Star Wars: War of the Worlds Pt. 1

[Bheryl]

A mediocre star wars story cause why not? Gonna put in as many of the people I know as possible. I will put in roles according to ranks, This takes place in the years after the Old Republic. I'll post a new part every now and then when I am not feeling lazy... Hope you all like it.

A long time ago...
In a galaxy far far away.....

*DUDUDUDUUUUUDUUU*

Star Wars: War of the worlds.(1/like 87 or something)

Part 1: Introduction
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It was the peak of the war. The galaxy was in turmoil, The Republic had chased the Sith to the Dagobah system in the hopes of finally capturing the Sith General Morfius Drume.

"All Pilots to your battlestations!" The Command was repeated every few minutes, the Republic's best pilots were on the deck of the Voyagion II, They'd been on pursuit of the Sith for six months and were itching to get into battle as soon as possible. Sytrec plopped down into her starfighter and started up the engines, Zanicy stepped into the gunner's seat. Their starfighter came with a manual turret so the pilot could focus on avoiding space debris, and the gunner could drop proton bombs onto the enemies shields.
"Good luck out there guys!" Another pilot, Emoh shouted to them as they took off and exited the hangar.
The starfighters all moved swiftly past the enemy starship, dropping bombs and escaping before they are shot down by the auto defense turrets. As the republic soldiers fought bravely to take down the enemy's shield, Two Jedi Knights were exiting their quarters and heading down the steps towards the Hangar.
"Now, when was the last time we got to pilot starfighters?.." The Jedi with the lighter colored Robe asked their partner. "I think it's been a good 3 years. I mean, We have gone a long way... Smugglers to Jedi.. Mother would be proud." She smiled and removed her hood and patted her sister's head. "I bet I can beat you towards the enemy hangar!" Rafiek ran towards the Jedi Starfighter and climbed into the Green one that was made for her, her droid pilot beeped and whistled as the Jedi took off into the dark void, heading towards the enemy ship. "Gosh darnit...What am I going to do with her?" Sheryn shook her head as she quickly entered her own Lilac starfighter and took off after her.


Low key added in some of my friends as characters.

Zanicy: @Zanya A republic soldier that sure knows how to fight with a blaster rifle and a Vibroblade.
Emoh: @FindingEmohh A republic pilot that graduated top of his class and definitely has his heart in the right place.
Rafiek and Sheryn: @Ralfieh and myself. Both former smugglers that were found to be force sensitive. Both were taken in at the ages of 13 and 14 to begin their lives as apprentices. 6 years later they are both Jedi Knights and striving to improve. They aren't blood related but were both orphans from Alderaan.
Morfius Drume: @MorphicDream A General of the Sith Army that enjoys drinking tea. Not much else is known.
Sytrec: Just an average pilot that might have a major role in this story.


If you'd like to be added into this story, make up your own Star Wars-like name and comment here The ones with the best names will be added in to the next part.

 

[AngryRena]

Very nice I like it.

Also if you put me in here I'd like my name to be Rensuvan.
or if you don't like that name it can be whatever you want. i mean you could name me ravioli and id be fine with it.

 

[fizz]

Ayyy I like it o3o But I don't think me being top of my class is correct xD

 

[Bheryl]

Shhhh. You're only top cause everyone else sucked them ;D @FindingEmohh

 

[fizz]

Shhhh. You're only top cause everyone else sucked them ;D @FindingEmohh

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[reddd]

pls can I be in this ;-; I love star wars ;-; WHAI

 

[spimch]

I'd love to be in the story! Starwars-ish Name : Star The Droid (Onleh Thing I Could Think Of) (Oh And I Loved The Story Too)

 

[Bunnibon]

I enjoyed it, however I'm not a fan of the colors chosen and when someone talks, it should be spaced out.

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It was a cold, and windy day. Everyone was coming out of school when it struck. Trees were falling, houses crashing. Everyone started to scream.

"Sabrina! We need to start moving!" My best friend, Jacob says to me. We start running and before we know it, a tree comes smashing down, slaming down on us.

"Jacob! Are you hurt?" I scream out to him. He doesn't reply. What is happening, and why to us?

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Anyways, that is just my opinion as it gives a more clean and professional cut. Other than that, I think that this story has potential, but I'm not gonna say much as I personally don't like Star Wars.