Murder - Haunted House (Part 4)

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  1. nighty

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    <Alvin's POV>
    Five people were left to kill.
    I know where each and every single one is.
    I intend to pick them off one by one, leaving them wondering what just happened.
    Both my tunic and knife were caked in blood, and I have red eyes the color of the sky when the last sliver of sun goes down the horizon.
    Let's finish this.

    <Snowy's POV>
    I had met up with Anime, Kitty, and Timbb. Yoshi was nowhere to be seen.
    I was glancing in every direction, hoping to find a name tag that would lead us to Yoshi.
    "Where do you think he is?" I asked everyone.
    "You tell me," Timbb replied. Man, can he be rude sometimes!
    "How about you guys?" I asked Anime and Kitty.
    Both shrugged, a sign meaning that they have no clue.
    I sighed in frustration. We were never going to find Yoshi!
    But suddenly, a name tag appeared.
    Yoshi04_.
    We had found him! I started to walk towards the name tag when another came up.
    xAlvin69_. We found Alvin as well!
    But Alvin's name tag got closer to Yoshi's. Then, Yoshi's name tag disappeared.
    Alvin was the murderer.
    Apparently, he saw our name tags, and he began to sprint towards us.
    Frightened, we all scrambled in different directions. I went to hide in a hole near the crafting benches, and Alvin passed right by me, iron knife in hand.
    When I was sure he was gone, I crept out of my hiding place. I saw something green.
    An emerald!
    I went to go pick it up.
    Wait a second. That isn't an emerald.
    It's a body.
    Akita's body.
    "Akita!" I gasped. "No!" I cried softly, sitting down and burying my face into her soft cheek.
    "Why would he do this to you?" I whispered.
    At that moment, fury began to seep through my body. In no time, I was raging mad.
    "I will avenge you, Akita," I said to her body before leaving the room to find my last emerald.

    <Kitty's POV>
    Alvin was on the other side of the map, but I still crouched. This game had become a nightmare. I don't know where I am and I need two more emeralds to get a gun.
    I began to walk into a corner. There, I found an emerald. I crept toward it, and I jumped into the little pothole where it was located. I picked it up, but when I was about to put it in my pocket, I heard a chilling voice.
    "Looking for something?"
    I turned around, and there was Alvin, leaned against the wall and twirling his iron knife in his hand.
    "Uh- I- I- You-" I stammered.
    He crept closer to me, and glared as his blood-red eyes.
    "Don't worry, this won't hurt a bit."
    With that, he thrusted the knife through my chest.
    He was right, it didn't hurt at all.
    My vision didn't even blur out. It just went from clear to black.
    I was dead.

    <Snowy's POV>
    I watched as Kitty's name tag disappeared. I saw Anime's and Timbb's up ahead.
    Why weren't they crouching?
    I saw Alvin's name tag sprint towards them, and they were both trying to run away. But they knew it was useless. The two name tags disappeared, and I heard bodies falling to the floor.
    The only players left were me and Alvin.
    I saw something green down the passageway.
    An emerald.
    I picked it up, and the five emeralds materialized into a gun.
    This fight is going to determine which team can emerge victorious.
    I'm ready.

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    To be continued...

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    This is chilling!!!
    but trust me... this won't be the last of MissKitty!
     
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    That was creepy ;-; gave me shivers

    10/10 writing, would recommend giving more discription tho :p but I loved it
     
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    I'll keep that in mind for next story.
     
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    Glad you guys like it! :D
     
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    the one thing that would make it horrifying, would if blood spilled out of someone's mouth XD
     
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    I like making things scary, but not that scary.
    There can be little kids reading this.
     
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    Little kids know more than they seem.. i live by four of them. They are practically eleven!
     
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    I'm eleven... .-.
     
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    That wasn't an insult... all i am saying is seven year olds are incredibly mature for there age... and know more things than they probably should.
     
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    Oh.
    You have a point, then.
    I've become a mature kid a few months ago; I stopped whining for my mom to give me stuff.
     
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    coNtiNuE..! :p
    oMG, this is aDdictiNg to reAd
    KAHSKAKaksnkbskBkkkehdkwhkcksksnxlwbdljoqjs
     
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    Next part is the finale.
    Next part = 1v1 me m7 skrub
     
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    M7?
     
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    Made by your one and only Alvin <3
     
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    dude i just rolled my eyes XD
     
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    Wai?
     
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    Ahahaha sure anytime :>
     
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    Fite meh irl u gonna get rekt skrub
     
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