The Adventures Of Party Zone

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Ah yes, young one. Today, I tell the many tales of the Party Zone members. Every so-often, I shall post a new issue to this expansive story regarding the members of MCPZ, and keep it entertaining for my audience.

Issue 1 - 12/10/2014
Narrator: Where do I start? Let us meet our characters for this first issue.
Narrator: Hey Dragazo, can you hear me down there?
Dragazo: Hell yeah! Wait, is this peanut butter?
Narrator: Oh Jesus, I have made a big mistake.
Dragazo: This doesn't taste like peanut butter! Why is it wet?
Narrator: *sigh* Let's see what we have next... Ah, yes! Of course, beloved Starminecraftgal!
Starminecraftgal: Hey readers!
Narrator: Great, a sane character. Who's next... oh, no...
ShinnyTheKing: *does 360 in red convertible* 'Sup
Narrator: No... no... no...
ShinnyTheKing: Yo peeps, i'm so dope...
Narrator: God help us all...
ShinnyTheKing: Y'all better check out my latest mixtape...
Narrator: What now? I can't remember...
ShinnyTheKing: Yo Star, get up on me!
Starminecraftgal: How about not...
Dragazo: *rumbles* Oh god... That wasn't peanut butter...
Starminecraftgal: Let's see who we have... a too-white-for-gangster try-hard, a *possibly* disabled child... Why narrator? Why?
Narrator: A plotline, that's why.
Starminecraftgal: You're gonna see a plotline, that's for sure...
Narrator: Okay, have fun!
Starminecraftgal: Wait, no! No!
Starminecraftgal: ...He's gone, isn't he...
ShinnyTheKing: *spits gum* hopefullly...
Starminecraftgal: Okay, Dragazo, lay down, it may ease the pain.
ShinnyTheKing: Good luck, this kid's hopped up on like 5 Monsters and maybe some speed...
Dragazo: *panting* Hey, wanna see my Giraffe impression? BBBBBbBBBbbbbbBBBbbBbbBBbBBb...
ShinnyTheKing: Maybe a killer rip...
Starminecraftgal: Ugh, ew...
Dragazo: Haha, nice Shinny!
ShinnyTheKing: Yeah buddy! *high five*
Starminecraftgal: So there's only three of us? In the next issue there better be more!
Outcastjack: 'Sup
Dragazo: Hi! Wanna see my belly button lint?
Outcastjack: Uhm... I think i'll pass... *slowly walks away*
ShinnyTheKing: Yo, got anymore gum?
Outcastjack: Nah, sorry.
Starminecraftgal: Could it be, a sane person?
Outcastjack: From what I consider myself, yes. Not lame-wannabe thug and caffeine-crazed kiddie...
Starminecraftgal: That's what I said!
Dragazo: So, what now?
Outcastjack: I guess we find out next week?
Issue 2 - 14/10/2014
Dragazo: Hello again!
Starminecraftgal: More like hell again...
Outcastjack: I second you.
Dragazo: Why would you say that?
Shinnytheking: This's why.
Outcastjack: If you keep up your too-cool act, Star will never want you.
Shinnytheking: How are ya so sure, Big J?
Outcastjack: Never call me that again, please.
Shinnytheking: Okay, dillpimp.
Outcastjack: Where in the hell did you come up with that?
Shinnytheking: No clu...
Starminecraftgal: *walks in* What did I miss?
Shinnytheking: *drools like a puppy awaiting a peanut-butter coated bone the size of Nicki Minaj's exterior*
Dragazo: Hottie!
Shinnytheking: *facepalms*
Outcastjack: You don't just SAY that!
Starminecraftgal: Close your texas-sized man-bear mouth, Shinnythepeasant.
Outcastjack: ...
Dragazo: DAMN! *Holds out N for another 5 seconds*
Shinnytheking: But... I... um...
Starminecraftgal: That's what I thought.
Apollo345MC: Hey guys!
Starminecraftgal: 'Sup.
Dragazo: Oh hey! Did YOU want to see my belly button lint?
Outcastjack: Hey Apollo.
Apollo345MC: I like Outcast, he's chill but casual, not inhumanely perfect.
Outcast: Why, i'm flattered.
Shinnytheking: ...
Apollo345MC: What's the matter, got your panties in a bunch?
Shinnytheking: Your kind is not welcome here.
Apollo345MC: You're saying this to ME? I know you don't approve of my lifestyle, but keep in mind I am the sun god, and I will burn your fashion taste. A ripped, white jersey with blue jeans? Are you a druggie from 1994? Pull your pants up, thuggie.
Outcastjack: Two burns in one day, Shinny's getting roasted.
Dragazo: Woah, is that an MCPZ shirt? They don't sell those at Charming Charlie's!
Starminecraftgal: Uhm, Dragazo, that's a female store with purses and dresses...
Dragazo: Is that why the cashier laughed at me?
Outcastjack: Uhm...
Shinnytheking: You know I don't like your ways, Apollo.
Apollo345MC: Sorry, but did I say I cared? Who here heard me say I cared?
Starminecraftgal: *imitates cricket chirps*
Apollo345MC: Yeah, your move.
Shinnytheking: Get, you dirty homosexual.
Apollo345MC: Bisexual, nice try. If you're going to insult me, do it properly. Tool.
Starminecraftgal: *whispers to Outcast* should we back Apollo up?
Outcastjack: *whispers back* He's got this.
Shinnytheking: Fine, just... just... say away from me...
Apollo345MC: My pleasure.
Dynam_Rezinor: *walks in*
Apollo345MC: Look who's in motion, I guess you could say he's Dynamic.
Starminecraftgal: Ooh, need me to save you from that pun, I have a reservior... right Apollo?
Apollo345MC: Rezinor... reservior... close enough, you have my approval.
Starminecraftgal: Coolio.
Dynam_Rezinor: Bruh, the puns... they're APOLLOing...
Outcastjack: Jesus Christ, Dynam.
Dragazo: *giggles*
Starminecaftgal: Oh lord...
Dragazo: *hysterical laughter*
Starminecraftgal: Here, let's lay you down Dragazo, it may calm your nerves...
Dragazo: *snorts* AHAHHAHHAHHAHHHAHH...
Outcastjack: What's happening?
Starminecraftgal: He's having another laughing rage, he does this at times.
Dragazo: I... CANT... STAHAHHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH HELP AHAHAHAHHAHA
Apollo345MC: This kid need some sedation?
Starminecraftgal: As much as that was intended as a joke, possibly.
Shinnytheking: This kid *chews gum* aight?
Apollo345MC: Cut the Boston accent.
Shinnytheking: Fine, is this kid ALRIGHT?
Apollo345MC: Not sure.
Starminecraftgal: I think he's calming down... just be quiet...
Outcastjack: *trips into Starminecraftgal* Oh, sorry! My bad...
Megapixelperfect: So, how's it... what do I see here? Outcastjack getting it on with Star, Apollo fighting with Shinny... and a crazed child? I'm just going to turn around...
Starminecraftgal: It's not that!
Outcastjack: Yeah, I simply tripped!
Dragazo: AhHAHHAHHHAHhhAHhhh...
Apollo345MC: Uhm... this is all a misinterpretation...
Shinnytheking: Actually, besides for the supposed lovefest of Star and Outcast, everything else is true.
Megapixelperfect: Oh bother...
Issue 3 - 31/10/14 - TEASER
Apollo345MC: *wakes up*
*Mysterious noise can be heard in the distance, sounds like Outcast busted a nut in a meat grinder*
Apollo345MC: God, what was that?
Dragazo: I... i'm scared...
Outcastjack: *Places arm around Starminecraftgal* Yeah, what's the deal?
Starminecraftgal: Not sure; Shinny, you there?
Shinnytheking: Yeah mate, don't know.
Apollo345MC: So... what now?
Outcastjack: I'd say it's coming from... *oof*
Starminecraftgal: You okay Outcast?
Outcastjack: Yeah, I'm good.
Shinnytheking: Yo, this homie made lemonade!
Outcastjack: *Rolls eyes* Nice joke Shinny, but the word homie went out of fashion in 1990.
Apollo345MC: Are you okay, Dragazo?
Dragazo: Yeah, *glances furiously at Shinnytheking*
Shinnytheking: Yo man, no need for the stink eye.
 
