Continue the story! (HARDCORE EDITION)

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Hey guys, GunterGaming here, bringing you a new forum game!
It's Continue the story, HARDCORE EDITION.
What makes so hardcore you ask?
EVERYTHING.
Don't just post a short phrase, post a whole paragraph!
Let's see the true writers of MCPZ come forth!
I start
also plz no trolling or getting off topic


Her silky, chestnut hair was flowing in the wind. Her glistening, dark eyes could make any boy fall to their knees. I just had to talk to her. A bead of sweat dripped down my face. It was now or never. I clenched my fists, and managed to take a step. *loud noises coming from behind* "Make way for the Bobcats!" As the football team ran past me, I forgot where I was. I turned my head again, and saw Amber. Her simple gaze made my knees buckle, and I fell to the ground. I turned hot red. I'm such an Idiot, I thought, She'll never want to talk to me again! A tear passed my eyelids and ran down my cheek. "You okay?" I heard. It was Amber. She stretched out a hand towards me, and I...
 
I thought this was supposed to be hardcore......let's see here.....

I grabbed her hand and pulled her into the abyss of the deep dark Void where nothing but darkness remains.........

AND THEN SUDDENLY A PORTAL APPEARS TAKING US THROUGH HELL AND THEN ANOTHER ONE APPEARS TAKING US THROUGH MCPARTYZONE AND THEN ANOTHER ONE THAT TAKES US INTO A GIANT BALLOON WHERE WE INHALED HELIUM AND DIED OF SUFFOCATION BUT WERE RESURRECTED TO FIGHT THE TWELVE ARMIES OF AZKABAN WITH THE GOBLET OF FIRE IN MORDOR WITH THE HELP OF GANDALF THE WIZARD TO DEFEAT TWO-FACED SAURON MURDERER DETECTIVE SURVIVAL GAMES BOWSER AND MAKE PEACE USING THE 14 CHAOS EMERALDS TO SUMMON THE DRAGON SHENRON AND MAKE 17 WISHES SO THATWHICH ARE USED TO BRING THE GOOD GUYS BACK TO LIFE, REMOVE DB:EVOLUTION FROM EXISTENCE AND SEW A 10 SQUARE KILOMETER CARPET MADE OF VIBRANIUM AND GAMMA RADIATION SO THAT THE PS4 AND XBOX ONE BECOME BLACK HULK PANTHER AND THEN DIE OF HEART DISEASE DUE TO OBESITY.

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"Hey! Wake up! Hey, are you alright?"

Bob wakes up to realize he was in a 10 minute coma. He realizes that what he saw wasn't real. He sees Amber's worried face......





and then he decides he liked the fake dream imagination better than reality.

*plop* and so Bob fell back asleep and dreamed of awesome until his death 2 days later. AND THEN SHEOGORATH TURNED THE WORLD INTO CHEESE MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

The End.


And that, my friend, is how you tell a hardcore story.

To be honest, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
 
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The return of Bob

He shut off his computer, gazing at the screen for a few more seconds.
Some people on that forum are really strange... His friend had just written a strange fanfiction about him and his life long crush. Yes, life long. He has had a crush on a girl called Amber since the dawn of time, so old his memories were in black and white...
Well... Time to get some exercise... Ha! He laughed at himself, like that was ever going to happen.
He turned his computer back on, waiting a few minutes for it to switch on.

But suddenly his computer disappeared... In fact, his whole room disappeared. In place, an extremely steep slope appeared. He looked down at his hands, which were hooves???

He realized horrifyingly that it was all a dream, he wasn't a human.

He was an Alpine Ibexe and he craves that mineral...
 
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bob had no choice he was a horsey.he ran to doge who rolled on the floor. clone and gunter came giving doge bacon. bob ran and ran he wouldnt stop. it was too late the demiser came its red glow gleaming from the opening of its long black cloak its long skeleton hand gripped its scythe and aimed at bob. it was too late demisers's scythe went through him leaving him back in his room .....
 
He woke up with a fierce breath. His heart was pounding within his chest, his mind racing with confused thoughts and he couldn't help but exclaim: "What just happened?!" He sighed, realizing he must have fallen asleep or passed out, but not before getting an odd feeling. He felt he was being watched. Bob wasn't comfortable in his room now. He walked to the door, pulling on it to open it, but it was revealed it wouldn't open, or even budge. The handle didn't move at all.

He heard a growl behind him, and he turned with a sudden jolt. A dark creature was there, with glowing red eyes. It leaped at him, straight for his cranial as he fell to the ground, the ghostly creature vanishing upon impact. He let out a sharp gasp of pain, before blacking out once more as he had before...
 
bob was now not in his room but a prison.then he he saw him again with the scythe gleaming he hissed"I missed"
"what do you mean you missed" the petrified boy replied.
"I missed your head."bob ran knowing there was no hope the scythe went through his heart...
he looked up to see his school Im back he thought finally his thoughts were finally true he was back. but something didnt fell right...
 
He jumped suddenly as the walls began to slowly close in on him. His heart raced as fast as light and he struggled to his feet, his claustrophobia taking it's toll. The walls were less than 8 feet away from him now and there was no exit, no source of freedom. Bob closed his eyes. Screeching against the concrete tiles, the walls suddenly come to a halt... Bob opens his eyes to see the incredible hulk standing before him. The hulk smirks at Bob before grabbing him and super hulk smashing into the ground as Bob awakens for the 4th time, his heart pounding so hard it was almost as if it could pound right out of his chest. Ripping out the needles and tubing in his arms, he...
 
saw it the black snake. slithering to him like a piece of dust on a vast dry world.it came closer faster every inch. it was to bob was falling but this time to a abyss of nothing...
 
The ghost of Spyro flies up and Takes them to cookie castle to be locked up for life
 
the snake was a spirit and flew away while bob was alone.he knew he had to leave so he grabbed his crowbar (no questions) and broke the bars. while eating cookie guards he woke up. it was alll a dream he felt relived
THE END
 
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