So, I decided to show you one of my stories I was writing personally in real life, that I've been too scared to reveal but I decided to go for it. So I just want thoughts and ideas of what I could add to the story description or whatever to make it even better! So feel free to comment ideas or thoughts about what I have so far!
Title: Patience
Description: Nova had the perfect high school life she was popular, smart, captain of the cheerleading team, and is dating the captain of the football team. Until one day her whole life changes upside down. Now she has to learn to get back on her feet while learning valuable lessons along the way. Now she has the chance to live a better life along with people she never thought she would ever call friends. Mostly all she needs is a little bit of patience.
Characters
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Name: Nova
Age: 16
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Light Blue
Height: 5'5
Personality: Smart, Confident, Inconsiderate, Observant, Popular, and Sophisticated
Sexuality: Straight
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Name: Jared
Age: 16
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Height: 5'7
Personality: Charming, Daring, Disrespectful, Masculine, Popular, and Selfish
Sexuality: Straight
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Name: Clover
Age: 16
Hair Color: Black with streaks of blue
Eye Color: Green
Height: 5'5
Personality: Sarcastic, Practical, Honest, Tough, and Modest
Sexuality: Bisexual
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Name: Ryan
Age: 15
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: brown
Height: 5'6
Personality: Deep, Friendly, Generous, Organized, Sympathetic, and Quirky
Sexuality: Gay
So these are all the characters I have so far fully kind of thought out, but I have some slight ideas about how others I want to include, and I would love your thoughts and ideas on how to make it better! (Don't worry i'm adding more characters lol) But I would love some maybe characters ideas or just any ideas!
Title: Patience
Description: Nova had the perfect high school life she was popular, smart, captain of the cheerleading team, and is dating the captain of the football team. Until one day her whole life changes upside down. Now she has to learn to get back on her feet while learning valuable lessons along the way. Now she has the chance to live a better life along with people she never thought she would ever call friends. Mostly all she needs is a little bit of patience.
Characters
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Name: Nova
Age: 16
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Light Blue
Height: 5'5
Personality: Smart, Confident, Inconsiderate, Observant, Popular, and Sophisticated
Sexuality: Straight
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Name: Jared
Age: 16
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Height: 5'7
Personality: Charming, Daring, Disrespectful, Masculine, Popular, and Selfish
Sexuality: Straight
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Name: Clover
Age: 16
Hair Color: Black with streaks of blue
Eye Color: Green
Height: 5'5
Personality: Sarcastic, Practical, Honest, Tough, and Modest
Sexuality: Bisexual
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Name: Ryan
Age: 15
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: brown
Height: 5'6
Personality: Deep, Friendly, Generous, Organized, Sympathetic, and Quirky
Sexuality: Gay
So these are all the characters I have so far fully kind of thought out, but I have some slight ideas about how others I want to include, and I would love your thoughts and ideas on how to make it better! (Don't worry i'm adding more characters lol) But I would love some maybe characters ideas or just any ideas!