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Satsuki M. Miyazaki
{ Currently in need of name ideas, I need a japanese name with Moon somewhere in the meaning. So far all I could find was Satsuki. }

A work in progress male OC, who's very timid and shy, quite the pushover of a guy. I'd enjoy feedback and suggestions for him, Im honestly running low on ideas for him.

Dad: Miko Miyazaki
Mom: Akemi Tanaka
Siblings: Kumori, his male, younger brother.
Nickname: Tsuki {Moon}
Name meaning: Satsuki is a japanese unisex name, with many meanings. Though I give it the meaning "Early Moon".
Personality: He's sweet and caring, but very skittish, timid, and shy. He can also be secretive or mysterious.
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Pansexual
Age: 17
Relationship: Currently none.
Looks: Pale skin, light grey eyes, deep black hair with dark blue tips, and a bit of freckles.
Extra info: He has a full moon necklace, with a crack in the middle of it. And he rarely ever walks around without his Plush, Kiki, A black plush with a flower crown and blush. He had a pet cat, Satsi, who's currently gone.. He's also blind.
Past: His dad got divorced when Satsuki was 5, he remarried to a rather rude lady, they had another child, Kumori, a male. Satsuki wasn't favorited by his stepmother, due to him not being her true child. Because of this, she made up lies to tell Satsuki's father to get him in deep trouble, by the age of 16 Satsuki was ignored by all his family. He locked himself in his room most of his days, starving himself. Till one day he found a cat outside his window, he ran outside and snook it in his room, feeding it. When his parents found out, his step mother killed Satsi, the innocent cat... She began to abuse Satsuki, using him as her own personal slave or servant. He was sent to a school so his parents didn't have to deal with him anymore, even though he's been nothing but kind to them. At this school, he began getting bullied for being blind and defenseless, so he would always wear sunglasses to hide his eyes from others, scared of the truth. The only hope he had in his life was the night sky, it filled his heart with happiness just to see the glowing moon at night.

Issues: He has breathing problems, and has a fear of people. His plush and/or necklace calms him down when he's near other people, mainly adults. He blushes almost always, and has freckles. He also has long eyelashes, sparkles in his eyes, red lips, and that cute little look. This causes him to look feminine, and so he's mistaken as a female quite often. He usually wears dark colors, and his favorite colors are deep black and dark blue. He also adores animals, and enjoys their company.

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I've found a better name for him... Though I still need suggestions, I'm going to go with

Tsukino A. Shizumi

Tsukino Means "Of The Moon" in japanese.
Shizumi Means "Silence" in japanese.
A stands for his middle name, Akeno, which means "In The Morning" in japanese.

I'd like feedback on how these sound!


EDIT2: Ive decided to give him some fears or phobia's, as well as some disorders and issues. ;p

1:Anthropophobia: Fear of humans.
2:Enochlophobia: Fear of crowds.
3:Monophobia: Fear of being alone
4:Athazagoraphobia: Fear of being forgotten, unwanted, or hated.
A N D
5: Social anxiety
6: Anxiety
7: Depression

Honestly, these are probably a lot, but it goes for this OC. He's meant to be the fearful type on the inside, though he may or may not show it on the outside.
 
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Good point, good point... Lol
OK STORYTIME AND A TIP
FOR GOOD OCS THEY MUST BE UNIQUE
I HAD A LIGHTBULB MOMENT SO HERE YOU GO
HE IS BLIND
BUT HE CAN ONLY SEE ONE THING
THE MOON


Also, I think the name is pretty good! But usually with names you need a typical reason as to why the character was named that. For example, I have an OC called Aries who specialises in water magic. I named her 'Aries' after the Zodiac 'Aries' since it is described to be a mermaid, so I linked the water magic and mermaid zodiac theme to get a relevant enough name. Furthermore, she was born on April 10th, so it all fits.


I write stories and design characters for them too. As of yet I have 7 protagonists in 1 story who station themselves equally so that not one person steals the spotlight unless its a certain plot for a backstory. However, corresponding to their background, personality, country they live in, etc you can create an outfit.

Examples:

•My Ice-Wizard OC spent a lot of his training time at the bottom of the world the story is set in, so he could get used to the cold. As a result of this, he goes to cold places shirtless, with just a jacket and tracksuit bottoms. Furthermore, he's Canadian, adding to the cold.
•My Fire-Wizard OC wears an outfit that reveals one arm. He had to brave extremely high temperatures as he lived and trained at an active volcano. As a result of a traumatic backstory and the general wild power of fire, he is absolutely wild. His trousers only go halfway up his legs, and he usually goes barefoot until the temperatures get cold. And since he lives in the Oceanic area of the fictional-world... its not that cold. So, his outfit reveals skin.
•My Lightning OC is african. He never wears jackets unless it was a deadly situation like in the cold. He generally just wears baggy tank tops or a shirt + a t-shirt. He wears shorts almost always with unusually large shoes for walking in places with boiling floors.
•My Shadow OC wears a black hoodie with a rainbow patch and a union jack patch on the arms (since she's British). She covers up a lot with the hoodie, then a red t-shirt, baggy black tracksuit bottoms, and galaxy print converse. Why does she cover up so much? She's underweight and is slightly ashamed of it. Furthermore, she doesn't have a heart but a replacement where the heart would be called a "Magic Canister", but in the other ancient language in the fictional world, it was at first named a "Magicinium Canister" but was just shortened to make it more able to say.

Etc etc.
 