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Apollo345MC said:
Ah yes, young one. Today, I tell the many tales of the Party Zone members. Every week, I shall post a new issue to this expansive story regarding the members of MCPZ, and keep it entertaining for my audience.

Issue 1 - 12/10/2014
Narrator: Where do I start? Let us meet our characters for this first issue.
Narrator: Hey Dragazo, can you hear me down there?
Dragazo: Hell yeah! Wait, is this peanut butter?
Narrator: Oh Jesus, I have made a big mistake.
Dragazo: This doesn't taste like peanut butter! Why is it wet?
Narrator: *sigh* Let's see what we have next... Ah, yes! Of course, beloved Starminecraftgal!
Starminecraftgal: Hey readers!
Narrator: Great, a sane character. Who's next... oh, no...
ShinnyTheKing: *does 360 in red convertible* 'Sup
Narrator: No... no... no...
ShinnyTheKing: Yo peeps, i'm so dope...
Narrator: God help us all...
ShinnyTheKing: Y'all better check out my latest mixtape...
Narrator: What now? I can't remember...
ShinnyTheKing: Yo Star, get up on me!
Starminecraftgal: How about not...
Dragazo: *rumbles* Oh god... That wasn't peanut butter...
Starminecraftgal: Let's see who we have... a too-white-for-gangster try-hard, a *possibly* disabled child... Why narrator? Why?
Narrator: A plotline, that's why.
Starminecraftgal: You're gonna see a plotline, that's for sure...
Narrator: Okay, have fun!
Starminecraftgal: Wait, no! No!
Starminecraftgal: ...He's gone, isn't he...
ShinnyTheKing: *spits gum* hopefullly...
Starminecraftgal: Okay, Dragazo, lay down, it may ease the pain.
ShinnyTheKing: Good luck, this kid's hopped up on like 5 Monsters and maybe some speed...
Dragazo: *panting* Hey, wanna see my Giraffe impression? BBBBBbBBBbbbbbBBBbbBbbBBbBBb...
ShinnyTheKing: Maybe a killer rip...
Starminecraftgal: Ugh, ew...
Dragazo: Haha, nice Shinny!
ShinnyTheKing: Yeah buddy! *high five*
Starminecraftgal: So there's only three of us? In the next issue there better be more!
Outcastjack: 'Sup
Dragazo: Hi! Wanna see my belly button lint?
Outcastjack: Uhm... I think i'll pass... *slowly walks away*
ShinnyTheKing: Yo, got anymore gum?
Outcastjack: Nah, sorry.
Starminecraftgal: Could it be, a sane person?
Outcastjack: From what I consider myself, yes. Not lame-wannabe thug and caffeine-crazed kiddie...
Starminecraftgal: That's what I said!
Dragazo: So, what now?
Outcastjack: I guess we find out next week?
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Since when am i so weird :(
 
