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Diamond u nerd u should have made more of this like 3 weeks ago


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This is told in 3rd Person POV. Enjoy this part, it isn't as long but it hopefully leads up to more entertainment. :) I have noticed that I don't announce who the characters are unless you hear their name from someone else so I'll give you the first nerd, nicoleeeeee

3 Weeks Later

"The robbers were found dead and in the alleyway next to them, all the belongings they had robbed from people in the past year were lying with notes on who they belong to. More will be covered tonight at 9 on the mysterious figure on the". She turned off the TV and put the controller down. "And that's what they tell me, everything but what I want to know" she said. Nicole closed the laptop and put down some money on top of it. The waiter walked by and looked at her kind of suprised by the 50 dollar bill. "Keep the Change" she said and she walked out of the cafe. When she got in her truck, she got a phone call. "Sirius, put the call in my windshield" she said. The call was horographicaly put on the windshield. It was her editor from work. "Hey, I think I got something on the robbers lead. Interested?" he asked her. "sure, tell me what ya got", she said. He moved his camera from pointing at his face to pointing at a picture of a small girl. "wow, you caught the culprit, nice job!" she said sarcastically. "no, no. She was there, she enjoys sitting on the rooftops and uh, well, she doesn't have a home but she saw the entire thing. And here's the cool thing, she claims that someone in a red and green suit teleported here and beat them senseless!", "I feel like you forget sometimes that super heroes are in movies, not in real life", "hey, I found this and she says she saw it clearly now whether I believe it or not, that's a different story but it sure sounds like a good story. We could win a Pulitzer if the paper publishes it!". Nicole sighed. Not once did she look at the hologram after that. "Where you at, I'll go see what she knows" Nicole said. "I'm at my apartment actually... so...", but before he could say anything else, Nicole said "Great, ill see you in five!" and she hung up. She kept driving down the road as the sun started setting. HGS hung up on the phone (by now to put the pieces together for you nerds, HGS is Nicole's editor). and sat down on his couch. He went back to watching TV and eating his popcorn when all of a sudden, a knife was at his throat. Someone behind him was holding it. "What do you know about the Red one" she said. HGS didn't know what was going on but he spilled everything out, everything he knew, except the girl. "I didn't want to do this, but you know too much about me". HGS was shivering but he said "who's 'me'?". Soon after saying that, it was over. He was on the ground, dead. "The Red One" she said and she phased away". The girl walked out of the bedroom of the apartment frightened. She looked around and saw HGS lying there. She screamed as loudly as possible, and the Red One heard her.

ITS BACK OMG :D
jkjk I know u all hate my stories
regardless
I'll try to go for every week
sorry for the wait nerds
 
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This is told in 3rd Person POV. Enjoy this part, it isn't as long but it hopefully leads up to more entertainment. :) I have noticed that I don't announce who the characters are unless you hear their name from someone else so I'll give you the first nerd, nicoleeeeee

3 Weeks Later

"The robbers were found dead and in the alleyway next to them, all the belongings they had robbed from people in the past year were lying with notes on who they belong to. More will be covered tonight at 9 on the mysterious figure on the". She turned off the TV and put the controller down. "And that's what they tell me, everything but what I want to know" she said. Nicole closed the laptop and put down some money on top of it. The waiter walked by and looked at her kind of suprised by the 50 dollar bill. "Keep the Change" she said and she walked out of the cafe. When she got in her truck, she got a phone call. "Sirius, put the call in my windshield" she said. The call was horographicaly put on the windshield. It was her editor from work. "Hey, I think I got something on the robbers lead. Interested?" he asked her. "sure, tell me what ya got", she said. He moved his camera from pointing at his face to pointing at a picture of a small girl. "wow, you caught the culprit, nice job!" she said sarcastically. "no, no. She was there, she enjoys sitting on the rooftops and uh, well, she doesn't have a home but she saw the entire thing. And here's the cool thing, she claims that someone in a red and green suit teleported here and beat them senseless!", "I feel like you forget sometimes that super heroes are in movies, not in real life", "hey, I found this and she says she saw it clearly now whether I believe it or not, that's a different story but it sure sounds like a good story. We could win a Pulitzer if the paper publishes it!". Nicole sighed. Not once did she look at the hologram after that. "Where you at, I'll go see what she knows" Nicole said. "I'm at my apartment actually... so...", but before he could say anything else, Nicole said "Great, ill see you in five!" and she hung up. She kept driving down the road as the sun started setting. HGS hung up on the phone (by now to put the pieces together for you nerds, HGS is Nicole's editor). and sat down on his couch. He went back to watching TV and eating his popcorn when all of a sudden, a knife was at his throat. Someone behind him was holding it. "What do you know about the Red one" she said. HGS didn't know what was going on but he spilled everything out, everything he knew, except the girl. "I didn't want to do this, but you know too much about me". HGS was shivering but he said "who's 'me'?". Soon after saying that, it was over. He was on the ground, dead. "The Red One" she said and she phased away". The girl walked out of the bedroom of the apartment frightened. She looked around and saw HGS lying there. She screamed as loudly as possible, and the Red One heard her.

ITS BACK OMG :D
jkjk I know u all hate my stories
regardless
I'll try to go for every week
sorry for the wait nerds
We dont hate your stories we LOVE THEM!

AWESOME PART !
 
Boi. You dont need to doubt your skills
You just need to be DETERMINED enjoying what you love honestly.
 
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Unbelievable....... <3
 
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