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OK STORYTIME AND A TIP
FOR GOOD OCS THEY MUST BE UNIQUE
I HAD A LIGHTBULB MOMENT SO HERE YOU GO
HE IS BLIND
BUT HE CAN ONLY SEE ONE THING
THE MOON


Also, I think the name is pretty good! But usually with names you need a typical reason as to why the character was named that. For example, I have an OC called Aries who specialises in water magic. I named her 'Aries' after the Zodiac 'Aries' since it is described to be a mermaid, so I linked the water magic and mermaid zodiac theme to get a relevant enough name. Furthermore, she was born on April 10th, so it all fits.

" He is blind, but he can only see one thing, the moon "
;o Amazing idea, i'd clap but I'm lazy and curled up in a blanket burrito so ye XP, ill add that though. ;p
Also, this OC has a meaning for his name, I do believe Tsukino means " Of the moon " due to his light grey eyes looking like the moon itself ;p. I tried, xP. Also, my OC's black hair with dark blue is night-related, or at least I made it to try to be, so it kinda fits? P.S Thank you for the information!
 
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" He is blind, but he can only see one thing, the moon "
;o Amazing idea, i'd clap but I'm lazy and curled up in a blanket burrito so ye XP, ill add that though. ;p
Also, this OC has a meaning for his name, I do believe Tsukino means " Of the moon " due to his light grey eyes looking like the moon itself ;p. I tried, xP.
I like that idea! Also, I added more to the message lol took me ages to edit
 
I like that idea! Also, I added more to the message lol took me ages to edit
Lol, I noticed. You have a lot of detail in those OC's. Mine just wears a black sweater or hoodie with a moon on the back, ripped jeans, white shoes, ect. But he always has a full-moon necklace on him. He usually covers his skin due to scars covering his body. ;p

I enjoy your help and information, anything else you could try to help me fix with my OC, or add to him? <3
 
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Lol, I noticed. You have a lot of detail in those OC's. Mine just wears a black sweater or hoodie, ripped jeans, white shoes, ect. But he always has a full-moon necklace on him. He usually covers his skin due to scars covering his body. ;p

I enjoy your help and information, anything else you could try to help me fix with my OC, or add to him? <3
Ok so

He wears that stuff to cover his scars. Consider:

•Swimming class [theres a shallow pool with handlebars for disabled people which he will use as he is blind]
•He wears black because it goes with the moon.


Ok those are the only 2 others i have as to why he would wear that but now:

Do you want him to stay blind or not?

It's entirely possible one day for him to miraculously regain sight.

•The moon turned purple one day. He put his glasses on and everything looked as it would. Nothing was there. Then he took them off to go to bed and he could see.
•An illusion comes to him in his sleep and tells him he could have his sight back if he did something for him in return.
 
Ok so

He wears that stuff to cover his scars. Consider:

•Swimming class [theres a shallow pool with handlebars for disabled people which he will use as he is blind]
•He wears black because it goes with the moon.


Ok those are the only 2 others i have as to why he would wear that but now:

Do you want him to stay blind or not?

It's entirely possible one day for him to miraculously regain sight.

•The moon turned purple one day. He put his glasses on and everything looked as it would. Nothing was there. Then he took them off to go to bed and he could see.
•An illusion comes to him in his sleep and tells him he could have his sight back if he did something for him in return.

I'd like for him to stay blind, and yea " He wears black because it goes with the moon" Is what I was going for. ;p

Ok so

He wears that stuff to cover his scars. Consider:

•Swimming class [theres a shallow pool with handlebars for disabled people which he will use as he is blind]
•He wears black because it goes with the moon.


Ok those are the only 2 others i have as to why he would wear that but now:

Do you want him to stay blind or not?

It's entirely possible one day for him to miraculously regain sight.

•The moon turned purple one day. He put his glasses on and everything looked as it would. Nothing was there. Then he took them off to go to bed and he could see.
•An illusion comes to him in his sleep and tells him he could have his sight back if he did something for him in return.


Im working on finishing my OC, and I'm close to finished, but I have one thing I could use your help on if you're willing.

I don't know what personality he should have, if you could help i'd be joyful!

Im thinking about skittish/shy/pushover/timid, or mysterious/quiet/pushover/outcast/loner, I could use your help though! Could you give him a personality that fits him, or/and his background? You seem to be an expert, so if you could give me 4 words or more {Depending on if you want to detail it} i'd be very happy.{If possible, could you give me detail/reasoning? You don't have too, just asking.} <3
˚☾˙~Lots of love from Moon~˚☾˙
 
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what they are blind but can see the moon what witchcraft is this
 
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what they are blind but can see the moon what witchcraft is this
yeah what

when the retina can't let any light in, it can't let any light in. science idk
 
I read a story where a girl was bullied and some bully poured chemicals into her eyes and she went blind and she fell in love with the bully’s older sister. It was pretty cute, so if you ever write a story with your OC I think adding some kind of backstory like that would be pretty neat.
 
I read a story where a girl was bullied and some bully poured chemicals into her eyes and she went blind and she fell in love with the bully’s older sister. It was pretty cute, so if you ever write a story with your OC I think adding some kind of backstory like that would be pretty neat.
Don't mind me, I'll just be outside staining the parking lot with the bully's existence

oh that's too violent? ok we'll do it how schools pretend bullying plays out:

girl gets chemicals poured in eyes by bully
girl says "stop"
bully says "no"
girl says "i'll tell an adult"
bully says "please no"
girl says "lets be friends"
bully says "ok"
happily ever after
 
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