Looking for Max part 1

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AlmostAlex

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This is my story, well my first story, here it goes! :

Hi! My name is Joseph but my friends call me Joe, well now they don't... Anyways, I'm in the Army right now and we're in a huge war, some people might call it 'World War III' but what it really is, is basically a fight started when my friend and I, Max we ordered a ping pong table and that didn't go over very well, I'm not gonna get too much into details but I woke up today with something very troubling.....

'JOSEPH! WAKE UP YOU MAGGOT!' yelled Guns, Guns isn't our leader but his dad is and he's 'training' to become a leader.

'Guns, tell Joseph to wake up one more time i dare ya' says my friend Huggins, well that's his nickname.

'Huggins Shut up! Something happened to get your sorry butts off of the bed and get to the base!' screamed Guns, he's a huge screamer.

'Beds, that's funny.' says West, he said that because we don't sleep on beds, we sleep on panels of wood.

I roll out of bed and wake up everyone, they don't scream at me because I think I'm more gentle than Guns. I walk to base and I see everyone looking at Tucker, the leader and he has his head in his hands.

I sit down and eat breakfast, 'So, whats going here?' I ask with milk coming out of my mouth.

'McNa - I mean Joseph, please eat with your mouth closed, I mean re-' Tucker stops Guns in his path, 'Son, don't distract him, we halfa get to the point.' says Tucker.

'Which is?' I ask politely. 'Josep - Y'know what? 'm going to use your lastname, McNary, your friend Max has gone AWOL.' I basically scream at Tucker. 'HOW COULD YOU LET HIM?!?? HE'S A GOOD FRIEND, I'M POSITIVE HE HASN'T GONE AWOL!' 'Joseph you have to calm down.' 'CALM DOWN??!?!? Ok, fine, but how do you know that he's really gone?' I ask. 'Well, we had a suspicion that he had gone AWOL but I didn't believe that, it wasn't until yesterday at 23:12 that Baxter came running up to us saying he saw Max leaving.' says Tucker. I shoot Baxter a dirty look. he's a good friend, actually the first friend I met when I got to training camp, before I actually got into the Army, but he knows how close Max and I are.

I leave the base and go back to my camp, no words, no more pain. I decide is Max has gone AWOL, I'm gonna join him. That night when it stuck 1 am I leave, I see people looking at me, I don't say a word, by 2:34 am an enemy has captured me, they take me into a dark room, a light flashes on I recognize this guy OMG I know who he is! 'G-. To be continued
 
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This is my story, well my first story, here it goes! :

Hi! My name is Joseph but my friends call me Joe, well now they don't... Anyways, I'm in the Army right now and we're in a huge war, some people might call it 'World War III' but what it really is, is basically a fight started when my friend and I, Max we ordered a ping pong table and that didn't go over very well, I'm not gonna get too much into details but I woke up today with something very troubling.....

'JOSEPH! WAKE UP YOU MAGGOT!' yelled Guns, Guns isn't our leader but his dad is and he's 'training' to become a leader.

'Guns, tell Joseph to wake up one more time i dare ya' says my friend Huggins, well that's his nickname.

'Huggins Shut up! Something happened to get your sorry butts off of the bed and get to the base!' screamed Guns, he's a huge screamer.

'Beds, that's funny.' says West, he said that because we don't sleep on beds, we sleep on panels of wood.

I roll out of bed and wake up everyone, they don't scream at me because I think I'm more gentle than Guns. I walk to base and I see everyone looking at Tucker, the leader and he has his head in his hands.

I sit down and eat breakfast, 'So, whats going here?' I ask with milk coming out of my mouth.

'McNa - I mean Joseph, please eat with your mouth closed, I mean re-' Tucker stops Guns in his path, 'Son, don't distract him, we halfa get to the point.' says Tucker.

'Which is?' I ask politely. 'Josep - Y'know what? 'm going to use your lastname, McNary, your friend Max has gone AWOL.' I basically scream at Tucker. 'HOW COULD YOU LET HIM?!?? HE'S A GOOD FRIEND, I'M POSITIVE HE HASN'T GONE AWOL!' 'Joseph you have to calm down.' 'CALM DOWN??!?!? Ok, fine, but how do you know that he's really gone?' I ask. 'Well, we had a suspicion that he had gone AWOL but I didn't believe that, it wasn't until yesterday at 23:12 that Baxter came running up to us saying he saw Max leaving.' says Tucker. I shoot Baxter a dirty look. he's a good friend, actually the first friend I met when I got to training camp, before I actually got into the Army, but he knows how close Max and I are.

I leave the base and go back to my camp, no words, no more pain. I decide is Max has gone AWOL, I'm gonna join him. That night when it stuck 1 am I leave, I see people looking at me, I don't say a word, by 2:34 am an enemy has captured me, they take me into a dark room, a light flashes on I recognize this guy OMG I know who he is! 'G-. To be continued
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