(Ok here's the first part, leave your opinion in the comments and read the storyline before you start reading this, here it is - http://mcpz.net/threads/storyline-and-some-characters-for-my-story.16000/)
Astro's (@ItzAstroTho 's) P.O.V
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"Tag! Your it Meepy!" I said as my good arm brazed my sister Meepy. A feeling of happiness spread through me. I loved this forest. It had a river and lots of trees and flowers, and the best bit it was right outside our house! "Are you serious? I felt like I was running so fast how on earth-" "It's because your just so slow Meepy, unlike ME!" Kona interrupted. "I CAN go faster then you!" Meepy retorted angrily. If there is one thing she hates, it's getting beaten. "Come on guys dont fight again! Your twin sisters but you act like a cat and a dog!" Moony intervened. But none of us were having any of it. "NO WAY!" Meepy shouted. "FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT!" I chanted happily. "Fine then, so be it! Lets have a race! Unless your too chicken." Kona said smugly, mimicking a chicken and making funny noises. Meepy's face went bright red with anger. "Game on! I can beat you easy! After all, I WAS born first!" Meepy said. Kona and me burst out laughing.
"No offence Meepy, but you DO realize your sister was the winner of last years village race, whereas you finished dead last." I said tauntingly."Besides, your only half an hour older, that wont make any difference." "YES I KNOW!" She shouted. "I was a lot younger then, but I bet I can beat her now!" "Okay then, i'm looking forward to seeing your face crumple in defeat." Kona smirked. "We have to go from here, to that biiiiiig oak tree, to the stream, then the edge of the forest, then back here again, so we go in a circle. You ready?" Kona asked smugly. "Hell yeah I am! Hey Moon, be our judge!" Moon glared at her, but an amused kind of glare. "Sure, sounds fun! Astro, you check nobody cuts corners or cheats, and I will see who gets back first, ok?" Moon asked me. I laughed happily. "Sure thing, your highness!" I teased. It was an inside joke that only me and Moony shared. "Okay then," Moony grinned. "Three, two, one... GO!"
Okay, this looked decently long when I was writing it and took a while so hopefully it should be alright but if its too small sorry ;-;
(Edit: Omg it does look pretty short I spent like half an hour on it :/)
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TYSM IVE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO WRITING IT FOR AGES XD
Atleast it's longer than mine
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