowed to use them on here, I'll be using replacement words like 'damn' and 'crap' so, idk, but if you want you can replace those words with words you think would actually go there, but tbh i don't recommend it.


Profiles that havn't been edited:

• Name: River
• Gender: Female
• Age (15-18): 17
• Appearance: Teal hair and eyes. Light gray tank top with short jean shorts. 3 small bangles 2 arm the other on the other. Each colour having a meaning.
• Personality (try to be specific): Is daring to do anything, is caring, smart when it comes to last second decisions, Serious but mostly funny.
• How far fo you want to get in the story? Only two people will be leftbm at the end, and if you didnt die you may be back for part II. (S2): Maybe top 4 people.
•Extra: Will do anything for a friend before myself.

Name: Kitsune "Kit" Robinson
Gender: Male
Age (15-18): 16
Appearance: Very thin, meager, messy black hair, no facial hair, 5'8", male, white, looks weak but is very stealthy.
Personality: Fun (but only once you get to know him), apathetic, sarcastic, intelligent, prefers not to get involved with things unless there's a specific benefit for him, secretly not confident and very self-conscious, quiet.
How far do you want to get in the story? I really don't care too much, just take my character as far as you think he can go.
Extra: He flies solo unless he's forced to work with others or he gradually warms up to someone over time.

• Name: Wren Gader
• Age (15-18): 16
• Gender: Female
• Appearance: Mousy brown hair, matching brown eyes. Lots of freckles, quite strong as she lived on a farm (pre-whatever this is). However, she is quite short, and no one takes her that seriously. She usually wears all black and a grey scarf that covers her face.
• Personality (try to be specific): Wren is extremely shy as she was the youngest of all her siblings, she usually just hid behind them and never said anything. She's also very awkward as she fears she'll say something wrong because of all the times her siblings berated her for just that. She doesn't fight for herself verbally as she always had her family to protect her. Even so, she is exceptional with hand to hand combat as her brother taught her several self-defense techniques.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you might be back for part II. (S2): Even though she seems feeble, she will probably be one of the suckers who pull through. Whether she likes it or not.
•Extra: She has four older siblings (two sisters and a brother).

Profiles that've been edited:


• Name: Garrison Miller
• Gender: Male
• Age: 30, 50 after this episode.
• Appearance: Has dark-brown hair, pale skin, and aqua-colored eyes. Is lean and 5'9. Wears gray jeans, a long-sleeved white shirt, and black tennis shoes. Is generally weak, but can be skilled with weapons.
• Personality (try to be specific): He's very intelligent, along with being strategic. He's often skeptical and negative, but always looking out for the people close to him. He's quiet at times, but is open with friends.
• How far do you want to get in the story? Only two people will be left at the end, and if you didn't die you may be back for part II. (S2): I'd like to make it particularly far in the story (At 3 people, maybe even living would be cool). But, whatever works for you I'm fine with!
•Extra: Idk, good luck on the story! Oh and this.

Kiria is a mde-up character who is only here for this episode (a.k.a teaser).
She's 12 years old, and is Garrison's daughter. She's intelligent and mature, and she knows what she's doing. Since the last episode, Kiria is now no part of the story except memory.

James is Garrison's brother. He's in this episode and another episode too, but later in this series. He's tough and stubborn, but no matter how heated things get, he'll always stand up for his family even if it means he's on the losing side.

WARNING: THE PROFILES THAT ARE UNEDITED MAY BE EDITED IN FURTHER EPISODES.




Starting:


Kitsune and Wren's story


Kitsune = Blue
Wren = Gray

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"Everyone on? We're going now!" The bus driver shouted across the yard.

"NO! PLEASE DON'T!" Kitsune shouted to the driver. "MY FRIEND IS STILL COMING! HE'LL BE HERE SOON! I PROMISE!"
"I can't take that chance, kid, Are you certain?" He asked Kit
"Certa-" Kit looked up the street


"KIT!"
"KIT HELP!"
"ELLIE NEEDS HELP!"

"KITSUNE! NOW!"


Kit ran down the street as fast as he could and drooped Akihiko's right arm over his shoulder, Wren had been helping him.
"Thanks, Bud.." Wren panted.
"No GBs left behind, Wren!" Kit smiled kindly at Wren. "Green Bandits are siblings, even if not biological, At heart! I got the driver to wait for us!!"
"Really..?" Wren smiled from ear to ear at Kit. "You're the best! Thanks so much!"


They both helped Akihiko down the street..

"...The bus is going out of the yard.." Kitsune watched the bus while helping Akihiko. They started to hurry.
"It's coming down the street to us, Kit." Wren looked at Kit reassuringly.


The bus stopped beside them.

"YOU TWO, GET ON, NOW!" The driver appeared at the door and got them on board. The 'things' ran down the street, they grew a fungus-like substance out of their heads.

Wren helped Akihiko on to the seat next to her, and Kitsune sat across from them, with Sarah at the window seat.

"..Sarah, What's wrong?" Kit looked around Sarah.
Sarah starts to cry, she turns around and leans on Kitsune's shoulder and cries. Kit hugs her and lets her cry on his shirt and tenim jacket.
"...Please, tell me what's wrong, you're worrying me." Kit hugged Sarah softly.
Wren sees to Akihiko, he starts to wake up.
"...My family, they're gone... all of them." Sarah sobbed more.
"...Don't worry, I know, it leaves a scar, but scars heal.. And we need to recognise that."
"...I can't forget them, though.." Sarah gripped Kitsune's shoulder. "...When we get somewhere, I wanna get the resources to make a grave, atleast when we've got basic needs." Sarah lifted her head up from his shoulder and looked at Kit. "Please, can you help me with that?" Sarah asked.
"Of course I can. I promise." Kit smiled at her and let her keep her head on his shoulder.

"...Wren...?" Akihiko turned to his right and looked at her.
"Aki? You OK? I got to your house and you fell down the stairs when rushing. Can you remember that?"
"...Yeah, I can..." Akihiko lent forward and put his head in his hands.
"I feel so weak.. ugh.." Akihiko looked up at Wren. "...My memory is a little hazy, but i remember waking up while you were helping me and then passing out again.. I can't thank you enough for that.." Akihiko struggled to sit up but then looked to his right and then hugged Wren. Wren hugged him back. "Your welcome, don't worry about it.

"Hey, Sarah, You wanna be in Mine and Wren's group?"
"Hey, Aki, You wanna be in Mine and Kit's group?"

"Sure.. What's it called?" They both ask

"The Green Bandits!", ...Enthusiastically.




People who are in the story or yet to be in it:

@HelloColdWorld
@Huskyyyy
@stelth_elf007
@gavin


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Thank you for reading!

OH BTW This isn't a Choose Your own story-Story yet because this is just the teaser/prologue!
DON'T WORRY IT WILL HAPPEN! LIKE I SAID THIS ISN'T DONE YET THO SO :3
 
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wait
is wren male in this?
 
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