The Dark Knight's Story

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This is a story I made of a Character and a new race this is the first chapter so enjoy Party Zone:


A Long Time Ago before you and I there lived two forces that ravaged the Earth one was the RaKaCharz protectors of our land sworn to defeat the evil Dragon spirits called: The Draconians who owned their own land on the other side of the earth but wanted more, They wanted to take over the land of the RaKaCharz and claim it as their own. But it was said that only the Chosen One will be able to protect his land and ward off the Draconians.

Centuries later a baby was born and he was named: Bydak, everyone in the village knew that he would grow to do something good someday, but it wasn’t until he got into Scorpius’s Warrior & Wizarding School, that his true Identity as the Chosen One was realised. It all started on a normal day the 5th of July when his class went on a Field Trip to the Brandywine Twists an Ancient forest at the heart of the RaKaCharz land “Im so excited! I’ve always wanted to come here! Some say that one of the RaKaCharz lives here!” Said Bydak excitedly “I know! To think we could meet one of the Ancients!” Said Bydak’s Best Friend: Dynåk “Not to intrude but what is an Ancient?” Said Virk who was the boy who sat opposite to Bydak in class “Well Virk an Ancient is a RaKaChar but one of the originals with ability’s to create universes and use special ability’s LONG beyond ours, they live in Brek which is an ancient sky kingdom where the gods live but most people believe (and there is proof) that two of the eight original RaKaCharz live here in our town but they have not been seen except for one which has been spotted in the Brandywine Twists which is where we’re going today so we might have a chance to see him!!” Said Bydak “Oh, that’s AWESOME” Said Virk who then went to find a buddy to go with. About an hour later they finally arrived at the Brandywine Twists, when they got to the entrance Dynåk was complaining about how hard the seats were on the Grokor.

A Grokor is a huge four legged beast that inhabits the village of Vensha down to the south it’s used as means of transportations (in the words of Bydak’s teacher “they were punished to serve us for all eternity”) each of its four legs are cylinder like with the symbol of a dragon imprinted onto their leather boots and on the saddle it wears to seat its riders. It has 2 huge horns on its head surrounded by a leather cap to protect its head and make it strong to use as a battering ram, its tail is the tail of a lion but with spikes instead of fur. As Bydak and Dynåk enter the Twists they begin to wonder if the legends are true. They end up losing track of time and realised the Grokor had left without them and the worst part is they lost their footprint trail to the wind! They walked and walked for hours on end until finally they found a hut surrounded by a swamp. They made haste towards the hut and jumped from stone to stone trying to avoid the mud inside the swamp, as they got to the end of the swamp they burst through the doors of the hut to find a true surprise.
 
I like that idea except that I will make the LEAD Draconian Dragazo
 
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