Total PartyZone Island! (Part two Intro)

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SilverAkita

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*Dizzy and Fox both walk towards the right side of the T-dock. Dizzy looks around. The Island was somewhat filthy. It was beautiful on the little ad she got in the mail. But this is not what she had been expecting. Fox also looks around. He looks at the cabin area, in disgust. He was certain there were nice white summer themed houses on the brochure he read. He gets suspicious, but ignores it.*

Fox

: I... I thought we were going to be on a beach...

Gigosaurus

: We are.
*Gigo points south-west of the T-dock, revealing pretty sand and... garbage? Dizzy gives an anguish look.*

Gigosaurus

: Um. I thought you were going to take care of cleaning that, Aventa...

Aventasaurus

: .....My bad. (He gives an innocent look and scratches the back of his head)
*Gigosaurus looks over the horizon again. Moments pass and another yacht is seen. It gets closer. Finally it swims up to the left side of the T-dock. Dizzy and Fox both smile wondering who it will be. A blue tiger in a red and yellow scarf walks up the front of the yacht and waves. Another animal figure also walks up and smiles. Gigosaurus marks off the names "PixelsMedia4" and "EmoBrendan". The blue tiger jumps down but fails and trips over and the panda jumps down on top of the tiger. They both wince in pain. Both Dizzy and Fox facepalm and Aventasaurus tries his best to suppress his pain of laughter. Gigosaurus just shakes his head. The blue tiger speaks*

Pixels

: Good grief, you're so much heavier than you look. What do you eat anyway? Urf... (Pixels pushes Emo off of him and stands)

Emo

: (Rubs his head) Yeah ... Ouch. I eat bamboo.... and lots of it. (He giggles)

Pixels

: Ah anyway! Great we made it!! (He adjusts his scarf and walks over to Aventasaurus, then looks around) ... Uh. Didn't you say we were going to be on a (He does the finger quote gesture) "Five star island resort"?

Aventasaurus

: (He hesitates) Yyyyyyes..... No.

Emo

: Wait... you're telling me this all was just a setup? (Avent nods) And there is no luxurious beaches and spas, or cabins we'll be staying in? (Avent nods)

Aventasaurus

: Nah. You'll be doing challenges which might i add (He whispers) Deadly.

Pixels

: ... Awesome!
*Dizzy facepalms and Fox just look down, both Pixels and Emo walk over to the right side of the T-dock, and yet another yacht comes to view. A long haired girl with pink fox ears and a tail and a boy wearing a checkered over shirt is seen. Gigosaurus marks off the names "SilverAkita" and "Pixll" off the list. The yacht swims up on the left part of the dock... as always... Pixll jumps down and Akita gets super excited and quickly jumps off the yacht , but unfortunately catching her foot on the rim of the yacht and screws up her landing, hitting her chin against the edge of the T-dock and falling back in the water. Pixll and Fox cover their mouths and give a surprised look, Aventasaurus covers his whole face with his arms, Pixels giggles a little and Gigosaurus watches in awe*

Gigosaurus

: Oooooh.... that had to hurt! (He laughs)

Dizzy

: Guys! (She rushes over to where Akita landed) She could be seriously hurt! (Dizzy grabs Akita's arm and pulls her up. Akita seemed fine and shakes off the water like a dog)

Akita

: That... felt awesome. Except for hitting my chin. (She snickers)
*Everyone just stares at her. Akita , Dizzy, and Pixll walk back over to the right side of the T-dock and yet another yacht comes into view. A girl with a flower headband is seen and another girl with glasses and a striped shirt is seen. Gigo marks off "SimplySarah" and "Caitlynnnn" and the yacht swims up. Caitlyn jumps down, tripping a little and Sarah jumps down with no flaws whatsoever. Sarah looks up at the other players, then the island. She squints*

Sarah

: Oh... I totally did not sign up for this. (She crosses her arms)

Gigosaurus

: Uh yeah you did. (He holds up the papers Sarah had signed to be here. Gigo snickers.)
*Sarah unfolds her arms and walks up to Gigo like a mad teenager who got dissed by someone she hates. Sarah proceeds to snatch the papers from Gigos hand and rip them up. Gigo snickers again and holds up another copy of Sarah's papers.*

Gigosaurus

: You see... (He looks at Aventasaurus for a second then back at Sarah) The thing about assistants is that they made about 100 copies of these forms.

Sarah

: Oh I am not staying here!

Gigosaurus

: Well the only way off the island safely is by boat. (He points to Sarah and Cait's yacht, which is already halfway out to sea) But... your ride is already leaving. And I'm sure you don't want to risk swimming the shark infested waters. (He smirks)
*Sarah groans and walks over to the right side of the T-dock. Caitlyn looks down and follows. Another yacht swims up. A boy in a green dinosaur kigurumi is seen hangin near the side of the yacht, hangin off the edge of the rim, and a girl wearing many colors is seen as well, hangin on the other side of the yacht. Gigosaurus proceeds to mark off "Booneh" and "Shaanteee" and the yact swims up the T-dock. Shaantee does a triple back flip off the side of the yacht onto the dock. Booneh slides off the yacht like an actual slide.*

Shan

: Hello all ya good lookin' peoples!!! (She jogs forward) WOOO!
*Fox backs up a little*

Booneh

: Mmm... I knew it was a bad idea to let her eat the double glazed donuts, the extra sweet triple chocolate fudge cookies, the chocolate coated strawberries, and the Mountain Dew all at once...
*Shan is seen all jittery*

Shan

: WOOOOOOOO!!

Gigosaurus

: Calm thyself.
*A black orb like thing floats into view and stops right in front of Aventasaurus*

Aventasaurus

: WHAT IS THAT!? (He stances into a karate like pose, with his left hand forward and his right arm back, as if he were to karate chop the orb)

Gigosaurus

: Relax.
*Gigosaurus marks off the names "Absol1991" and "outcastjack" . The orb gets bigger, and then it shrinks, revealing two umbreon.One umbreon wearing a blue and white dotted coat with white/light gray hair. The other wears a red and green coat, with her hoodie up, pinning down her ears. The male umbreon is seen standing in front of the female. The female walks from behind him and smiles a little*

Absol

: Wow. So much better than taking a boat!

Jack

: Aye, long time, Gigo.

Gigosaurus

: Yo.
*Gigo points to the others, gesturing the Umbreon to go wait over their. Jack grabs Absol's paw and proceeds walk over and to stand next to the others. Absol looks at Shan and tries to touch her and ask her if she is ok, but Shan bites at Absol's paw and Absol quickly takes her paw back and shudders.*

Part Two of the intro! I'm trying to see if i can have an edit button before i actually start writing the chapters. Until then I'm just working on getting everyone introduced cause there are a LOT of characters for this story and is a little hard to keep up with everyone. Anyway thanks for reading. Part 3 of the Intro is coming soon!!

 
 
Oh my. xD. This story is great!
 
Oh my god. I'm not just saying this because "you wrote a story with me in it" this is legit so good. I was smiling and reading it with interest. This is amazing
 
:eek: Why is this so good.. When I first started reading I had a smile on my face all the way through, and this story gives me a hint to never let Shante the double glazed donuts,the extra sweet chocholate cookies and the chocate covered strawberries, as well as the mountain dew :p
 
This is amazing! Keep up the good work! :D
 
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