Daggered Concentus, Chapter 1.

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Stelthy_River007

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Ok don't blame me because I don't have any time tommorow so might as well do it now while it's raw. I promise you people that next chapter will be more organised then this one.

Chapter 1, Nature's Natural Tornado

Garrison squared his diamond spear into the bright green grass. He wiped the back of his hand against his sticky forehead. How can it be so humoured and bright when we were just in a cold waste land? He looked up at the bright blue sky. Just like his own eyes. How could he let everyone get split apart? Was his power that extreme that they including himself got carried far away? He haven't even meet any of them face to face. Or even one glimpse. Garrison got annoyed and though a rock into the lack. It rippeled his reflection of his short stubble Hazel hair, with his scare ting down his crocked nose. He smiled for the first one in one month. Something was curling slowly up is legs. Garrison looked down to see snake like vines crawling up in a circular way. He quickly snipped them off with his spear. Commanding the roaring wind within him he glided back to his feet. Split reaction. A long jade scythe was inches away from his head. He pushed it away. Forcing the weirder to get pinned on the wall. Something inside her clicked and a wine whipped out and grabbed her. Garrison smiled and jammed his weapon between the girl and the vines. SLAM. The wind inside his lungs seemed o lurch out of his as he hurtled into the air as another branch ones swinging past his hair dangerously. Holy Sh-. This thoughts got knocked out of him like a glass full of water being shattered to pieces. The girl was fast. Deadly fast. Seeing her twirl and twist with her scythe spinning around in her command. Blocking her was almost impossible. He quickly snapped out of his thoughts again as the scythe almost scliced off his head. This was his chance. He swung both of his leg around knocking the earth Control girl off her balence. She fell face first into the deep drown soil. The girls dark brown hair seeming like a camouflage.
"Who are you?" I asked quickly. Kicking away the jade scythe.
"Hey!" She yelled as her head whipped around to see her scythe hovering over clear water.
"You know how rare those are?" She stood up and looked wildly at her weapon. I jerked my head back. She kinda looked like a peacock if she didn't have a white dress. The girl looked at me as if I was a mad person.
"What is your problem?" She screamed at me making me step back.
"Ok, first you try to kill me, and now you are screaming your head off and jumping around like I have done something every bad!" The girl just stared at me. Just what I thought. I commanded the wind to bring the scythe towards me. The girl full of thankful eyes ripped the jade weapon from the air and hugged it. A piercing scream hit my eyes.
"Now you got my perfectly new clothes all dirty!" The girl screamed again.
"Oh would you just shut it earth Control?" I yelled over her screams. She stopped screaming and stumped her foot into the ground. I sighed in relief.
"And for your information. The name is Arianna" I could hear the tone of sassienss coming out.
"Hm, nice name. My name is Garrison" I said. Bowling formally in front of her. She rolled her eyes.
"That sounds like Gary" I looked up to her narrowing my eyes. How she did not say that!
"What ever you say Ari, I think my name is cool" immediately she started to flare.
"Grrr, I hate that nick name!" I started laughing. At least there's someone here. Someone that understands me.

Yep kill me (or try at least) this is raw as raw chicken. But sign ups are still on bc there isn't enough people. Staring: @Huskyyyy @IJollyFerret
https://mcpz.net/threads/daggered-concentus-book-sign-ups.31877/ :Link to sign up sheet
 
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Hurray!
This is amazing!!!
 
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