Interesting story :p
None of them sound like who they're supposed to be though...
 
I'm intrigued to see where this could go.

Could you enlighten me as to what this line means, exactly: "From what I consider myself, yes. Not lame-wannabe thug and caffeine-crazed kiddie..."
 
It was response to Star wondering whether you were sane or not (Unlike what she saw in the last two characters) and you said that you thought you were, not like Dragazo and ShinnyTheKing.

Dragazo said:
Since when am i so weird :(
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No one would read a story with all normal, sane, typical characters. I have to throw in some that have a certain trait or behavior to spice up the story. Don't take it to heart.
 
I should be in the next one x)


I want to be in the next one


Make me in the next one

Or else
 
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Apollo345MC said:
*marks as insane* Sure thing, buddy.



And I'm totally a lizard! Sure.




PLEASE SCROLL TO THE END OF THE NEXT ISSUE BEFORE READING IT, AND MAKE SURE THAT YOU ARE FINE WITH THE FOLLOWING SUBJECT BEFORE YOU READ THE ARTICLE. I MEAN EVERYTHING I SAY IN IT AND AM NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR OFFENSE TAKEN BY MY READERS. THANK YOU.
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Just saying but when you put things like that you should put the disclaimer at the top, not the very bottom...
 
Absol1991 said:
Just saying but when you put things like that you should put the disclaimer at the top, not the very bottom...
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It's there because it's there, not because I generally want it to. I believe most should be able to handle the spoken subject and be informed of it's ways, seeing as it is part of our society. It's something more and more children and teens need to be informed on, and need to know about to it's fullest. Homophobia is a serious problem, and it shouldn't be taken lightly. In my opinion, children aren't taught enough about the harmful manners and ways of society and need to know how to protect themselves from harm. I only put a disclaimer in so that nobody could tell me that I offended them and didn't warn them. Plus, Shinny deserves some respect, being the source of harm in this story, just to reassure that he's not the way I wrote him to be, and that the characters are simply fictional personalities in real-life users.
 
Hell yeah I desserve respect f u want I can tell u how I REALLY act in this situation because itsunami sertanaty not THIS and bye the thing about starminecraftgal is soooooooòooo fake I have a girlfriend I will have u know
 
Apollo345MC said:
It's there because it's there, not because I generally want it to. I believe most should be able to handle the spoken subject and be informed of it's ways, seeing as it is part of our society. It's something more and more children and teens need to be informed on, and need to know about to it's fullest. Homophobia is a serious problem, and it shouldn't be taken lightly. In my opinion, children aren't taught enough about the harmful manners and ways of society and need to know how to protect themselves from harm. I only put a disclaimer in so that nobody could tell me that I offended them and didn't warn them. Plus, Shinny deserves some respect, being the source of harm in this story, just to reassure that he's not the way I wrote him to be, and that the characters are simply fictional personalities in real-life users.
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I didn't say that it shouldn't be there or that Shinny shouldn't have respect. I was just saying that it should be at the beginning because some people get really offended over that stuff.

Also, why do you think children don't learn about curse words (most of the time...) until they're older?
And you're making it seem like I don't care about any of these subjects when I just asked for you to maybe make it more easier to read for people who don't want to read that type of stuff.
 
Absol1991 said:
I didn't say that it shouldn't be there or that Shinny shouldn't have respect. I was just saying that it should be at the beginning because some people get really offended over that stuff.

Also, why do you think children don't learn about curse words (most of the time...) until they're older?
And you're making it seem like I don't care about any of these subjects when I just asked for you to maybe make it more easier to read for people who don't want to read that type of stuff.
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No, no. I was just explaining my reason for the disclaimer. And I know they learn about profanities at a young age, the disclaimer isn't focused on profanity. And I know you care...? Sorry if my post came off as ignorant, but believe me there was none intended. Let's stop before this turns into anything more.
 
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